Tamur's Concept Thread

Tamur··9 votes·5,322 views

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RiotRiot Lutzburg2 votes

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WARNING long and can get longer

Heh, that's what she said.

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:)

The Urgot Update2 votes

ive seen these! thought they were really cool!

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Bump

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Added Shin-Lu and Golden Nami

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bump

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Added Scorpion Queen Elise

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Removed Scorpion Queen Elise

Axis the Dragon1 votes

You should remove the "Finishing the Deck" skins - they already somewhat exist (King of Clubs Morde, Jack of Hearts TF, Ace of Spades Ezreal, Queen of Diamonds Syndra, Wild Card Shaco)

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That was made around having 4 sets of card teams

Axis the Dragon1 votes

That's too many Champions in one concept, and would likely cost Riot too much money to make. Either way, it's unrealistic and has very little chance of ever happening. xD

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I'll work on things tomorrow getting about bedtime. Thanks for the reviews

Kamiroo Wolf3 votes

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I'll work on things tomorrow getting about bedtime. Thanks for the reviews

To be honest, Tamur, I've looked at all of your concepts at least 3 times and, I must say, there is room for improvement in all of them. Ability and kit-wise your champions generally tend to be a bit too generic, but I think your main problem lies within the originality of your champions.

Before Vex was the Vanarus' Fury, I remember that she was known as the Saiyan Fury, and I'm pretty sure that's where a good amount of downvotes come from. People LOVE original and unorthodox concepts that could potentially bring something new to the pool of champions already in the game. This can also tie into the kits you create from here on out. Don't be afraid to take your time and really BRANCH OUT from the norm in order to produce something unique! Wow people with something they've never seen before and you're sure to get positive feedback. Just make sure that whatever originality you bring to the table is also BALANCED! The same can go for your lore and champion creation in general.

I'm bad at reviews, but that's pretty much all I can think to say x.x You might also want to work on strengthening your lore, but I don't really have any tips for that other than read more often(to obtain better knowledge of clichés and tropes) and study literary techniques you could incorporate into future champion concepts.

Btw...is Xcedros missing from the list?

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Got hit hard for even mentioning Vex was Saiyans with things like “Why didn't you just make her part of WuKong tribe"

Xcedros became Cel

Kamiroo Wolf1 votes

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Xcedros became Cel

Mhm...I see...

No comment.

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Added a few more links

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Added Lore vs Kit discussion

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Added Opposing Skin Themes I will post Joshua sometime in the next couple of days

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added Doom mode link

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Added Agent Lucian and Dominion Idea to tbe list.

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Removed Joshua and Added Random Skin Ideas

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Added more skin idea links

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bump

Ýones1 votes

I think you should catergorize these champion concepts somehow, if someone wants to maybe find inspiration for a champion.

This might sound like I just want to advertise my concept list but to hell with it.

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I know it's been quite some time since I posted anything new, but I just wanted to bump it for now

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