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[Champion Concept] Fres'Bohr, Flesh Leecher of the Void

fatyboomboom·7/25/2016, 10:21:02 AM·4 votes·1,523 views
Putrid Leech

Disclaimer - I take no credit for this art

Summary (Support/Mage/Jungler) - Fres'Bohr is a small parasitic voidborn who specializes in invading another's body to eat them inside out or to augment her host to boost the chances of both their survival. Her ultimate is the key to her adaptability. That is to say, depending on what she uses her ultimate on her basic kit abilities change. Fres'Bohr Doesn't use resources for her abilities.

Passive - Plaguing Brood

Fres'Bohr births a Broodling and stores them in her body (up to 2) after using 3 abilities. When she enters a lane or another champion comes within a 500 radius of her she releases her children. They will make their way down a lane and attack like normal minions until another champion comes within a 500 radius of them. When this happens they leap to the target and latch onto them. Champions cannot be latched onto by other broodlings for 10 seconds.

Allied Champion - The target is healed for 5% of their maximum health and they gain 20% movement speed for 2.5 seconds (prioritizing low health targets). Enemy Champion - The target is poisoned, dealing 5%(+10% AP) of their maximum health as magic damage over 4 seconds, revealing them for the damage duration. The target is slowed by 20% for 1 second.

Broodling Stats: Health - 460 Attack Damage - 12 (+0.5/90 seconds) Attack Range - 100 Attack Speed - 1.25 Movement Speed - 325 Gold Earned for Killing - 15

Note - Broodlings start small but grow in size as they gain attack damage (purely cosmetic feature).

Q - Corruptive Blast

Range - 650 Cooldown - 5 seconds

Fres'Bohr concentrates void energy at a target location, dealing 60/95/130/165/200(+60% AP) magic damage to all enemies in a small radius after a slight delay. The void energies taint the soil of the blast in a larger radius for 2 seconds, slowing enemy units in the radius by 15/20/25/30/35% while standing in it.

W - Body Jump

Range - 550 Cooldown 12/11/10/9/8 seconds

Fres'Bohr blinks to a target minion, creep, or champion, dealing 40/55/70/85/100(+40% AP) magic damage to them if the target is an enemy.

E - Venomous Child

Range - 500/600/700/800/900 Recharge Cooldown - 14/13/12/11/10 seconds

Fres'Bohr launches a broodling engorged with venom at a target location and it arms after 0.5 seconds. Enemies that step within a 400 radius will cause them to leap at the enemy who triggered it and explode, poisoning enemies for 80/120/160/200/240(+80% AP) magic damage over 3 seconds. If an enemy unit is in the explosion radius of the target location when Venomous Child lands this ability will detonate immediately for the full duration of the damage instead. Fres'Bohr can store up to 3 charges of Venomous Child at a time and the poison damage can stack.

Note - Venomous Child when it lands, is invulnerable, visible, lasts for 5 minutes, and cannot stack on each other if cast at the same location.

R - Infestation

Range - 250 Cooldown - 10 seconds (won't begin until Fres'Bohr leaves a champion if that is her target)

Passive - Fres'Bohr can carry 1/2/3 additional broodlings with Plaguing Brood.

Active - Fres'Bohr attaches herself or burrows into a target champion, enemy minion, or creep, becoming untargetable (if in a champion) and regenerating 2% of her maximum health for every second she remains attached to a champion. She also gains access to different basic abilities depending on what she uses Infestation on (Her passive is still active and can still be triggered while using this ability). Fres'Bohr begins the game with this ability.

  • Enemy Creep or Minion - Fres'Bohr attempts to devour her target, dealing 400/600/800/1000 true damage to the target and heals herself for 70/130/190/250(+65% AP) health.

  • Allied Champion - Fres'Bohr attaches herself to the target host, becoming untargetable until she recasts this ability to cancel it or her host dies. Her host gains 5/6/7/8% increased movement speed and Fres'Bohr gains access to different basic abilities for the duration of this ability.

Q - Heal Factor

Range - Target Host Cooldown - 10/9/8/7/6 seconds

Heals the host for 35/55/75/95/115(+25% AP)(+3% of the targets missing health) life.

W - Restoring Concoction

Range - Target Host Cooldown - 35 seconds

Fres'Bohrs releases chemicals into the host, removing enemy crowd control effects and making the host immune to said effects for 1 second. The host is also healed for 30/50/70/90/110(+25% AP) life over 3 seconds.

E - Touch of the Abyss

Range - Target Host Cooldown - 8 seconds

Fres'Bohr imbues her host with void energy, causing the hosts next 3 damaging abilities/basic attacks to deal 4/5/6/7/8%(+1% per 100 AP) missing health of those hit as magic damage.

  • Enemy Champion - Fres'Bohr burrows into her host, becoming untargetable for up to 10 seconds or until the host dies. She deals 10/20/30/40(+10% AP) magic damage per second to the host. The host is grounded and their movement speed is also reduced by 15% and Frez'Bohr gains access to different basic abilities for the duration of this ability. Frez'Bohr is forcefully removed if her host enters their summoner circle (spawn point) or if the host has crowd control effects removed. The cooldown of this ability is increase to 25 seconds after leaving an enemy host.

Q - Life Twist

Range - 800 cooldown - 3 seconds

Fres'Bohr tortures her hosts body and mind by ripping through her hosts flesh, devouring it and using it to fuel her next attack. She deals 4/5/6/7/8% of the hosts maximum health as true damage to themselves and sending a blast of void energy in a target direction, dealing 4/5/6/7/8%(+1% per 100 AP) of the hosts maximum health as magic damage to the first enemy hit.

W - Paralyzing Toxin

Range - Target Host Cooldown - 10 seconds

Fres'Bohr uses a powerful neural-toxin to stun her host for 2.5 seconds and deal 40/55/70/85/100(+25% AP) magic damage to the host.

E - Cruel Spines

Range - 350

Fres'Bohr extends spines through her hosts body, dealing 25/35/45/55/65(+25% AP) magic damage to her host and all enemies in range.

Lore

Normally, only the strongest of voidborn can live long and thrive. Fres'Bohr however has found another answer to survival, literally use others to fight and live.

Fres'Bohr was the first of her kind and the few intelligent voidborn who observed her thought her nothing more then another meek species that would quickly be pushed to extinction. Though her species, which became known the Gora'Bohr was small in stature they are very crafty and cruel. Choosing to use others as hosts to either eat them from the inside out or support their hosts body and assist in their survival for mutual benefit. Though should their favored host ever succumb and fall to another they quickly become the next meal of the Gora'Bohr.

Before long the Gora'Bohr flourished beyond expectation, leaving vast expanses of the void truely barren of all life. This, however, became a problem for the original brood mother, Fres'Bohr. Her children had spread to far and left their voracious mother with no prey, forcing her to prey upon her own brood. In search of something more substantial to sate her hunger, Fres'Bohr eventually found her way to a place rich in life and prey, Runeterra.

"We knew the Voidborn are terrible and not to be trifled with but these creatures... they've done things.. things I cannot bear.. that will torment me for the rest of my life" - Survivor of a plagued village

Change Log

  • Reduced the damage dealt to enemy champions targeted by Infestation from 70/115/160(+50% AP) per second

  • Increased the cooldown of Infestation when the target is an enemy champion from 10 seconds after leaving

  • Changed the Passive's name from "Original Brood Mother"

  • Added a 10 second cooldown for broodlings to latch onto all champions already targeted.

  • Increased the cooldown of Restoring Concoction from 22/20/18/16/14 seconds.

  • Reduced speed bonus to allied targets of Infestation from 15%

  • Further reduced the damage for infestation targeting enemy champions from 40/60/75(+10% AP)

  • Reduced the cc immunity duration from 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2 seconds in the ability "Restoring Concoction". Added a heal over time effect.

  • Reduced AP contribution for the ability "Touch of the Abyss" from +1% per 50 AP.

  • Reduced the AP ratio for broodlings targeting enemy champions for 30% and added a universal 10 second internal cooldown for all champions already targeted by a broodling. Reduced the duration of the slow from broodlings targeting enemy champions from 2 seconds.

  • Reduced the AP ratio for the ability "Paralyzing Toxin" from 40%

10 Comments

MrXonte7/25/2016, 7:31:17 PM2 votes

passiv: 5% +(30% ap) max health damage. 300ap and you deal 95% of a targets max health. you can easily get 500 ap and that would be enough to kill anyone with some magic pen

W: a jump thats acutally a blink? also doesnt fit very well i think jump would be better.

R: minion heal is insane. ally R W: 2second cc immunity would be insane combined with something like a yi. there is a reason only olaf has it enemy R: 1600 +500%ap unstoppable damage??? enemy R Q: add 24% max health true damage to the number above

your ideas are great, but your numbers are a biiig problem. Also untargetability and cc immunity are all things that are generally very strong and shouldnt be used if possible (or only very weak)

Digielf7/25/2016, 10:40:32 AM1 votes

This would scare the chinese kids so they will probably never release something that scary, the concept is good but the artwork of the champion is anti-tencent

Arakadia7/25/2016, 11:57:51 PM1 votes

This champion has 10 abilities. That's too much.

The buffs they give to allies is too strong and her sustain is absurd. If she Attatched to an enemy she gets a free, targeted 2.5 second stun on a basic ability. Her ult has no counterplay whatsoever for enemies.

Cool idea but it's broke. Too complicated with so many spells and too much buffs. Perma 15% movement speed with a cleanse, heal, and aa buff is JUST 1/3 of her abilities.