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[Champion Concept with Art] Xon the Inimical Soul (rework)

ArchVixxen·8/14/2015, 12:54:18 AM·9 votes·2,183 views

Xon (ex-on) the Inimical Soul (Fighter/ Assassin)

Lore

I was a great warrior, a leader, I swore to protect my people even if it cost me my life. But that means nothing now, I am to blame for my people's deaths. I stood before a creature I thought I would never face, and it almost cost me my soul. My people are gone, my brothers, my sisters, all of them. Their screams are burned into my memory forever, their pleas, their blames. I will set things right, Thresh will pay for what he has done. I will find a way to free my people from his grasp. I will free myself from this nightmare.

“I live and that will be his downfall.” -Xon (Allies with Lucian)

Stats

Lvl 1 Health: 575 Health Regen: 7.86 Melee: 125 Attack Damage: 58.36 Attack Speed: 0.679 Armor: 26.88 Magic Res: 32.1 Mov Speed: 355 (only restricted by cooldowns)

Abilities

Passive: Wane of Resistance Every three aa to single target enemy champions drops armor by 10%, stacks up to 3 times. --Each stack decays over 6s

Q: Veil Break Claws the air sending a pillar of soul energy infused claws that silences the first target it hits for .25/.5/.75/1/1.25s -- Gains 35% movement speed boost -- Deals 80/100/120/140/160 (+80% bonus ability power) magic damage

--During Ult: Silence last 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2s

Cost: No Cost Range: 600 Cooldown: 12/11/10/9/8s

W: Soul's Wrath

  • Xon empowers his clawed gauntlets to deal damage to single target 90/110/130/150/170 (+80% bonus attack damage) physical damage -- Deals double damage to silenced enemies

--During Ult: +100% bonus attack damage

Cost: No Cost Range: Melee Range Cooldown: 10/9/8/7/6s

E: Cursed Pith Next aa hits all targets (aoe) causing bleed effect 40/60/80/100/120 (+30% bonus attack damage) lasting 4s (claws targets in front of him) -- Applies grievous wounds reducing incoming healing by 50% 4s

--During Ult: Grievous wounds lasts 6s

Cost: No Cost Range: 250 Cooldown: 14/13/12/11/10s

R: Warden’s Promise Xon turns into a rage consumed soul form pouncing onto his target (can be used to jump walls) -- Deals 350/400/450 (+350% bonus attack damage) physical damage --15% attack speed boost for duration (about of Warden’s Promise (Auto attacks become claw swipes) (Able to use other abilities while active)

Cost: No Cost Range: 550 Cooldown: 120/90/75

Plays like: Talon Nidalee (A little like Nidalee since his ult isn't a toggle)

25 Comments

Milla Basset8/14/2015, 8:15:02 PM2 votes

Big improvement from the original Idea. The lore was in much greater detail on the other, but this one is short, sweet, and seemingly straight to the point. I like how his ult's name is related to Thresh. He would be insane on max cool downs seeing that his spells have no cost. I'd love to see him in game.

If he had a teleport he'd be almost a remake of Talon. Lol. Bump Talon

ßeerus8/14/2015, 4:02:45 AM1 votes

Name and General Design: Xon does not pronounce as "Zee-on" in any language or stretch of imagination. "Zee-on" only comes from Xion, Xeon, Zion, and Zeon. Currently, his name would be pronounce "Zon" Inimical Soul is an alright title, it gives off a feel that he was born hostile, so I hope that's what you're going for. Appearance is great.

Lore: Far too short and vague, the Thresh name-drop seems totally out of nowhere. Also, at the end you misspelled his name as "Eon"

Abilities: Passive seems a bit weak, but it's relatively okay. Q, W, and E are pretty basic and don't have anything wrong with them. R is kinda of confusing and seems rather weak.

All in all, the character seems interesting, but the abilities are boring. I'd suggest changing his ult to make him change into "Beast" form and give him 4 new abilities, like Elise or Gnar

Cheeseyoger8/14/2015, 5:42:21 AM1 votes

I like it. I think it's interesting Xon's Q is so magic/ap centered when nothing else really facilitates a magic damage build. Since his nemesis is Thresh who is CC and kite heavy, what do you think of changing Xon's ulti from a gap closer nuke to a steroid similar to Olaf's where he is immune to mobility cc (slows, roots, knock-ups/knock-backs, etc.) Could maybe even make it so every aa and landed spell gives him a move speed buff while his ult is on so he can chase and stick. Thoughts?

xl Kirito lx8/14/2015, 7:48:20 AM1 votes

As much as people hate it, you're going to need something slightly more complex for a kit.

His passive is a nerfed fizz passive, the rest of his kit looks incredibly hard to balance. All of his abilities seem incredibly strong on their own. Ranged silence, AOE grevious wounds, % armor reduction, huge self buffing ult, with an added AOE. Adding in that he's resourceless.

In turn, he doesn't have sustain, and he has a unique lore. There's potential, just needs some more work.

Cheeseyoger8/14/2015, 8:18:45 AM1 votes

I definitely agree he sounds strong, but at the same time, he has no real big damage spells besides his ult, and his E doesn't have an active--or even apply on every hit. I get the feeling that most of his fighting power is going to come from items. Hydra for sustain, Frozen Mallet and Black Cleaver for durability and sticking power, things like that. His kit has some interesting strengths, but they leave a lot of holes too. Definitely would take some strategy to succeed on this champ.

Cheeseyoger8/14/2015, 9:03:29 AM1 votes

So, where would Xon's strength be? It seems he wants to be in auto attack range as long as possible since he doesn't have much else to fall back on. But considering that, how would he be able to stand up to a riven, darius, olaf, renekton, or sion? All of whom are melee champions, but I feel like could probably win most head on fights with equal gold and xp.

Cheeseyoger8/14/2015, 11:58:35 AM1 votes

Yeah, he could definitely jungle now. If he came in at an angle from behind someone pushing, he could really put down some pain before they escaped. If the laner helped then they might not escape at all. If i'm not mistaken, you can silence some neutral mobs, and that would significantly improve his clear if you can.

ArchVixxen8/16/2015, 6:51:03 AM1 votes

Added in art for spell icons, sorry for the horrible hand writing lol

Bump ^^

JointOP8/16/2015, 4:52:25 PM1 votes

This is a pretty neat idea. The fact that he escaped Thresh makes his lore quite unique. I would for sure play him :)

Bump ^^

obsidiandonut8/18/2015, 12:26:20 AM1 votes

It makes me sad I can only up vote it once... lol

Bump :D

ArchVixxen8/28/2015, 1:22:53 AM1 votes

I'll give him one last try.

Bump

Shadr23698/14/2015, 3:30:15 AM1 votes

Really cool but the AD scaling on the ult is insane! 350% AD? build 400 AD and you've 1400 damage + the base damage. Other than that it's great.

ArchVixxen10/25/2015, 9:33:17 PM1 votes

Seeing as how Kindred got the wolf, a spirit wolf thing, I highly doubt mine will get any attention XD

But it's still here, Riot, and I'm full of more ideas for champions. I just wish your art style was easier to draw.

Bump Kindred