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Champion Concept: Carno, The Jurassic Assassin

Straw Hat Shaco··5 votes·1,921 views

Carno The Jurassic Assassin Independent

STATS Health:560 (+85 per level) Mana :270 (+30 per level) Attack Damage:55 (+3.6 per level) Attack Speed:0.650 (+2.9% per level) Movement Speed:350 Health Regen: 8.50 (+0.75 per level) Mana Regen: 6 (+0.65 per level) Armor:26.88 (+3.5 per level) Magic Resist:32.1 (+1.25 per level)

ABILITIES Passive - Sharp tooth (Innate) Critical Strikes cause opponent to bleed 50% of Carno's AD over 5 seconds, does not stack."

Q - Claw (Active) Carno hits a target enemy by attacking them twice, causing them to bleed. Mana Cost - 50 mana Cooldown - 9/8/7/6/5

BLEED DAMAGE: 30 / 40 / 50 / 60 / 70 (+ 100% bonus AD) over 6 seconds

W - Pursuit (Passive) Carno gains armor penetration. (Active) Carno picks up the blood trail of all bleeding enemy champions and gains movement speed while in pursuit of them. Range - 1300 Mana Cost - 60 mana Cooldown - 10 seconds ARMOR PENETRATION: 5/10/15/20/25 Movement Bonus - 20%

E - Pounce (Active) Carno leaps onto target dealing damage. If target was bleeding the mana cost is refunded and cooldown is reduced by 3 seconds. Range - 600 Mana Cost - 55/60/65/70/75 Cooldown - 12/11/10/9/8

DAMAGE: 70 / 100 / 130 / 160 / 190 (+ 100% bonus AD)

_R - Pack Hunter _ (Active) Carno gains attack damage and attack speed, but if there are teammates around Carno gains bonus attack damage and attack speed. Mana Cost - 120/110/100 Cooldown - 100/90/80

ATTACK DAMAGE: 30/40/50(+10 for every ally within 1500 units) ATTACK SPEED: 40%/50%/60% (+10% for every ally within 1500 units)

APPEARANCE Raptor like dinosaur http://samlib.ru/img/g/gelxman_a_i/ml/carnotaurus.jpg

Please Leave comments with Constructive Criticism, Thank you item 3025

16 Comments

Antimattrpenguin3 votes

Seems like an awesome champ. I might suggest giving the q 150 range or so to be more useful in gap closers, and attaching the bleeding mechanic to the ultimate as well (with a lower ad ratio)

Overall nice concept. upvoted.

Antimattrpenguin2 votes

I just realized that league doesn't have a dinosaur champion. WTF RITO?????

Straw Hat Shaco1 votes

Yeah, with the latest Prehistoric skins and everything I realized the same thing, had some time on my hands and came up with this haha.

Blckie07451 votes

I like your version, but I had also thought the same thing when I saw them. Here's mine if you care to see! http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/xLA3jQl8-sempora-the-pack-hunter

Rockman1 votes

This is way too simple. Spice it up a bit more.

Straw Hat Shaco1 votes

What do you mean by spicing him up? Do you mean make abilities more elaborate or do you mean add lore n such?

Rockman1 votes

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What do you mean by spicing him up? Do you mean make abilities more elaborate or do you mean add lore n such?

Abilities. The most interesting part you have is the bleeding aspect imo but the rest of his abilities are very generic.

Heres armor pen! Heres a cc gapcloser! Heres an Olaf ult!

Q's fine because I feel like that should be the bread and butter of the champion.

Straw Hat Shaco1 votes

I tried to add a bit more to his kit, any improvements?

Rockman1 votes

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I tried to add a bit more to his kit, any improvements?

You're missing the point.

Straw Hat Shaco1 votes

If I'm not mistaken I believe you are trying to tell me to expand on the bleeding concept, but I'm not quite sure how to do that.

The only kind of improvement I can try and think of off the top of my head would be making his passive a W Active (Active) Carno picks up the bloodtrail of all bleeding enemy champions within 1300 units and gains 20% movement speed while in pursuit of them.

And then making his passive something along the lines of "Critical Strikes cause opponent to bleed 50% of Carno's AD over 5 seconds, does not stack."

Anyways thanks for all the help, your criticism is well appreciated.

Rockman1 votes

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If I'm not mistaken I believe you are trying to tell me to expand on the bleeding concept, but I'm not quite sure how to do that.

The only kind of improvement I can try and think of off the top of my head would be making his passive a W Active (Active) Carno picks up the bloodtrail of all bleeding enemy champions within 1300 units and gains 20% movement speed while in pursuit of them.

And then making his passive something along the lines of "Critical Strikes cause opponent to bleed 50% of Carno's AD over 5 seconds, does not stack."

Anyways thanks for all the help, your criticism is well appreciated.

Think about what Dinosaur does. More specfically think about how smart a Raptor is.

They smell blood. The chase after blood. They also work with allies in order to get their prey.

Having "Well he roars for stuff and he gets stats and stuff" is dumb. Having a leap could work if it wasn't some suppress but was instead linked with bleeding. His ults the worst thing since it is literally just a better Olaf ult and makes no sense for the champion.

Straw Hat Shaco1 votes

This is the best i could come up with. Once again thanks for the advice.

Rockman1 votes

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This is the best i could come up with. Once again thanks for the advice.

Eh its better. I'd say the W active is the best part you made so far.

Straw Hat Shaco1 votes

B

Straw Hat Shaco1 votes

B

Gunpoint1 votes

Lol?

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