Scratchy Scratch Scratche, Dustwind8's Review Thread.

dustwind8·10/7/2014, 6:38:21 PM·4 votes·911 views

If you would like me to review your champ I will do my best to do so. Just post your Champion and link it to your thread and I will go through the same process I use to make my own champion. I should warn you, I wont hold back. If you want an honest opinion then I am your man. I would appreciate a review back, feel free to be as harsh as you'd like.

Mary Aunette, The Puppet Master

If I have an ability that I've been working on I might even suggest it to be used for your champion.

I will be compiling a list in the second post of the threads I have visited and commented on through this thread.

I will post archives of my reviewed threads below.

The Shrouded One By : Cybourg Roku ^ a very detailed champion, even including builds at the end. I believe that everyone should take a look at this for a great way to get a layout for your champion on the forums.

Weiss, the Forgotten BY : Secluded Death An interesting concept but currently it has in my opinion a passive that is too strong into mid-late game. This Champion has a lot of potential.

Mel'rrak, the Hunger of the Void By : Brimex I feel this champion is way under developed and still needs quite a lot of work. No numbers are posted at the time of my review but i will be glad to look at it again in the future.

Quentin, the Spy of Piltover By : Anorexic LeBlanc Great potential, interesting passive and abilities compliment, some slight issues i have with it but i am sure if this champ were to be made he would be fun to play

Freak, The Land Shark By : Cybourg Roku This concept my seem a little odd, but here on the fields of justice, we may just need a little odd. Work out some sort of throwback to SNL in here if you can please. This champion i feel is nearly ready for the fields. Just need to work out one issue with his ultimate and then, I feel, he should be facing off with some interesting mechanics.

Raisiel, The Lightning Kitsune By : Angeluslight Despite facing a possible issue of redundant themes, this champ is rather unique. Sure one ability might sound familiar , but his kit hasn't been done quite like this. A thing that makes this champ different from the others is that any CC she has is either reliant on the enemy, or from Items. Might be an interesting one to play.

Marx, One of the Seven Elite By : Secluded Death No mana costs listed, a passive that reminds me of Caitlyn. This champion seems a little confused in the ability, and has two pump action swordguns. All in all I can see this champion growing and eventually possibly appearing on the fields.

14 Comments

dustwind810/7/2014, 6:38:47 PM1 votes

Ephrial, The Blazing Swordsman By : Angeluslight This champion is one that i messed up on big time the first review i did, I feel that this champ could easily become a strong choice in the game. I look forward to seeing more champions from this person

Jin, the Demon Half-Breed By : Secluded Death This champion (to me) needs improvement on design. It sounds to me like a concept that could work out. Then again, is also isn't a champion role i play often so it makes sense that I'm not really looking forward

Fu Xi: The Ancient Strings of Death By : DMC75001 This champ feels like an anti melee champ who has a passive that is way to strong for the character.

Tricky, The Living Chest By : LordTekron This champion is one of the champions with the most toxic ability possibilties where he can pull an ally inside him for 3 seconds. Also late game becomes one of the strongest boosts in the game that makes this champion broken in my opinion

Eon, The Time Twister By : LordTekron Problem in this champ design is... It is a copy of a Smite champ, I didnt know this, i never touched smite.

Helix, The Twisted King of the Depths By : LordTekron Change the passive... this is just a broken passive that creates a broken champion... think of a champion with the potential to have 900 AP with no items.

Secluded Death10/7/2014, 7:43:11 PM1 votes

Hey again, Dustwind.

Could you review Jin, the Demon Half-Breed?

Thanks in advance!

Angeluslight10/7/2014, 8:30:24 PM1 votes

Ahoy again. I hope your review thread stays afloat in these new forums.

I'd appreciate it if you would please review Ephrial, The Blazing Swordsman.

If you want me to review Mary again in return, let me know.

dustwind810/7/2014, 11:52:44 PM1 votes

Ahoy again. I hope your review thread stays afloat in these new forums.

I'd appreciate it if you would please review Ephrial, The Blazing Swordsman.

If you want me to review Mary again in return, let me know.

Review again at your discretion, Mary has changed a little since you reviewed her last. I also have two more Champs i am trying to work numbers on before i post.

Hey again, Dustwind.

Could you review Jin, the Demon Half-Breed?

Thanks in advance!

I will have the review done as soon as i am capable. :)

LordTekron10/8/2014, 12:08:18 AM1 votes

Hold on a few seconds, I've got a few champs that could use a good review

Tricky, The Living Chest

Eon, The Time Twister

Helix, The Twisted King of the Depths

You can review some of them, all of them, or none of them... And be ready because I have some other concepts upcoming to which I could use a starter review for

DMC7500110/8/2014, 12:10:41 AM1 votes

Got a champ for your reviewing pleasure!

Fu Xi: The Ancient Strings of Death

Give it a whirl, and see how you like it!

dustwind810/8/2014, 9:42:21 PM1 votes

@DMC75001 & LordTekron I will review all of these by Saturday(i hope) :)

dustwind810/11/2014, 10:16:04 PM1 votes

okay, all done and caught up, i am going to Re look at Angeluslight's concept again tomorrow.

dustwind810/12/2014, 5:17:17 PM1 votes

Happy thanksgiving to all my fellow Canadian players =)

dustwind810/13/2014, 8:17:05 PM1 votes

bring it up

Bourmegar10/13/2014, 8:23:41 PM1 votes

Hi there. Nice to have a review center here :) Would you like to review Mila the stray light? just keep in mind that I am kinda on a rework for it so if you have any ideas would you like to share them as well?