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My idea for a new champion

Sätän·3/6/2016, 9:47:44 PM·1 votes·916 views

So i have an idea for a new champion i would like to work with riot to make but they may not like my idea. Anyways the champion would be a new kind of assassin. His name could be Sanity: The Needle God

Passive: Sewing: This champion does not use mana but instead uses a new type of thing called hate. Hate slowly grows and after 1 minute you are able to use hate. You can only use hate once per minute. hate applies this: Sanity's basic attacks or abilities apply a poison that deals damage based on missing health. It deals incredibly light damage if the target has 85% of their max health. It lasts 5 seconds or 7 seconds if the target is under 35% health. Any ability consumes the poison mark, dealing 75% of the remaining poison damage + 150% AD

Ability 1: Shredder: Fires short but wide needle that cuts throw the enemy and can hit other enemies behind it. This ability mark applies his ultimate mark as well ad reducing armor (5%/10%/15%/20%/25%) That last for three seconds. Deals (40/60/80/90/100 +90% ad) cd = 8/7/6/5/4. Passive: He gains bonus armor pen 5/10/15/20/25

Ability 2: Acupuncture: This champion blinks to enemy opponent, monster, or minion dealing (60/90/100/110/120) +70% ad on arrival as well as marking them if his ultimate is up cd = 15.68/14/13.74/10.64/8.76 Passive:

Ability 3: Needle point: Throws out a (90/120/130/140/150) +80% ad needle that stuns for 0.25 when hit 7/6.5/6/5/4

Ultimate: Hells Gate: Active: He throws a giant skill shot needle 250/300/400 +150% ad Passive: Marks an enemy making the enemy take 100/150/250 +20% ad damage after 10 secs or an auto attack cd = 165/150/120

That is the champion i want to make if riot will let me. Riot this is 100% your decision not mine. Anyways you can give me some feed back and give your thought and opinions please do.

14 Comments

Arakadia3/6/2016, 10:29:10 PM1 votes

Koop concept, I suggest you give him/her lore, name, and a theme. His Q is too similar to Zed's shadow imo, and he is too mobile I think. Change his Q to a ability that synergies as his W is already a gapcloser. His ult is cool as it lets him assassinate targets without interference, although it seems broken as you just ult their ADC in a team fight and for a few seconds it's a 1v5. Maybe you should make a basic attack consume the mark on his E as its too similar to Zed's ult. His passive is purely stat buffs which is good, but boring. Make his passive a passive on an ability and then give him a fun and interactive passive like Azir, Thresh, Kalista, Jhin, Illaoi, Reksai, or Zilean.

SexualizeOatmeal3/7/2016, 2:52:01 AM1 votes

The passive is OP. Late game, or early game, being able to instantly respawn is kinda op. Also, if you want to keep the passive as it is, whats the cooldown? Also, the passive makes it easy to feed, assuming it doesnt have a cool down... The ultimate is OP also, easily making it into a 1 v 5 situation, after its all said and done, its a 4 v 5, likely without the enemy team having an ADC, also, what are the base stats? Lastly, I dont understand the lore, what was the point of Warwick being in there, what was this dark cloud? Did it change what the character looked like? Is he like a rag doll type thing now?

Sätän3/9/2016, 9:44:15 PM1 votes

I have changed the passive and some of the ability names