My idea for a new champion

Sätän·Mar 6, 2016·1 votes·916 views

So i have an idea for a new champion i would like to work with riot to make but they may not like my idea. Anyways the champion would be a new kind of assassin. His name could be Sanity: The Needle God

Passive: Sewing: This champion does not use mana but instead uses a new type of thing called hate. Hate slowly grows and after 1 minute you are able to use hate. You can only use hate once per minute. hate applies this: Sanity's basic attacks or abilities apply a poison that deals damage based on missing health. It deals incredibly light damage if the target has 85% of their max health. It lasts 5 seconds or 7 seconds if the target is under 35% health. Any ability consumes the poison mark, dealing 75% of the remaining poison damage + 150% AD

Ability 1: Shredder: Fires short but wide needle that cuts throw the enemy and can hit other enemies behind it. This ability mark applies his ultimate mark as well ad reducing armor (5%/10%/15%/20%/25%) That last for three seconds. Deals (40/60/80/90/100 +90% ad) cd = 8/7/6/5/4. Passive: He gains bonus armor pen 5/10/15/20/25

Ability 2: Acupuncture: This champion blinks to enemy opponent, monster, or minion dealing (60/90/100/110/120) +70% ad on arrival as well as marking them if his ultimate is up cd = 15.68/14/13.74/10.64/8.76 Passive:

Ability 3: Needle point: Throws out a (90/120/130/140/150) +80% ad needle that stuns for 0.25 when hit 7/6.5/6/5/4

Ultimate: Hells Gate: Active: He throws a giant skill shot needle 250/300/400 +150% ad Passive: Marks an enemy making the enemy take 100/150/250 +20% ad damage after 10 secs or an auto attack cd = 165/150/120

That is the champion i want to make if riot will let me. Riot this is 100% your decision not mine. Anyways you can give me some feed back and give your thought and opinions please do.

14 Comments

ArakadiaMar 6, 20161 votes

Koop concept, I suggest you give him/her lore, name, and a theme. His Q is too similar to Zed's shadow imo, and he is too mobile I think. Change his Q to a ability that synergies as his W is already a gapcloser. His ult is cool as it lets him assassinate targets without interference, although it seems broken as you just ult their ADC in a team fight and for a few seconds it's a 1v5. Maybe you should make a basic attack consume the mark on his E as its too similar to Zed's ult. His passive is purely stat buffs which is good, but boring. Make his passive a passive on an ability and then give him a fun and interactive passive like Azir, Thresh, Kalista, Jhin, Illaoi, Reksai, or Zilean.

SätänMar 6, 2016

i did end up changing the passive around tell me what you think of it, but i haven't got to the ult or the q and i wouldn't mind some suggestions on them i want the ult to remain somewhat the same but not be over powered. i am working on the lore and what do you mean by theme

ArakadiaMar 7, 20161 votes

The problem with this new passive is its not that useful. You can't control it and it's not that strong. By theme I mean what the character is and who they are. Illaoi is the kraken presides and Reksai is the void burrower. We can clearly see what type of character they aren.

SätänMar 7, 20161 votes

o i understand theme now and do you have any thoughts on the passive if you give me some time i can think of a new one

ArakadiaMar 7, 20161 votes

Passive: Sanity's basic attacks apply a poison that deals damage based on missing health. It deals incredibly light damage if the target has 85% of their max health. It lasts 5 seconds or 7 seconds if the target is under 35% health. Terkro consumes the poison mark, dealing 75% of the remaining poison damage + 150% AD.

SätänMar 7, 20161 votes

I do like that a lot but i just remade it what do you think of it remade

SätänMar 7, 20161 votes

I did now change his passive and ult so it should be better

SexualizeOatmealMar 7, 20161 votes

The passive is OP. Late game, or early game, being able to instantly respawn is kinda op. Also, if you want to keep the passive as it is, whats the cooldown? Also, the passive makes it easy to feed, assuming it doesnt have a cool down... The ultimate is OP also, easily making it into a 1 v 5 situation, after its all said and done, its a 4 v 5, likely without the enemy team having an ADC, also, what are the base stats? Lastly, I dont understand the lore, what was the point of Warwick being in there, what was this dark cloud? Did it change what the character looked like? Is he like a rag doll type thing now?

SätänMar 7, 20161 votes

the passive does have a cd its 3 min and warwick is in there just cause why not his ult is a little op but what could i change it to he isnt a rag doll this dark cloud was mearly just a creation of warick but he barried it long ago due to cercumstances

SexualizeOatmealMar 7, 20161 votes

For a 3 minute cool down, it still seems kinda OP... In terms for the ult, I dont see how it works for the character, the character, the way you make the character seem, is that its a needle based assassin. The ult, instead, should maybe make enemy champions in an area take extra damage from your teamate's abilities, or, make it a single target ability. Maybe a Skillshot, where he throws a needle, dealing 150/300/450 damage plus 150% AD, or something like that. As for the lore, it doesnt fit the character, its not a good idea to throw in characters that dont have a point.

As for the lore, here is something I used for a character I made "An ancient village lies somewhere between the Kumungu Jungle and the Plague Jungle, yet to be discovered by anyone but the residents of this village. The residents of this village worship snakes as gods and godesses. Learning to speak their tongue, but not daring to repeat the secrets they are given. For, doing so puts their life at risk. Their greatest goddess is said to be a 100 foot long snake, capable of eating entire cities and villages as if they were nothing. This goddess has yet to be seen by anyone in the village, but is known as Requish (Re-Qui-ish) except for their sage, the wisest and oldest of the village, only she knows this goddess' true name. Viridis was given to Sarah to aid in her hunts by the great Requish. Failure to successfully bring anything back from a hunt is punishable by death. Any and all who are punished this way is injected with various types of poison, leading to a slow painful death. Once dead, their remains will be held as a sacrifice to their gods and goddesses to ask for forgiveness. Sarah, having failed to bring anything back on her first hunt has been targeted by this ancient village, her only loyal companion being Viridis. Seeking refuge she joined the League as the only member of this tribe."

SätänMar 7, 20161 votes

wow great lore fyi i might change the name for sarah is the name of mf and i like the ult ideas of the skillshot but instead im going to make the ult do exactley that but still have the passive

SexualizeOatmealMar 7, 20161 votes

Now the ult seems more balanced, being able to easily take out a squishy with it, likely the enemy ADC, which, is the entire point of the assassins. Thanks for telling me that btw.

SätänMar 8, 20161 votes

your welcome and thanks for all your tips

SätänMar 9, 20161 votes

I have changed the passive and some of the ability names