[Champion Concept] O'Riley -- The MileLong Sharpshooter

Fite2Live·11/14/2017, 10:36:13 PM·4 votes·630 views

O'Riley -- The MileLong Sharpshooter

Primary Role: Jungler (Could go adc or top, but not recommended) Resource: Mana

Stats:

Attack Damage: 66 - 120 Attack Speed: 0.70 - 1.06 Movement Speed: 365 Armor: 40 - 80 Magic Resist: 35 - 75

Abilities:

Passive: First Part: From a mile away (Rifle)-- While O'Riley is using her rifle, her auto attacks have extremely long range (800 units), but they become line skill shots that will stop on the first enemy hit, they will also do more damage depending on how far they travel. (0 -- 600 units does normal damage... 600 -- 750 units, deals 10% more damage.... 750 -- 800 units, her attacks deal 25% bonus damage). O'Riley also only has 6 rounds per clip and will have to reload.

Second Part: DogTags (Knife) -- Whenever O'Riley kills an enemy while using her knife, she will collect their dog tags, for each dog tag she does 1% Max hp Bonus damage to that champion. (Dog Tags collected stack, and will stack indefinitely). Also, when ever O'Riley dies, she will drop the dog tags of the champ who killed her, the dog tag will remain on the ground for 5 seconds, and will disappear is not picked up. When an enemy picks up their dog tags from killing O'Riley, they will remove 1 stack from her.

Q: Evade / Tactical Slide -- (50/55/60/65/70 MANA).

Evade (Rifle): O'Riley rolls 350 units in a target direction, if she rolls into a bush, for the next 3 seconds, her next basic attack will deal 5% of the enemies max health as bonus magic damage. 10/9/8/7/6 second cool down

Tactical Slide: O'Riley will slide 350 units in a direction, if she hits an enemy while sliding she will deal 45/55/65/75/85 (+50%AD) Physical Damage to all enemies hit.

W: Adapt (Toggle) -- (NO COST)(3 second cooldown)

Toggle On (knife) - O'Riley goes into close quarters combat mode, putting her rifle on her back and taking out her combat knife, gaining 10/15/20/25/30 movement speed, different abilities and losing 650 basic attack range

Toggle Off (rifle) - O'Riley puts her knife away, and takes out her rifle. Gaining 650 basic attack range and different abilities. But losing 10 movement speed.

E: Tripwire / Low Blow

Tripwire (Rifle): (35 MANA). O'Riley sets an invisible tripwire on the ground, when an enemy walks into it, it will shoot a small needle into their leg, dealing 150 (+20%AP) magic damage, and slowing them by 25% for 2 seconds, then rooting them for 3 seconds to remove the needle. Granting true sight for duration of slow and root. 20/18/16/14/12 second cool down. Tripwire lasts for 3 minutes.

Low Blow (Knife: (45 MANA). O’Riley does a low spin, slashing the legs of all enemies hit, dealing 60/70/80/90/100 (+65%AD) physical damage and slowing all enemies hit by 45% for 1.5 seconds.

R: LongShot (Rifle) -- (150 MANA) O'Riley briefly becomes untargetable, and jumps on top of the nearest terrain for 10 seconds, once there she becomes camouflaged and will be revealed by enemy control wards, towers and if an enemy champion walks to close. While on terrain she will channel for 10 seconds, during the channel, a small lazer light will come from her location in what ever direction she's pointed in (where the cursor is) and the light is 6000 units long, and during the 10 second channel, every 3 seconds a thermal pulse will be emitted showing the locations of all enemies affected at the moment they are hit (like a Sweeping lens). At any point O'Riley can fire 1 shot, that will travel along the lazer light, the shot has a narrow hitbox (like jhins w), the shot travels the full 6000 units or stops at the first enemy champion hit, dealing 200/400/600 (+80%AD) Physical damage_(If the shot travels more than 1500 units)_, and granting sight of the target for 2 seconds (Unless killed). (150/120/90 second cooldown) (This ability can only be used while Adapt (W) is toggled off) (IF O'Riley moves during the channel it will cancel) (If the shot travels less than 1500 units, it will only deal 100/150/200 +40%AD physical damage.

One Woman Army (Knife) -- (150 MANA) O'Riley becomes camouflaged and gains a large increase in movement speed. Enemy control wards and towers reveal O'Riley, as does walking directly in front of an enemy champion. Camouflage lasts 15 seconds, or until O'Riley attacks, is attacked, or revealed. If O'Riley attacks an enemy while remaining unseen, her attack deals 300/400/500 (+50% AD) physical damage to the target, as well as causing bleeding for 5 seconds that deals 1/2/3% of their maximum health per second. If O'Riley gets revealed before attacking, her attack deals 100/200/300 (+15% AD) physical damage, but does not cause bleeding. Also, if O'Riley kills an enemy champion, and/or becomes unseen by the enemy team for 2 seconds, she will become camouflaged again and the camouflage duration is increased by 3/4/5 seconds.

Cooldown: 150/120/90 seconds.

O'Riley: https://imgur.com/TwI6OrY

Armaments:

LRS MK1 Sniper Rifle: https://imgur.com/iWHzsrn

CC701 Combat Knife: https://imgur.com/3bU1kpg

Please comment your thoughts, any feedback on changes is accepted. Thanks!

10 Comments

Kavren205511/15/2017, 7:01:23 AM3 votes

Hey I like this champion as I really want a true long range champ. I do have a few ideas.

Right off the bat just for clarity sake put Knife/rifle beside the names of abilities.

The picture of her doesn't "fit" league but I think it would be nice to still look more modern.

IMO the passive is to similar to Khazix Kha'Zix. As I said I think there should be a true sniper. I would say that the It could still be that but should at least add that when you have the rifle on instead of having AA's you have a long range skill shot, could cost mana per shot, does lot's of dmg and a reload CD.

The tripwire should either have a longer root or I think it could be similar to Zoe's sleep. I mean to say you start slowed for (EX) 1 second then rooted.(Like being pulled up in a trap)

I will say that a majority of the skills seem like 2 other abilities combined but I know it can be hard to find original ideas. I do feel like we need a champ to fill this niche role, being accurate and long range skillshots.

This has lot's of potential, keep it up!

0racle091211/16/2017, 3:53:57 PM1 votes

Sounds far too similar to Caitlyn imo, and not just because of their similar concepts, but of their kits too. Her E is basically Caits W, and her Q seems somewhat similar to Cait's E imo. Personally, I like the idea of this hybrid soldier champ, however she just seems too similar to Cait's playstyle and I'd be careful too not to intrude on Jayce's uniqueness either if you were to change it anymore

DrTanks11/16/2017, 6:03:47 PM1 votes

I like her R ability, but I think having another R for when she uses her knife would be good. Since using her knife gives her a different Q and E, it wouldn't feel right if she didn't have a different R as well.

I think a good idea for it would be something like this: Active: O'Riley becomes camouflaged and gains a large increase in movement speed. Enemy control wards and towers reveal O'Riley, as does walking directly in front of an enemy champion. Camouflage lasts 15 seconds, or until O'Riley attacks, is attacked, or revealed. If O'Riley attacks an enemy while remaining unseen, her attack deals 300/400/500 (+50% AD) physical damage to the target, as well as causing bleeding for 5 seconds that deals 1/2/3% of their maximum health and slows by 5/10/15%. If O'Riley gets revealed before attacking, her attack deals 100/200/300 (+15% AD) physical damage, but does not cause bleeding. Mana Cost: 150 mana Cooldown: 150/120/90 seconds.

Let me know if you like this idea. I like your champion a lot :D

Fullmetallic11/17/2017, 8:27:28 PM1 votes

I like it