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[Champion Concept] Kl'Hair, The Forgotten Doll

Eternal 7 ·7/9/2016, 8:11:16 PM·6 votes·1,209 views

Ok , so this is my first champion idea,... A ranged sup/ tank role , that uses her hair, souls, and her own HP to deal damage or protect her sould bound champion, i always loved the idea of the champion Zac and how he uses his own body as a weapon.. so i wanted to come up with something thats similar, but uses power thats not exactly in the game :D a doll and her hair ... , drew this pictures in ms paint and gimp, so its not the cleanest , but any comments , feel free to leave some, :D thoughts are nice is, had it up earlier but, made a mistake and hit delete instead of edit ;-; http://i.imgur.com/SteOFeb.jpg

                                                                                                        Back story 

                                                                                           Kl’Hair The Forgotten Doll

Kl’Hair was once nothing more than just a lifeless porcelain doll, very expensive, with beautiful golden blonde hair. A local towns doctor going by the name Hienz, decided that Kl’Hair would be the perfect gift for his only daughter, Rebeccas birthday. Being the young girl that his daughter was, she loved and cherished Kl’Hair, brushing her golden hair every day she got the chance. She would always say

**“ If only you were alive and could cherish your hair as much as I do” **

Several years passed, to the point of where Rebecca was no longer a child and out in the world on her own, but the love for her doll, Kl’Hair never weakened, in fact , it came to the point of where her love, became an obsession. Rebecca wanted Kl’Hair to be alive, more than just a lifeless doll. She would often mumble to herself that Kl’Hairs beauty, her long golden hair deserved life. Decades would pass, Rebeccas obsession with Kl’Hair led her into studying, learning, and obtaining the power of dark magic, at the cost of her sanity , she gained power. Rebecca eventually closed herself off from her family, friends, and the world, yelling out to herself

**“Family , friends?, they are all just a hindrance, BEGONE!!” **

With her dark magic, Rebecca no longer existed, every memory of who Rebecca once was seemed to have just ,…. vanished from the minds of all that once loved her, “kl’Hair is all I need” she would mumble. Rebecca believed that with her newly found dark magic, Kl’Hair would finally live, but no matter what spells she chanted, Kl’Hair remained lifeless. Several decades passed once more, Rebeccas dark magic has allowed her to live several times longer than an average human should, but has caused her body to slowly become frail and weak, as her dark powers ate away at her both her sanity and her soul, but she always had just enough strength to brush Kl’Hairs golden hair, slowly, chanting “Kl’Hair” over and over in a fragile whispered voice. The very few people that lived in the area of town referred to Rebecca as the porcelain witch. Her dark chanting could often be heard echoing through the night of the town.

** “THAT WITCH HAS TO GO, HER DARK MAGIC WILL BE OUR END AT THIS RATE!!” **

Out of built up fear, anger, and pure hatred , the towns people took matters into their own hands. Knowing Rebecca was far too weak to move, they set fire to her old run down home, without a single bit of regret , the towns people smiled and grinned , as the home slowly became engulfed in flames. Rebecca made no attempt to run or escape , instead…. with a huge unhuman smile on her face, Chanted one last spell…. grinned and with a burst of chilling laughter…. Said, with her last breath

**“ THIS IS THE ONE!!!, YOU WILL ALL BE JOINING ME!!.....(whisperes).. Kl’Hair ” **

From Rebaccas body opened up a dark void, her final spell, her final act of love, her soul for Kl’Hair… As Rebeccas body dissolved away into the void, through the flames and ashes…. Kl’hair lived, unsure of her newly found emotions, Kl’Hair felt… despair, loneliness, hatred, anger, as the memories of her and Rebeccas time spent together flooded her mind, in a bone chilling scream she rose from the ashes, and hunted down the souls of everyone that was involved with Rebeccas death, her once beautiful golden blond hair, now stained and dulled in the lives shes taken.. Many centuries passed, as Kl’Hair the now forgotten doll, sits lifelessly in the burnt ashes of a home, of a now abandon ghost town, where both her and Rebecca once lived,…that is until she heard a faint childlike voice echo through the darkness

“ Kl’Hair, ...................Kl'Hair..............im sorry “

This was the first and last time, Kl’Hair the doll , Cried tears, she now endlessly searches for someone, that could love and remember her as Rebecca once did

  • “Even at the cost of my life, this time , I will protect what I cherish, I don’t wish to be alone and forgotten again” – --- Kl’Hair

**Stats ** http://i.imgur.com/h3KtJSi.jpg

** Abilities**

https://i.imgur.com/AExvis9.jpg "Passive" " **Never alone, gift in life and death ** "

Gift In life - Kl'Hair binds her soul to an allied champion, this gives that allied champion a bonus 5 hp regen when in range of eachother

Gift in death - If Kl'Hair ever dies in battle her soul bound ally regens 20% of Kl'Hairs base hp

Damaging spell passive

Damaging an enemy champion with spells detaches Kl'Hairs hair from her body , making it dead hair... enemy champions hit with a spell marks them with dead hair for the next 5 seconds, this empowers your next auto attack to deal a bonus 5% of your max HP and 5% of max AP as magic damage

https://i.imgur.com/tbFHcTq.jpg "Q" "Split ends, soul catcher"

Split ends , is a skill shot ,using Kl'Hairs own hair, she splits the ends of her hair into the shape of a hand, and throwing it into a straight line, both catching and absorbing the targets soul for damage and healing. Enemies struck by this spell are marked with dead hair and are damaged for 50/80/120/150+ 15% of Kl'Hairs maxed Hp and 5% ap ... this skill heals both Kl'Hair and her soul bound for 40% of the damage dealt

This skill can attack and go through minions doing full damage , but for every minion hit , does 2% , max 10% reduced damage when hitting enemy champion

Does not heal off of minions, champions hit only

Range: 750 Mana: 50/55/60/65/75

https://i.imgur.com/rsFlirL.jpg "W" "SnHair"

Kl'Hair smashes the ground with her hair, sending a both shock wave and weaving hair through the ground, this initial burst deals 60/70/100/150/200+ 10% of Kl'Hairs max hp and 5% ap in a small AOE circle around her, enemies struck by this first burst are stunned for 0.75/1.0/1.25/1.30/1.45 seconds , When Reactivating this skill Kl'Hair shoots out a weaving hair hand that snares enemies located in the targeted direction. Enemies caught out but by the weaving hairs, are snared in place for 0.75/1.0/1.25/1.50/1.75 seconds,

****does not do double damage, uses the damage of the first skill that hit, this is not a double CC , if you are hit by the stun , then the snare will have no effect on you, if hit by the snare then the stun will not have any effect on you, its either 1 or the other

Range: Initial burst 350 Snare 950

Mana: 55/60/65/70/75

https://i.imgur.com/dKvnNOy.jpg "E" Phase- Soul Surge

Killing a minion or being near its death absorbs its soul, max of 2 souls, using this ability on a soul bound champion consumes both of the souls, allowing them to gain 5% move speed and allowing them to phase through damaging spells and attacks for the next 2 seconds, but in return can not attack or use any abilities, after 2 seconds is over soul surge reduces their ad and ap damage by 70/60/50/40/30% and attack speed by 15% for 1 second.... When there are no souls absorbed , Kl'Hair will sacrifice 30% of her current hp in order to have her soul bound champion use Phase.
****Mostly used as an escape tool , souls only spawn from minions and when there are less than 2 souls absorbed

Self casting this ability on Kl'Hair grants 15% move speed for 1.5 seconds and a shield equal to 70/90/100/150/200+15% of max hp ****Does not consume souls

Casting this on a non soul bound champion uses 15% of your current hp, in order to grant them a shield equal to 50/60/70/80/100+ 10% of your maxed Hp ****Does not consume souls

Range: 700 Soul Absorb range: 180 Mana: 50/55/60/70/75 0 mana when cast using hp or souls

https://i.imgur.com/ngeXSyX.jpg "R" "Protect what i cherish"

1.5 second cast time... When targeted on Kl'Hairs bound target ...Kl'Hair releases her soul from her dolls body, this causes Kl'Hair to give up 50% of her current hp, Kl'Hair then fuses both her soul and her bound targets soul together, becoming a shield for the next 5 seconds, or until Kl'Hairs Hp drops to 1 , the damage the bound champion would normally take, is dealt to Kl'Hair instead, .. while in this form Kl'Hair can not use any abilities

                                                    "R"  " Soul Bound "

Self cast, Kl'Hair Giving up 50% of her current hp , Kl'Hair Releases her soul from her dolls body, sending out a ghostly howl and sinking into the earth, ... Kl'hair can select a target location releasing her soul from the ground, all enemies hit by this spell have their souls bound together,making them heavier, slowing them down for 99% for 2 seconds and are damaged for 50/100/200+15% of Kl'hairs current hp every target hit, heals Kl'Hair for 5% of the hp she gave up

Range: protect what i cherish, 400 Mana: 0, uses 50% of hp

Range: soul bound , 2000 Mana: 0 , uses 50% of hp

12 Comments

Friendly Ram7/10/2016, 1:33:17 AM2 votes

I love the idea but need some tweaks in my opinion. Passive is fine as is unique and well done. Q might either just heal on champ hit or have ~25-50% healing on minions. Also is it 40% each or 40% total? W a stun root 3 second cc combo is quite strong. Might be counteracted by needing to put self in danger. E i can't find much wrong with just think soul drops should be off every minion. R is unique and I'd like something like this but unsure on numbers.

Onimarus7/10/2016, 12:18:12 AM1 votes

I appreciate that you tried some restraint in the creation, but this kit will either be too strong or insanely overpowered depending solely on the CDs you place on it. There is hardly a middle ground for this champion, which inevitably means it isn't a good idea.

The attacks that scale with health and AP means it can just build pure tank and be incredibly useful and damaging at all stages of the game. The E is a stronger Zhonyas with next-to-no drawback to using it. The R has zero counterplay too. Cutting out the damage portion entirely, this ability will secure battles completely if used on carries. There is no way to deal with it other than to just kill the champion shielding the carry first or draw back and wait it out. By that point they're either severely disadvantaged anyway or dead though, unless they were far ahead and/or the carry was nearly dead before being shielded anyway. That doesn't take into account you could just use your E and escape most of the damaging spells while having even MORE free hits in.

Seeing as this champion's passive heals whomever she's bounded to, and since she's also a support-type, I would naturally assume that the person you're ulting also gains massive HP regen due to your existence and abilities. While the concept is neat I guess, the focus on hair and the mechanics of the abilities are kinda undesirable. It's just too much.

Eternal 7 7/10/2016, 2:25:38 AM1 votes

^_^ no problem