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Sushi first champion concept

SushiKnight·8/16/2014, 3:31:07 AM·2 votes·1,443 views

hi this my first champion concept i hope you enjoy and i would love feedback Elena archer of the stars Role: adc/apc

Passive: Every time Elena hits a enemy champion or minon 3 times a star falls from the sky and hits the target dealing 5/10/15/20/25/30/35/40/45/50/55/60/65/70/75/80/85 8% ad ratio the passive is what Elena a hyper late game carry i think?

Q: Starfire Elena shoots a arrow in the ground after 1 second a line of blue fire comes from the skies and hits the ground where arrow was at anyone hit or close by arrow take 100/150/200/350/500 70% ap ratio by the way this is a aoe spell it has a range of where you can shoot it from is about as big as Lux e cooldown 15/10/8/7/6

W: The moon protection a blast of moonlight comes out from Elena knock back champions or minons by her away dealing 50/100/250/300/350 10% ap ratio slowing them by 30% also giving her a shield 10/20/30/40/50 30% ad ratio cooldown 20/17/15/12/10

E: Arrow barage Elena shoots a barage of arrows dealing at a location 50/100/150/200/250 (65% attack damage ) Total damage cooldown 14/12/10/8/6

R: i have to choices for her R here is the first one Rain of arrows a circle appears on the ground then a bunch of arrows start falling down from the skies dealing 350/500/750 total damage 75% Ad ratio the second once is ultimate arrows of the stars Elena sends a signal at anywhere on the map then the goddes of the moon shoots down the ultimate arrow the stars dealing 350/450/700 90% ap ratio also slowing anyone hit by 80% the arrow takes 5 second to land it radius is as big as malzahar's null zone

well there my champion concept i really hope you enjoyed this champion concept and please leave feedback for my first champion concept and sorry if this sounds op i really don't know how to balance champion xD anyway i might add lore soon and what she says but hope you enjoyed and bye summoners

Stats Hp:405 +40 per level mana:305 +30 per level speed: 325 health regen :1.0 +0.5 mana regen :1.0 +0.5 armor :25 + 3 magic resits : 30 sorry im not really good at doing stats T.T okay trying to do the lore Elena is the youngest of the 5 sisters all of her sisters where raise and born by the goddes of the moon each sister had diffrent powers and skill Elena was the most skilled with the bow all of the sister where impressed even the goddes of the moon herself was impressed that's when the next day the goddes of the moon gave Elena one of the great 6 moon crafted weapons the bow of the stars was the second more powerful bow of the moon the first being the goddes bow itself but the bow was powerful..powerful to take down a dragon in one hit when it was the full moon....when she was 13 she could hit a target with her eyes close when she was 15 she could stand her own against the oldest sister Deanna who had most powerful controll over the power of the moon and stars but all sister grew stronger over time the next day Elena wanted to show Valoran her skills with the bow so she decided to join the leauge she was acepted to join the leauge she was ready to face off all the other powerful champions on the field of justice "There will be one day all 5 sisters will be needed to face there ultimate fear" -Goddes of the moon

16 Comments

SushiKnight8/16/2014, 3:31:41 AM3 votes

Which ult do you like best First one or the Second one leave a comment and tell me please :D?

Elemon8/16/2014, 4:00:39 PM2 votes

Hmmmmmm... I must admit, I really like this idea. I've tried to make a balanced hybrid AP/AD champion that rewards building hybrid for a while, but haven't been able to... However, there are a few things I've noticed... (And note that I don't know how to balance champions, either, so I'm not going to be getting into the raw damage amounts much.)

  1. Your scalings (by level) are a little weird... Other than MF's ult (which I have no clue why it doesn't), I'm pretty sure every level scaling boosts its ability by the same amount each level (except some passives)... Yours often don't.
  2. Her E seems a little wonky. It seems like it might be difficult to use in a teamfight, but would be really overpowered in laning (depending on its cooldown). I feel like the damage would be better if all of the shots dealt reduced damage (maybe around 50% each?) so you couldn't just stack AD and one-shot everyone.
  3. She doesn't really have much of an incentive to ADC. Her passive makes her want to get attack speed, but she could just ignore it. Her E would make her want AD, but she could just use it for the passive proc. Her shield scales on AD, but 5% AD is a little pathetic.
  4. As for her ult, it all depends on a few things. I personally don't really like just direct damage on ADC ults (like number 1), but it could work for her. I really like the idea of her second ult, but it all depends on a few things. First off, how large is the radius? Secondly, does it give a targeting indicator? If it does, it's probably going to be easy to dodge... Personally, I imagined it as a small AoE (approx. the size of Malzahar's Null Zone) with no targeting indicator so it's hard to hit, but not insanely easy to dodge.

TL;DR: Level scalings are odd, E might need nerf, people probably wouldn't ADC with her, I prefer ult 2.

SushiKnight8/17/2014, 1:06:42 AM1 votes

i really wish people but more feedback......... i really need to know how i could approve