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Champion Concept: Felsic the Vengeful Deity

Fine Ionian Silk·6/23/2016, 12:05:53 AM·8 votes·1,274 views

Felsic the Vengeful Deity

There once was a tribe of people who believed that the Volcano they built their village around was the home of a deity responsible for the life of their crops and livestock. They believed that the deity, whom they gave the name of Felsic, would only remain satisfied if they sacrificed a human before each harvest. The tribe appointed a Head Shamen to decide who would be sacrificed to the volcano each harvest, and that his descendants would carry out the tradition and lead the village for the years to come. Years passed, and eventully a deity was created from the souls of the humans sacrificed to the volcano. The deity continued to gather in strength with each human killed, and gave life to the villagers crops and livestock in return for the sacrifices. Until one day, a group of merchants from Demacia stumbled upon the village. They began to trade with the village, who were overjoyed to see new goods they have not seen before. The head shamen, however, was not pleased. They believed that the Demacians would infect their culture and get rid of the position of Head Shamen, which would make them lose their power as the head of the village. Enraged by this thought, the Head Shamen declared that the Demacian merchants would be sacrificed to Felsic. The villagers, following the Head Shamens will, captured the merchants to sacrifice them to Felsic, however, one of the merchants managed to escape and make their way back to Demacia where they shared what had happened to the rest of the merchants. Demacia gathered their army and came to crush the tribe, who had already sacrificed the merchants to Felsic. They attacked the unexpecting villagers, proceeding to slaughter them immediately on sight. The villagers, with their dying breaths, pleaded to Felsic to avenge them by destroying the Demacian army. Felsic, hearing their pleas, erupted and engulfed the Demacian army and the few villagers who went into hiding. Having buried them in ashes and lava, Felsic gained new power from the souls of the ones who died. With these souls, he was able to take the physical form of a human. He was determined to find and slaughter the rest of the Demacian army, so he set off away from the remains of the village to find Demacia. Along the way, he met many people and through them he learned information on the Demacian army. He often heard the name "The Might of Demacia, Garen" from these people, so he set off to locate and destroy Garen to avenge his people. He learned that Garen was a member of the League of Legends, so he himself joined to be able to destroy Garen and avenge the tribe who worshipped him.

Abilities:

Passive - Sacrifice to the Deity Each time Felsic kills an enemy, he gains a stack of "Sacrificed" which increases his and allied champions around him and his volcanoes health regen and health (Buffs do not stack from multiple sources). These stacks are lost upon death. Max of (x) stacks.

Q - Volcano Creation Passive - Volcanoes created by Felsic erupt periodically dealing Physical AoE damage to enemies around them. Active - Felsic creates a Volcano that erupts every (x) seconds. These Volcanoes grant vision and disappear once killed or if Felsic strays too far from them.

W - Volcanic Gas (Costs 5% health to use and loses 1% of health per second using) Felsic releases Volcanic Gas in an area around him, dealing passive Physical AoE damage based off of current health (Scales up with the lower health he has), while using this ability, Felsic loses health passively. Volcanic Gas is cast off of nearby Volcanoes as well. Felsic can't use Volcanic Gas once he reaches 5% health.

E - Silicic Persona Felsic converts himself into, removing crowd control effects on him and giving him a temporary boost of movement speed. While Silicic Persona is in effect, volcanoes around Felsic erupt lava that slows and deals Physical AoE damage to enemies.

R - Ring of Infernos Felsic channels for 0.5 seconds before activating this effect: All Volcanic Gas in an area arround Felsic detonates and deals AoE Physical damage to enemies within it. All lava in an area around Felsic turns white and deal increased physical AoE damage to enemies within it.

Ctrl + Numbers (Just ideas) 1 - Turns himself into a puddle of lava before turning himself back again 2 - Stomps on the ground and makes a shake of his head. Ground cracks and see magma in them. 3 - Pizzica, and maybe he could do something like summon a sorta personish form of lava to dance with him? idk 4 - It's a laugh... so yeah... ummm... moving on

Quotes: (Just ideas) When moving "No need to be a statue" "Even volcanoes move, eventully" "Onward I go"

Upon using Volcano Creation "Like having a child" "Upward it grows"

Upon using Volcanic Gas "Hurts more than steam" "Try not to breathe"

Upon using Silicic Persona "Even this is can be my form" "Melting away"

Upon using Ring of Infernos "Bow to the power!" "Feel my wrath!"

Jokes "Oh look, I'm you" "Overcooked to perfection"

Taunts "Try not to melt too easily" "You think you could stand before a deity?"

Upon joking near... Brand - "Oh please, ONLY flames?" Shyvanna "You may breathe fire, but I recommend not breathing lava." Any champion with a poison "For a poison such as yours, I'll give it a dance"

Upon Taunting... Garen "The vengence will be completed today!" Lissandra "An ice witch? I think you should run."

Appearance: So, before I get started please keep in mind that this is just an idea as I suck at art so I can't really draw anything solid

Black spiky hair that goes down to mid-bottom back. Sort of an emperors clothes that's primary colors are red, black, grey, gold, and orange. I imagined him with his shirt sorta having a tail that falls to ashes at the end of it. His eyes are burning red or yellow that has a sort of crack/scar thing running down his cheek that comes from his right eye. The crack is black and sorta has an ember like effect going on in it.

That's really the best I could describe it. So, this is my first champion I tried to make, so he might not exactly seem the way I imagined him to be (a Tanky top laner) but I hope it's still good enough D: I didn't include any numbers and any numbers listed are placeholders because I don't really know League Ratios that well :( So I figured I'd leave it up to the imagination of the reader for the most part (0_0d) Anyways, I'd love to hear your feedback even if it might destroy my soul and confidence in the process <3 Thanks for reading by the way :D And please, let me know your thoughts on him. :D

History of Changes made: Hula dance has been changed to Pizzica. Magma Persona (His E) has been changed to Silicic Persona. New joke has been added.

12 Comments

ValvolineDrinker6/23/2016, 12:12:27 AM2 votes

I love this champion idea and I think it would go far but the only thing is that what would he be like a mage or a tank and what lane would he go in. Over all amazing champ.[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

Dauthau6/23/2016, 12:59:35 PM2 votes

Cool concept! Honestly, I LOVE the kit! The dialogue could use a little work though :-P Is he vulnerable to crowd control during the 0.5 second ult channel? Might want to hold off on the Hula dance as Hawaiian volcanoes are primarily mafic (not felsic). Mt. Vesuvius or Mt. Saint Helens are some felsic examples you could adjust your concept off of if you want to stay true to geology. Also magma is molten rock located underground while lava is molten rock located on the surface, does he stay above or underground during magma persona? I'm sorry, I just think even in video games, science should stay mostly true to itself (even if this is a fantasy world).

Reggie44446/23/2016, 12:37:17 PM1 votes

i like the zoning potential. keep adding and changing things with suggestions you like. :D

Gym Leader Fern6/27/2016, 4:13:54 AM1 votes

I like the story but may I make a suggestion to possibly improve the story?

I like the setting, it's a traditional tribe with traditional values. When the demacian merchants arrive at the village and introduce new modern goods and services, some villagers begin to abandon their old ways. This angers the shaman, fearing that the village's way of life will change. He is very conservative with his values and completely loyal to Felsic, and completely disapproves of the demacian merchants. The tribe goes through a ideological split: half stay loyal to the head shaman and Felsic whereas the others want to adopt a newer, and more modernized culture. One night while the demacian merchants are asleep, the conservative group kidnaps them. However they didn't notice that some villagers in favor of Demacia noticed the crime they did and gathered a group to save the merchants. At the peak of the volcano the head shaman explains his worries to the merchants who have been tied up and ready for sacrifice, openly showing his disapproval for them by stating Felsic is angry at them. Suddenly they are ambushed by the villagers with the goal of saving the merchants and taking down the head shaman. The Head Shaman tries his best to persuade them back on his side but is met with physical violence. The Head Shaman is pushed into the volcano with his screams echoing. All seems fine while the villagers release the merchants but suddenly the volcano erupts. Once the smoke and lava subside the Head Shaman stands imbued with the powers of Felsic and taking a whole new appearance. Felsic takes out the merchants and traitorous villagers, and roams towards Demacia leaving a world lit by fire behind him.