Vex The Vanaras' Fury

Tamur·6/27/2015, 8:52:08 PM·4 votes·3,755 views

Vex The Vanaras' Fury

Appearance: None of these are my art

Classic

http://orig10.deviantart.net/aa4a/f/2009/039/6/d/anthro_sunset_by_pink_ninja.jpg

Skin


Stats Health: 416.28 (+76 per level) Source: Fury 100 Attack Damage: 55 (+3.5 per level) Attack Speed: 0.625 (+1.9% per level) Movement Speed: 345 Health Regen: 7.84 (+0.5 per level) Armor: 27.536 (+2.7 per level) Magic Resist: 32.1 (+1.25 per level)

Innate - Divine Fury

Vex gains 5 fury per basic attack and 10 fury upon killing a champion or Large Monster or Large minion. Additionally Vex uses her anger to empower her stats and abilities. Additionally Vex stores charges of divine energy every X seconds or killing a champion which power Divine Bolts and Divine Crash. Max 4 charges

Vex gains

+1 AD per every 10 fury +2% AS per every 4 fury +1 Armor per every 3 fury +1 Magic Resist per every 3 fury +1 bonus damage to abilities per point of fury

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource_images/11/icons_10815_btn.jpg Q - Phantom Strike

(Passive) auto-attacks will Rend based on 15% AD true damage per .5 seconds for 1 seconds. Target cannot be affected by this for 2 seconds after the rend stops.

Vex turns invisible for a few seconds. While stealth Vex gains 10/20/30/40/50 AD and her next attack will apply double rend from passive. If Vex attacks or uses an ability she comes unstealthed.

Self Buff Duration: 4 seconds No Cost CD: 26/24/22/20/18 seconds

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource_images/8/icons_7175_btn.jpg W - Divine Bolts:

Vex releases a radiant energy from her hands in a straight line dealing 60/70/80/90/100 +50% AP. If the a target is hit with 2 consecutive bolts that target is slowed by 20%, if the target is hit with 3 consecutive bolts that target is slowed by 40%, if a target is hit with all 4 bolts that target is stunned for 1 second. Additionally Vex is able to roll a short distance towards the cursor for a brief time after each shot (similar mechanic to Kalista but functions as a roll like Vayne)

Cost 1 charge and 25 fury Skill Shot Range 500 CD 0.75 seconds (static) Animation: http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20090324175904/dragonball/es/images/2/23/KamehamehaGoku.gif but can roll in between shots

E - Relentless Rage/Channeled Rage

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Vex Meditates briefly to calm herself, allowing her to recover from her last fight.

(Relentless Rage)

Vex's Health regeneration is reduced by an effectiveness of 50/55/60/65/70% While toggled off giving her 25/27.5/30/32.5/35% bonus Lifesteal.

(Channeled Rage)

Vex's Health regeneration is increased to normal while in combat, and doubled while out of combat. Her Bonus MR and Armor that is gained from her passive is increased by 30/35/40/45/50%.

While Channeled Rage is active, Vex loses 2 Fury per second, doubled while not in combat. If she reaches 0 Fury, Her E toggles to Relentless Rage and can not be toggled again for 5 seconds.

Ult Divine Crash

Vex calls back to her days under the Master and one of his most powerful techniques as she channels briefly at target location before causing a 360° shock wave to knock enemy units away from the center and deals 100/150/200 + 40% total Magic Resist and AD magic damage. Any units that hits any wall or structure are dealt 50/75/100% of her AD as magic damage and are stunned for 1 second.

No Cost or all Charges from Divine Fury Range 1000 AoE 600 CD 90/60/30 seconds


Quotes


Dance

https://media3.giphy.com/media/YTtqB2j5EN7IA/200w_d.gif


Game-play


Lore:

I was born amongst of human like monkeys called the Vanara in the Plague Jungle. But this is where I once called home. http://www.renomartialarts.com/kung_fu_shaolin_temple_china.bmp Just a small temple south east of Pitover close to the Zaun boarder. I spent most of 14 years training and learning scripture. That all changed the day I met him. His name is Eos a master of melee combat. He was looking for a man named Jax. One of the disciples Gorrsai challenged him and lost. Master Shin invited Eos to stay the night. I was asked to show our guest around and that was first time I heard the name Ahimoth. When I asked him “how he got so strong?” “training in the most dangerous places Valoran " he said The next morning Eos said farewell and continued his search. That afternoon I set to train the way Eos had.

4 years has passed and I've nearing covered the mainland and I've improved so much Master would be proud. Tomorrow I will be nearing home and I can't to see the look on peoples faces when I arrive. That night I had what I thought was dream turned into nightmare ...

Pitover http://static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/11111/111114816/3035772-3175300233-City..jpg

Zaun http://thecripplegate.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/Sylmar-fire-fog.jpg

Home http://wallfon.com/walls/fantasy/ruined-temples-and-monks-wallpaper-for-your-desktop-on-your-fantasy.jpg

When I awoke I ran for only to the temple only to find it wasn't a dream. My home lay in ruins. I found Master Shin near dead but when I went to treat his wounds he refused and told me Gorrsai betrayed the order now serves Ahimoth. He ordered me take what scriptures remain go take them to Vishas in Ionia. I did as ordered I didn't get a chance bury my master. When the ship dock at Ionia it seems I wasn't the only one there seeking Eos. I placed the scriptures at Vishas' feet and began the initiation for Eos. It took me 6 hours to do it but this island is down 100 more dummies. Not much can stand the Combo. When I returned “What took so long? asked Eos" “Lost focus I replied" “Is it going to a problem? asked Sol" “no it won't I replied." as I started towards Sol's test I over heard “Interesting said Vishas" “What is it? asked Kaizer" “It seems the monks of her order went to great lengths to seal a greater power with in her said Vishas" “Are you going to unseal it? asked Kaizer" “No it seems Master Shin was looking for a way to reroute this power." said Vishas "So he wants you to finish what he started? Kaizer asked" "No I believe she has already started said Vishas" "How do you kn... never mind said Kaizer" As the wraiths made their way closer I used 3 of the 4 Divine Bolts merely to position myself then I unleashed the power Vishas and Kaizer discussed and released my final bolt into all 5 Wraiths. As I walked towards the crowd my only thoughts were on Gorrsai and the places he would hide.

That night I had another vision which lead me to Gorrsai

Cave entrance https://kootenayproperty.files.wordpress.com/2012/05/dsc_4424.jpg

Gorrsai (Gore Sai ) http://i1.wp.com/venturebeat.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/12/Evolve-Wraith-Monster.jpg?fit=800%2C600 When I awoke mid morning to find everyone were finishing preparing to engage their targets. Vishas was offering teleportation to those who wanted it. I took him up on the offer and asked to be placed at edge of the temple grounds. When I arrived the temple I was greeted by none other than Gorrsai. We wasted no time remodeling the landscape with each other. He got the upper hand when I miss judged his width of his energy wave. he dragged me into the cave where he had erected an alter to sacrifice unto Ahimoth. my bonds were enchanted tree roots which could hold me in my current state. "Struggle all want no-one has escaped." "Soon you be one Ahimoth said Gorrsai" As Gorrsai moved closer I readied my surprise. He raised his claw and I use my inner power to break free of my bonds. A fear rushed over Gorrsai as I broke the bonds. I grabbed his head and disciplined him the way Master Shin had taught us by banging his head upon the alter and the sides of the cave as hard as I could until I was sure the life force had left his body. Master always taught me never to relish in the death of an enemy but when it came to Gorrsai but I couldn't help myself. A hour later I began to discipline myself until I heard Master Shin telling me to stop. I looked up and see Master Shin's spirit for a second and then he was gone. After I recuperated I heard a voice in my mind it was Vishas telling me to meet the others for the final confrontation with Ahimoth.

48 Comments

Gunpoint7/6/2015, 7:43:01 PM3 votes

Stop bumping this.

Tamur6/30/2015, 3:41:22 AM1 votes

Bump

Tamur7/1/2015, 6:40:37 PM1 votes

Made changes

Tamur7/2/2015, 5:58:00 PM1 votes

Made some changes to lore

Tamur7/6/2015, 3:44:02 PM1 votes

Made changes

Tamur7/7/2015, 1:40:01 PM1 votes

Made changes

Tamur7/13/2015, 8:48:34 PM1 votes

Made changes

Morrofox7/21/2015, 4:29:41 AM1 votes

MonkeyKing wants this

Digielf7/21/2015, 4:38:04 AM1 votes

wall of text

Tamur7/23/2015, 11:44:15 PM1 votes

Which Classic skin is better?

Kamiroo Wolf7/30/2015, 9:35:56 PM1 votes

Yo, Tamur!

Here are the results of your champion's judgements:

Lore: 11/20 points Theme: 11/15 points LAS(Lore Ability Synergy): 7/15 points Abilities/Kit: 10/20 points Creativity: 5/15 Kit Cohesion Synergy: 8/10

+5 From secret lore challenge!

Overall Score: 57/95 points!

Room for improvement. Clearer text, more originality, but a good kit overall!

Tamur7/30/2015, 10:31:57 PM1 votes

removed first classic art and the contest part of Lore

Tamur8/3/2015, 6:10:55 PM1 votes

made changes

Axis the Dragon8/4/2015, 5:45:09 AM1 votes

Passive is interesting. It could use some work to make it more clear but otherwise it's pretty cool.

Q is a a different take on Riven's Q, which, by itself, isn't too bad of an idea. However, the CD reset on kill and the quakes make this spell too strong. You're gonna have to tone down those numbers or change some of the spell's mechanics.

W costs Max Health and then instantly heals you after a delay? Wat? What's the point of the health cost if the heal covers it entirely? There's no tradeoff here - if you're not 100%, you basically use it whenever it's not on CD. That's inherently bad design. I don't know about the raw numbers, but make it so the heal is over time (preferably a long period, like 6 seconds) so that enemies can counteract your Heal with harass. As it stands, your W has no counterplay outside of maybe "try to CC her in the 0.5 seconds she's channeling". 0.5 seconds is basically nothing, by the way.

I understand that your Champ is supposed to be mobile, but this is too mobile. Have 2 spammable dash spells that both deal damage is also inherently bad design. I'm aware that the cooldowns of both Q and E are long, but they're still spammable within themselves (can be cast 3 and 4 times in a row, for Q and E respectively).

Lol that ult. Remove the stats buff, that's just stupid. A 50% increase to all stats is god-tier broken. You have 250 AD? Lolno make that 375. You have 400 AP? Naaaah it's actually 600. You have 2.8K HP? Pfff make that 4200. 100 Armor/MR? Lololol 150.

It's ironic that she's Shin-Lu's student, because she's much, much stronger than he is.

Tamur8/10/2015, 5:28:49 PM1 votes

made changes to Q and E

Tamur8/12/2015, 6:31:01 PM1 votes

made changes to W and removed stat boost from Ult

Tamur8/18/2015, 6:05:21 PM1 votes

made changes

Tamur8/20/2015, 4:45:46 PM1 votes

modified W and is there an artist who can draw her as part of Wukong's tribe?

Tamur8/29/2015, 6:23:52 PM1 votes

added second skin idea ( both represents the choice of becoming full human or returning to the jungle)

added more lore notes

Tamur8/29/2015, 9:29:13 PM1 votes

Made changes

Tamur9/6/2015, 2:39:31 AM1 votes

Made changes

Tamur9/6/2015, 10:49:22 PM1 votes

Made changes

Tamur9/9/2015, 4:48:55 AM1 votes

Made changes

Tamur9/22/2015, 5:55:16 PM1 votes

made changes

Tamur10/10/2015, 7:03:17 PM1 votes

added lore

Tamur11/16/2015, 11:50:24 PM1 votes

Made changes

Tamur3/30/2016, 8:02:13 PM1 votes

Made changes

Tamur5/23/2016, 7:42:32 PM1 votes

made changes to Q

Tamur6/26/2016, 5:21:50 AM1 votes

Modified passive , made E ult and added a passive for new E.

Should I add an active to E? If yes please suggest one.

sneezing slug6/26/2016, 6:41:12 AM1 votes

Why does this have so many downvotes

what even

Its a neat concept, I'd make the passive be every 10 instead of 5, but otherwise its good

might be a bit too many extra stats tho

KiyoYoshimaru7/8/2016, 9:26:15 PM1 votes

Isn't that Shantae?

Tamur8/20/2016, 3:21:56 PM1 votes

Made changes to E and Ult

Azeranth8/21/2016, 3:58:51 PM1 votes

The E is still a bit backwards, the health regen steroid is supposed to be on Channeled Rage, not Relentless Rage. The relentless is an all in tool, the Channeled is a sustain tool. The loss of regen is a tradeoff in exchange for the extra armor and bonus lifesteal, making her a dueling machine.

Tamur9/10/2016, 10:03:12 PM1 votes

made changes to passive , E, and Ult

Tamur6/27/2015, 8:53:09 PM1 votes

I will add missing info to lore sometime next week

Tamur9/23/2016, 12:57:15 AM1 votes

any thoughts?

gyzmotech6/27/2015, 9:52:31 PM1 votes

i love this but i like her skin more than the classic haha its 10times better