Willing to review champion concepts.

MajorMajora·11/4/2014, 2:16:06 PM·4 votes·1,307 views

Note that I will plan on using the concepts given to me in this thread for a short essay detailing any interesting trends I find, if any.

I won't necessarily review every champion shown here, but I'll do what I can.

When you post your champion, it needs to have the following: -A lore -All 5 abilities told in detail, including the numbers associated. -A role, possibly a sub role, and a name.

Additionally, when you post it on this thread, I will not review it unless you include within your post: -The name -The role -The subrole if a subrole is present. -A brief lore background (a sentence or 2). -A brief description of their gameplay (gameplay gimmicks and general play style. 1-3 sentences). -A link to the thread

Have at it.

Sorry guys, I have a lot of work in school. It may be a while till I get to many of these.

10 Comments

Kilar11/4/2014, 2:55:29 PM1 votes

Name: Lily, the Black Mist Role: Mid Subrole: Support Hanes Comfort Soft Briefs: Her Death is what Created the Twisted Tree Line Gameplay: Most of her abilities use a form of the mist mechanic, her Q uses the ball and chain she was bound to.

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/vFUyrtzU-lily-the-black-mist

PhoenixOfHeaven11/4/2014, 3:12:54 PM1 votes

So Just champs, or will u do skins too? I have no champ ideas, but several skin ideas.

also will like the post for u :)

EDIT- also nice name :)

Platinum Yak11/4/2014, 5:25:13 PM1 votes

Name: Mako, the Fathom Reaver Role: Fighter Subrole: Tank Lore: Sent from the ocean depths by a wicked deity, Mako seeks to destroy Nami the Tidecaller and in doing so doom her people, the Marai. Gameplay: Mako is about getting in close, restricting the movement of his enemies, and doing enough damage to build up his innate bonus. He can also hold the line with his health-regen boosting ability and the life-steal element of his innate. Thread.

Meep Man11/4/2014, 11:09:57 PM1 votes

Name: Ao Siwang, the Bringer of the End Role: Tank Subrole: Fighter Lore: Ao Siwang is a dragon and the bringer of chaos and doom on a personal mission to kill Ao Shin and enslave all life. He only needs to find Ao Shin now after any planks to stop him have been temporarily misplaced and disabled. Gameplay: Ao Siwang is a mighty dragon that is all about gaining Fury to gain boosts to himself and destroy his enemies. His spells deal decent damage and apply moderate crowd control, but are all easy to avoid. His ultimate is an amazing ability that allows him to traverse the map and bring doom to enemies on a global scale. His main feature is his ability to effectively affect all enemies on the map during all points of the game. Link

Gjom11/4/2014, 11:48:55 PM1 votes

Name: Padlock, the Forge of Demacia Role: Tank Sub-role: Support

Lore: On the outskirts of the city state of Demacia, hidden deep within the mountains of The Great Barrier and shrouded by the widespread of trees, a small pillar of smoke rises to the skies. From the tree line, a small light flickers faintly. There, contented in solitude, lies the quaint house of the noble and kind-hearted, once great forger of Demacia; Padlock.

Gameplay: Padlock is a crowd control heavy tank, designed to disrupt the enemy team, and provide a great assest to any team fight.

Concept

BestWoman11/5/2014, 8:19:09 AM1 votes

Name: Eisel, the Spore Host Role: Fighter Subrole: Tank

Lore: Maimed former Bandle City scout captain turned Chief Mycologist, bonded with a symbiotic fungus to restore his lost arm and eye.

Gameplay: Eisel is a tanky AP jungler who is all about controlling the map. Planting spore mushrooms around the map to provide himself with increased vision, mobility, and empowered skills in whatever land he can claim. In teamfights he maneuvers around, providing crowd control and constant damage over time while sustaining himself with a fast-regenerating shield.

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/0xm1lOzl-eisel-the-spore-host

FuzzyPhatPanda11/5/2014, 9:55:50 PM1 votes

Name: Dollup, the Wandering Paladin Role: Top Subrole: Jungle Lore: Barbarians are terrorizing the people of the Fyrone Flats. Dollup's father trains him, but Dollup eventually sees him and his mother get murdered in their own home. This causes Dollup to go out and use his training to fight for justice and protect the innocent. Gameplay: Dollup is a high mobility tank/fighter. The goal is to stack his passive to gain good bursts in movement speed. He deals consistent damage and excels at chasing enemies. He has great synergy with disablers and really shines during the cleanup after a team fight.

Dollup, the Wandering Paladin I should note that this is only my second champion concept so it most likely will not be perfect. But do not hold back on your critique. Any feedback, harsh or not, will help me improve Dollup and future concepts I create.

TeemoHunter133711/6/2014, 4:32:45 PM1 votes

why is the OP acting so high and mighty like we care about his one review? and why are the people commenting actually trying to get his review?

wtf.

dustwind811/6/2014, 11:22:43 PM1 votes

Name: Mary Aunette, The Puppet Master. Role: Jungle Subrole: ADC Lore: (i do not excel at lore) A child prodigy who had her family ripped from her. Raised by a stranger to survive. Gameplay: I envision her having high survivability in the jungle, decent control of the jungle, and above average crowd control if played right. She is a solid all around champion who can help push her lanes to victory.

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/EPBnKJQs-champion-suggestion-mary-aunette-the-puppet-master

Panthalassa11/7/2014, 1:42:35 AM1 votes

Name: Terrax, the Awakened Wraith Role: Figher Subrole: Mage Lore: A dark, sleeping spirit living within the Shadow Isles that was mistakenly awakened by hunters and is out to destroy the world in an effort to find slumber. Gameplay: A completely hybridized, mobile fighter who excels at dealing magic and physical damage simultaneously. He benefits significantly from having both AD and AP and requires a good deal of timing and skilled ability management and timing in order to dish out full damage.

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/euY9Iv5J-champion-concept-terrax-the-awakened-wraith