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[Champion Concept] Raptor, the king of the Jungle

Caraméla·7/15/2015, 6:57:24 PM·4 votes·835 views

Feel free to say your opinion and make suggestions on anything :)

Raptor, the king of the jungle DESIGN http://imgur.com/Tb6SxlZ something like this.

TYPE: ASSASSIN/FIGHTER

LANE: JUNGLE/TOP

STATS HEALTH: 506 (+90) HEALTH REGEN: 7.89 (+0.79) MANA: 333 (+33) MELEE: 120 ATTACK DAMAGE: 59 (+3) ATTACK SPEED: 0.78 (+2.3%) ARMOR: 25 (+2.9) MAGIC RES.: 29 (+1.6) MOVEMENT SPEED: 350

ABILITIES

http://imgur.com/ADgzgeH PASSIVE: SUPERIOR PREDATOR: Raptor deals 5%/10%/15%/20% more damage to moving enemies with lower speed than himself.

http://imgur.com/RCHtqMZ Q: SLASHES RANGE 325, COST 10 MANA, COOLDOWN 7/6/5/4/3 Raptor slashes his enemies in a cone in front of him dealing 20/35/50/65/80 (+100% bonus ad) physical damage. Can be cast 3 times (spends 10 mana for every cast). The third cast makes the enemies bleed for 3 seconds dealing 5/8/11/14/17 (+50% bonus ad, +65% bonus ap) physical damage per second. Neutral monsters, are stunned for 1 second instead. Can be cast while moving or using HURDLE.

http://imgur.com/3kYw1I8 W: HURDLE RANGE 350, COST 10/15/20/25/30 MANA, COOLDOWN 17/15/13/11/9 PASSIVE: Raptor gains 8/12/16/20/24 flat movement speed. ACTIVE: Raptor hurdles to target location dealing 30/40/50/60/70 (+15% bonus ad, +45% bonus ap) physical damage to nearby enemies. Can be cast 3 times. After each cast Raptor gains 10 flat movement speed for 3 seconds. The third hurdle slows the enemies by 40%/45%/50%/55%/60% for 3 seconds.

http://imgur.com/CEhhwTS E: HUNTER'S APPETITE RANGE SELF, NO COST, COOLDOWN TOGGLE TOGGLE ON: Raptor gains 3%/6%/9%/12%/15% lifesteal and 5%/10%/15%/20%/25% attack speed and loses his passive. TOGGLE OFF: Raptor gains 10% movement speed and keeps his passive.

http://imgur.com/99f2PAA R: AMOK RANGE SELF, COST 100 MANA, COOLDOWN 100/80/60 Raptor is put in an amok state, which lasts for 8/10/12 seconds, and crazily seeks for a prey. During this state, he gains 30/40/50 flat movement speed and 30%/40%/50% attack speed. His Q and W casts are increased from 3 to 6, and have no mana cost. When Raptor deals damage to bleeding enemies he steals 5/10/15 flat movement speed from them.

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7 Comments

RiotRiot Lutzburg7/15/2015, 7:04:30 PM3 votes

The Passive is very unique, fun and thematically appropriate. I'm not sold on all of these "can be used three times" moves, though. Especially having three leaps on a non-ultimate ability. The name, title and visuals are pretty generic and uninspired, too. Surely there's a better name for this guy than "Raptor"!

Kaeblen7/15/2015, 7:11:44 PM1 votes

Khazix

TheFirstGokun7/18/2015, 1:46:57 PM1 votes

The passive is good, and the E also ties in solidly to fit his concept. There's clear counterplay and interesting interaction behind both of those. One thing you may want to consider changing is his Q bleed. I don't think it's super neccessary to have an extra bit of damage that 1) scales with AP, making it useless in most builds and then 2) doesn't scale with anything at all. Seriously, most you get out of this is 81 damage plus a measly 30% AP ratio. It's not impactful enough to make the third strike feel different. If you want to make it feel interesting, perhaps adding a brief but heavy slow (like Trundle Q or Talon E) would work better, or making the bleed scale a lot with AP and removing the initial magic damage or vice versa. Don't distribute his power budget too much, or his strengths will be spread so thin he won't be effective at all. As for the W, there are a few ways to make it more interesting. Instead of having a really low slow, why not make the third hurdle steal flat movement speed (he's diving into the enemy team, so he needs something to raise his slow survivability)? Or maybe, with his movement speed based kit, the hurdle can have increased range based on his movement speed, so his escape isn't as spammable when faced with slowing abilities. As for his ultimate, it's pretty crazy, but why does a presumably assassination centric champion grant vision control, ally defenses and other supporty features, along with DoT within a certain area? There's a lot of features tacked on to this skill, but they don't neccessarily suit a constantly moving Raptor who is always hunting for a new victim. You might want to replace this with something different. All in all, a cool concept, and I'd like to see this taken a step further. Keep on working hard :) Reviewer, away!summoner 4