[Champion Concept] Odessia, Herald of the Black Cove

Jellycake Demon·1/20/2016, 7:47:33 AM·3 votes·1,106 views

Place of Origins: Serpent Iles. Upon Selection: The world will drown in sorrow.

[Recently Added] So I posted Odessia's Concept a Month ago & never really explained who she is & she wants....well the reason I never really added or even posted it was because it seems that nobody really likes the Lore i give my Champions or that I never really cared about doing Lore. So I just stopped posting those parts. But every know & then I will add a Backstory or a full on Lore if I feel really attached to my concept, & I did feel that Odessia's story needed to be told, so here is a brief description of her Lore:

So basically Odessia is Kraken Priest like Illaoi but one who was still in training, but one day the Nagakabouros temple that she was assigned to became under attack by strange unknown creature that seemed to emanate void energy. As the creature stormed across the Island that the temple was on, it was eventually saved when Illaoi came to the rescue battled the creatures of the island....but the damage was already done.

Odessia was killed during the fight, but because she was flunged out to sea when a massive creature was rampaging through the temple she was not given proper burial rites. Her body floated through the sea's for months until it came to shore on a very tiny little cove, this is where Odessia became who she is today. As her body laid on the shore of this little cove a strange black force started to seep into her corpse & over time was bringing it back to life, (and NO she is not apart of the Shadow Iles.) when she was brought back to life her old identity was overwhelmed & overshadowed by a new personality.

So now she tries to convert people & make them embrace this dark force she has embarrassed, WITH an side-motive of taking revenge on Illaoi who she blames about her death & how the faith she had in Nagakabouros was not....given back.

Primary: Mage. Secondary: . Additional Roles: Player Choice.

Statistics: Attack Power: 2. Defense Power: 5. Ability Power: 8. Difficulty: 5.

Health: 380(+30). Health Regen.: 1.9(+0.38) Mana: 267(+29). Mana Regen.: 1.80(+0.37) Attack Range: 520(Range). Attack Damage: 21(+2.2) Armor: 14(+2.1). Magic Res.: 30(+0) Attack Speed: 0.630(+2.2%). Move. Speed: 342.

Friends: . Enemies: Illaoi/Gangplank/Nami.

Appearance: Odessia is a 5’1ft tall woman with pale skin, black hair & grey colored eyes. Odessia wears a tattered hood & cloak that covers her upper torso, her mouth is covered by a grey vale. From her hood stretches four scarfs, 2 of the black scarfs wrap around her waist that then ends with a sash hanging in front of her waist, the other 2 wrap around one of her arms that also have small arm guards.

Summoner Spells: summoner 4 & summoner 12

Item Builds: Starting Items: item 3340/item 2003/item 1056. Essential Items: item 3020/item 3027/item 3165. Offensive Items: item 3116/item 3135/item 3285/item 3089. Defensive Items: item 3065/item 3157/item 3102/item 3001.

Passive: Dark Tides. Odessia is always surrounded by a 165-radius pool of black water, when an enemy Champion is within this pool of water or in the pool made from the Black Seas when Odessia uses one of her Abilities these pools of water will drain 3% of an enemy Champions Max HP to Heal Odessia. After being Healed by this Passive it will go on a 5 second Cool Down.

Q-Ability: Black Seas. Range: 600. Cool Down: 16/15/14/13/12. Cost: 90. Magic Damage: 65/85/105/125/145(+40% bonus AP). Activate: after Odessia has chosen a 100-radius location within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Odessia will summon a geyser of black water to erupt out of the ground, after a 0.25 second delay after activation the geyser will deal Magic Damage to all enemies within the radius while also Knocking Up all damaged enemies. After the geyser erupts it will leave behind a 100-radius pool of Dark Tides for 6 seconds.

W-Ability: Drowning In Agony. Range: 450. Cool Down: 21/20/19/18/17. Cost: 60/70/80/90/100. Magic Damage: 20/30/40/50/60(+40% bonus AP). Activate: after Odessia has chosen a 185-radius within this Abilities Casting Range then upon its activation Odessia will create a large pool of black water that will linger on the Map for 2 seconds, while an enemy Champion is within this pool will continue to be dealt Magic Damage every 0.5 seconds while having a 30% Movement Speed while they remain in the pool.

E-Ability: Torrential Wave. Range: 450. Cool Down: 18/17/16/15/14. Cost: 40/50/60/70/80. Magic Damage: 30/50/70/90/110(+40% bonus AP). Activate: after Odessia has chosen a semi-broad path with this Ability then upon its activation Odessia will send out a wave of black water in the targeted direction, when the wave makes contact with an enemy it will deal Magic Damage. When the wave makes contact with the pool made by Black Seas the pool explode again dealing its own damage, if it comes in contact with the pool of Drowning In Agony the pool will deal the waves damage to all enemies within the pool.

R-Ability: Submerged In Darkness. Range: Self-Cast to Global. Cool Down: 200/170/140. Cost: 120. Magic Damage: 110/160/210(+40% bonus AP). Attack Speed Slow: 30/40/50%. Movement Speed Slow: 15%. Activate: after Odessia has activated this Ability Odessia will Channel a large amounts of black waters within her body for 2 seconds, after the Channel Odessia will release a massive expanding wave of black water that expands from her to cover the entire Map dealing Magic Damage to all enemy Champions currently on the Map. When this wave has damaged an enemy Champion it will also apply an Attack/Movement Speed Slow & having affected enemy Champions take 10% increased damage from all sources for 2.5 seconds.

_Taunts & Jokes to _Illaoi: "My God is shapeless, it is formless. Your God is nothing but a fragile squid." "Your God governs life, mine governs the dead. The dead outnumber the living." "Your God creates all living things in this world? I am no exception." "You want me to chase my desire, I'm trying to drown the world. That is my desire." "Motion? I'll show you all the motion you want." "The waves are always in motion, the black tide is also in motion."

Taunts & Jokes toGangplank: "Leave the kraken wench, my love. You belong with the dark tides." "Be with me my love & I will show you a world without pain." "Your burning hatred, my chilling sorrow. We are a perfect for one another."

Taunts & Jokes toNami: "You can't stop the nightmares of the black depths."

14 Comments

NaughtyNocturn1/20/2016, 12:19:30 PM2 votes

I’m not very good with the numbers in this game, but the concept is very cool. I like the idea for the ultimate, very interesting and would be pretty terrifying to see an enemy use. Good work

Pyrodinium1/20/2016, 11:44:26 PM2 votes

The ultimate seems cool, but the rest of the kit (especially Dark Tides) is just begging to go to Top lane and bully any enemy melee champion with extreme prejudice.

Jellycake Demon1/24/2016, 6:21:19 AM1 votes

bump

Jellycake Demon1/26/2016, 5:15:35 AM1 votes

Kon'nichiwa

Jellycake Demon3/3/2016, 12:10:29 PM1 votes

hello everybody please leave a comment on your Thoughts & Opinions about Odessia

impishDullahan5/4/2016, 8:58:53 PM1 votes

Sorry it took a while for me to have a look at this. I hope you're fine with me being nit picky.

Stats 0. The health is terribly low. both at levels 1 and 18. Bump the level 1 up between 100 and 200 and bump the scaling to something closer to to 70. Don't have it scale less than 67 in this instance and I think you can get away with the scaling going up to 78.

  1. The health regeneration is also terribly low. I'd put it's level 18 to around a 100th of the max health maybe so far as a 120th of the max health.

  2. The mana pool is also pretty low. Level 1 only needs a little bump. I'd probably double the scaling.

  3. The mana regeneration in relativity to the current pool is good so adjust it accordingly.

  4. Her level 18 attack is the level 1 of other champs. The scaling is fine but bump the base up by 30ish.

  5. Armour seems fine, maybe only a mite lower than preferable but isn't too too off.

  6. All the other stats seem fin but move speeds are multiples of 5 and it annoys me.

Abilities 0. The delay on Black Seas is negligible so bump that up. We don't want any instant knock-ups now do we? Also, the AoE's radius is pretty small, the size of Teemo. I'd bump to maybe 250 or larger but not too large.

  1. Drowning in Agony seems pretty solid. Again might want to bump it's AoE radius a little. I might lengthen the time and reduce the AP scaling a little but still a solid ability.

  2. Torrential wave looks like a pretty cool ability. Inter-ability interactions are always cool. You could get away with increasing the damage on it because it looks like the primary damage dealing ability. If you do, drop Black Sea's damage just a touch.

  3. Submerged in Darkness seems a little like a Vlad ultimate on steroids. It seems a little strong. Maybe not have it global but as a large AoE would make it a little more healthy and make sure champions can dash through the wave or something so that there's is some counter play. An ability that just makes every enemy on the map do less stuff is a bit over powered. Still a great ability.

Other Notes I am disappointed at the lack of a proper backstory or some expanded lore. What you have has got some potential.

As a whole, Odessia seems pretty cool. Lot's of AoE and zone control; and all the abilities fir well thematically. You seem to like your keeping your stats low, and I mean really low; lower than anything already in the game. But I suppose that when I started, everything was overpowered and then there are other who'd be worried about making the champion over powered and make it quite underpowered. The mechanics seem pretty cohesive; 'though, the channel on the ultimate is terrible for making picks or being in the middle the fray without some effect to keep her alive in the middle of a raging fight.

Another thing to note, the cooldown's could have some tweaking done to them. They are all pretty high maybe play with a way to lessen one, maybe even a second just a mite, so there is a proper primary poking ability.

Again, sorry for the critical nit pickiness but I hope you will take at least some of it into account. Good luck with any future comcepts.

Now, I would be ever so pleased if you could also have a look at any of mine. I'll link my most recent here: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/PwLE3xaQ-champion-concept-luca-the-light-of-zaun. The other 3 are linked at the top of the page and in the comments should you be interested.

Jellycake Demon7/1/2016, 3:37:13 AM1 votes

bump*[slayer-jinx-catface]*

CobaltTheMadMage7/1/2016, 4:22:40 AM1 votes

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