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Kasumi [Idea for a champion with a short story]

Èlisé·7/26/2019, 4:21:25 PM·1 votes·1,309 views

**Kasumi, fiend of the Mist **

This idea is genuinely new and not like any of my past previous idea, I won't make another one of these concepts since I don't want to spam the forums. This will be my last post for the next couple of weeks.

Role: Fighter, Top/Jungler

Appearance: Woman in her early twenties dressed in a white and yellow marked dress. She has a silver long sword with a white stone on the hilt and her eyes glow bright pink while in a mist, otherwise her eye color is that of a light shade of brown.

Short Story: There are tales of a mysterious Ionian forest, rumored to be home to a demon wearing a long white dress, but no man or woman would ever see the demon as the forest was covered in a dense mist spanning across miles of land, it was said that the demon would take the souls of children lost in the mist.

One day, a young child named Ester walked into the forest with a lantern, wanting to find medicine for his sick father, he was told that there was a bright yellow flower which had the ability to cure any sickness within the center of the forest, so Ester would walk for hours and hours trying to find the flower going deeper into the mist. Ester would start hearing whispers of a woman in his ears but he was unable to see where the sound was coming from, the mist got thicker then so did the sounds, Ester was scared but his will to save his father kept him going into the mist. After some more time passed, Ester saw a barely visible figure of a woman who appeared in front of him, she looked at Ester with her bright pink eyes staring at the small child, she asked the child in a sinister tone of his purpose here.

Ester took a while to answer the demon, but eventually told her that he was looking for a flower to cure his father of an illness. The Demon looked at the child but then she proceeded to laugh greatly in a maniacal laughter, after she was done laughing, she began speaking to Ester. She told him that there is only one of those flowers in this forest and its one she couldn’t give him. Ester asked why, the demon would stop for a brief second and the mist started to dissolve, the demon’s form started to become more clearer, she was wearing a white dress with yellow patterns, Ester saw that she was holding a sword which seem more sharp then eagle talons, his father once encountered.

The demon would look at the child for a few moments but then she would tell the child to follow her in a calm gentile voice. The child did what she said and followed her, twenty minutes later they would find the flower that the boy was seeking however, the demon told the boy that if he were to remove the flower, everything in this forest will die. She told the child that the flower removed the evil from her soul, there was a time she would have ripped the child apart without a moment’s noticed. The demon offered the child a different solution, she would request the child to lend her to his sick father so she could cure him by using a portion of her life force. The child did what the demon said, after a while, they would both leave the forest to visit the child’s father. As they walked into the child’s home, The demon starting talking about how its time to view the world once more then Ester asked what was her name and the demon happily answered, “My name is Kasumi.”

Passive: Mist body

While nearby a mist, Kasumi gains 10-60 (Based on level) bonus movement speed.

Q: Mist Creation (Charge: 26/22/18/14/10 seconds) (Target Range: 750)

Passive: While in a mist, Kasumi regenerates 0.75% of her missing health and increases her auto attack speed by 5/10/15/20/25%, these bonuses persist for 4 seconds after leaving the mist. Kasumi stores a charge of Mist Creation periodically, up to a maximum of 5 stored at once.

Active: Kasumi generates a mist at a target location for 16 seconds, slowing enemies within it by 20%. Mist Creation spawns more mist if used near terrain or other mist.

W: Mist forms (cdr: 16 seconds) (Mana: 40/50/60/70/80)

Active: Kasumi can only activate this ability while in a mist, she create 1/2/3/4/5 replicas of herself with 200 health and only deal 10% of Kasumi’s total AD. The replicas will prioritize units that Kasumi is auto attacking. The replicas disappear after being away from a mist for 4/4.5/5/5.5/6 seconds but can be refresh by returning to a mist.

E: Slashing Wind (cdr: 12 seconds) (Mana: 35/45/55/65/75) (Range: 400)

Active: Kasumi and any replicas dashes to a location slashing and stunning all targets for 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2 seconds within the dash and dealing 50/70/90/110/130(+60% AD) physical damage, this ability gets its cooldown reduce by 3 seconds if she dashes into a mist.

R: The Mist Demon

Active: Kasumi becomes enraged which makes her body more demonic like then it was previously. She gains 100/250/400 bonus health, 20/40/60 bonus movement speed, auto attacks rips targets dealing an 10/20/30(+1%(+1% per 100 AD) of target’s missing health) bonus physical damage, and creates a mist at her location every 20/16/12 seconds. Kasumi can only become enraged when she has 100% of her mana, after activating this ability she loses 2/1.5/1% of her maximum mana per second, she calms down whenever her mana reaches 10% or less.

[slayer-pantheon-thumbs] Thanks for reading!

2 Comments

Rektagon7/26/2019, 9:48:05 PM1 votes

Passive: Mist body While nearby a mist, Kasumi gains 10-60 (Based on level) bonus movement speed.

So where does the mist appear? Can it only be summoned by...

Q: Mist Creation (Charge: 34/30/26/24/20 seconds) (Target Range: 750) Passive: While in a mist, Kasumi regenerates 0.75% of her missing health and increases her auto attack speed by 5/10/15/20/25%, these bonuses persist for 4 seconds after leaving the mist. Kasumi stores a charge of Mist Creation periodically, up to a maximum of 5 stored at once. Active: Kasumi generates a mist at a target location for 22 seconds, slowing and grounding enemies within it by 40%. Mist Creation spawns more mist if used near terrain or other mist.

The cooldown is way too long for an ability like this. She relies on generating mist for her passive, yet she can only do it once every minute at level 1, and three times at level 5.

As for the 22 seconds debuff, that's ridiculously overpowered. 22 seconds is too long in the game for such area control. Riven's ult is one of the longest abilities in the game at 15 seconds, and it only gives her bonus range/AD.

W: Mist forms (cdr: 16 seconds) (Mana: 40/50/60/70/80) Active: Kasumi can only activate this ability while in a mist, she create 1/2/3/4/5 replicas of herself with 200 health and only deal 10% of Kasumi’s total AD. The replicas will prioritize units that Kasumi is auto attacking. The replicas disappear after being away from a mist for 4/4.5/5/5.5/6 seconds but can be refresh by returning to a mist.

Another reason why the Q passive is stupidly underpowered. The cooldown should be decreased and the slow decreased. For the W, the ability is interesting, but how long will the last in the mist?

E: Slashing Wind (cdr: 12 seconds) (Mana: 35/45/55/65/75) (Range: 400) Active: Kasumi and any replicas dashes to a location slashing and stunning all targets for 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2 seconds within the dash and dealing 50/70/90/110/130(+60% AD) physical damage, this ability gets its cooldown reduce by 3 seconds if she dashes into a mist.

So all the replicas have their own stun? Do they stack? Other than that, it seems decently balanced in range.

R: The Mist Demon Active: Kasumi becomes enraged which makes her body more demonic like then it was previously. She gains 100/250/400 bonus health, 20/40/60 bonus movement speed, auto attacks rips targets dealing an 10/20/30(+1%(+1% per 100 AD) of target’s missing health) bonus physical damage, and creates a mist at her location every 20/16/12 seconds. Kasumi can only become enraged when she has 100% of her mana, after activating this ability she loses 2/1.5/1% of her maximum mana per second, she calms down whenever her mana reaches 10% or less.

I don't get this ability...does it apply at 100% mana until she reaches 10%, or is there another CD?

Overall the concept isn't well-balanced, despite the abilities being kinda interesting. Please look at this again, and carefully. Try comparing the stats of other champions.