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New Champion Idea

Lord Poison·6/1/2017, 6:55:58 PM·1 votes·389 views

This popped into my head a few days ago. What if they designed a champ that can manipulate other champs. Like a short ranged assassin that has a lot of damage, mobility, and is sort of squishy. Visually, he wears a dark blue suit, has short brown hair, and carries a massive blood stained kitchen knife. It's really a smaller sword if nothing else.

His passive is a two part passive, Hemorrhage/Anesthetic. Your basic attacks cause enemies to take damage over time, and receive reduced healing for 3 seconds. Damage dealt over time is a percentage of your attack damage. The second part grants you immunity from any form of crowd control for 3 seconds and is triggered when you attack another champion with your basic attacks. Damage taken over time 5%/7.5%/10% of your attack damage, Duration of crowd control immunity 3/3.5/4 seconds.

Your Q is Blade Slash (I know the name needs a bit more work), You slash your knife in a horizontal line applying the first part of your passive to all minions/monsters/champions hit. If you hit a champion, the second part of your passive also activates. Hitting a champion with this ability will restore some health. While leveling up this ability the AOE increases by each point. If a champion is killed by this ability, the cooldown is reduced 5.2 seconds. 60+50%/110+60%/160+70%/220+80%/280+90% of your attack damage, 5.2/5.4/5.6/5.8/6 second cool down reduced when leveling up this ability.

Your W is Hysteria, your movement speed, attack speed increases for 3 seconds. For every minion/monster/champion killed the duration is increased for 0.5 seconds. 0.5/0.75/1/1.25/1.50 seconds duration increased when leveling up. Also, when activating this ability blood stains appear on him and around him. 30%/31.5%/33%/34.5%/36% increased attack speed when leveling up this ability. 7.5%/9%/10.5%/12%/13.5% increased movement speed when leveling up this ability.

Your E is Pain Killer (I know this one needs a bit work too), your health/mana regeneration are increased massively, and it removes all slows, stuns, and knock ups upon activation. Also, it grants increased armor and magic resist for 3 seconds. 3/3.25/3.50/3.75/4 seconds duration increased when leveling up. 60%/70%/80%/90%/100% increased health/mana regeneration when leveling up this ability.

Your R is Pulling their Strings, when activated white strings are latched onto any and all enemy champions within 800 units from him and last for 10 seconds. Latched champions are slowed, their armor is reduced, and take aditional damage, percentage max health damage, and true damage from him. When attacking a latched target he instantly appears right next to it. This ability can only be canceled if you kill him, or if there are none latched targets left. If an enemy champion enters the zone after activation the effects of this ability are not applied for that target, same goes if a champion leaves the zone before deactivation. The zone travels with him (the champion). This ability can only be activated when there is at least one enemy champion within 800 from him. Duration and damage taken increase when leveling up this ability 10/11/12 seconds, 10%/15%/20% increased damage dealt, 20%/30%/40% reduced armor, 10%/17.5%/25% percentage max health damage, 150/225/300 true damage dealt when leveling up this ability.

One of his skins can be like a politician skin or Congress Skin, since politicians manipulate a lot of people in real life.

As for his Lore, he was a wealthy heir from Piltover, his parents basically ran the entire city until some unknown man killed them Yasuo . He was very young at the time, and he spent 10 years in an insane asylum because people thought he did it. He escaped the asylum and is now in search of the killer of his family. After he escaped the asylum he met Camille , who thought him how to fight. When he was 15 he started developing powers of mind control, through time these powers grew, and a lot of people started to fear him because of this. (sorry, I don't really know all the details of the story)

_"The mind holds many secrets. Some memories we would like to forget, some... We so desperately want back." _

Here are some lines I thought of when creating him: "Did you really think that i would forget what you did?" Taunt Yasuo "You've Mastered the Special Wind technique? Don't make me laugh." Taunt Yasuo "Pathetic drunk." Taunt Yasuo "How can you live with yourself?" Taunt Yasuo "You will share the same fate as your brother." Taunt Yasuo "Can you hear me? I have avenged you." Kill Yasuo "Your Ignorance will be your downfall." Taunt any champion "I wonder what your mind is like from the inside..." Taunt any champion "Heroes always die first." Kill Garen "You have thought me well." Taunt Camille "Let me show you how much I have learned." Taunt Camille "You and I are more alike than you think." Taunt Morgana "How... quaint." Respond to enemy taunt "Intelligence is a quality you're so desperately lacking." Respond to enemy taunt "Is that supposed to be... funny? How Uninteresting. " Respond to enemy taunt "Maybe you should learn more, instead of blathering on about such nonsense." Respond to enemy taunt "I suppose you think you could have defeated me? I didn't think so." Kill Teemo "Incompetence is worse than stupidity." Taunt DrMundo "I expected more, you know, considering..." Kill AurelionSol That's all I have right now. :)

3 Comments

Chembaron Yamada6/1/2017, 9:08:06 PM2 votes

Character design: I like the idea of having a champion having mind control powers. But his appearance seems a bit boring. A guy with knife in a blue suit...

Lore could use some work too. Basically, the question is why Yasuo should kill his parents? We don't know if Yasuo even travelled Piltover any time.

I would like to take the route of him truly being an insane mass murderer. The closest we have to that right now is Dr. Mundo, but he is more a comical character, and Jhin, but his theme is beauty as well. I would like to have a really dark mass murderer.

Kit and playstyle: Not gonna lie, that needs alot of work. You say he should be some kind of squishy assassin.... your kit doesn't represent that in any way. Look at it. He has heal, CC immunity, extra resistances. Does that really sound squishy for you?

This champ would be played as a tank, not an assassin, I guarantee it. On top, his base damages are pretty high and he has %health damage and true damage on his ult. I think that kit needs a complete overhaul, it doesn't fit the identity of the champion. And the mind control doesn't really stand out, but it should be his theme. What does reduced armor, extra damage and being able to teleport to your target have to do with mind control?

Lord Poison6/1/2017, 9:26:41 PM1 votes

Damn, you're totally right... Idk, I really wanted to focus on his abilities, rather than his lore (even though I love reading champion lore) I thought the aspect of an aristocratic maniac mass murderer sounded kind of awesome. As for the mind control, i don't think that can really be possible in the game, like how would that function, you know? Since Camille came out I really wanted to create someone that connected to her. As for his kit, yeah... if he ever came out he would definitely be OP. Maybe he can be something else? I don't know...