Soldier [Champion Concept]

Jigglypuff·1/5/2015, 12:06:57 AM·2 votes·2,674 views

I am concerting a champion that uses a Bayonet, imagine a champion who utilizes both melee and range without switching forms like Gnar... Elise and Jayce. Keep in mind that this guy is a soldier...

Champ name:Alexander

Passive: Warriors call, Allows this unit to cut down brush to see within in it for 15 seconds... This works by walking into a bush and grants vision inside the bush for 15 seconds.

1: Ranged is limited - Q: Loads ammo ability to use ranged with 80% of what his melee damage would do, but 500 AA range, push Q again to cancel if someone is close and you need to go melee Name: Reload/Contract

2: Gap close, cuz why not and added effects lol - W: Lunges t'words enemy champion or monster with bayonet... When Q is active shoots a barrage of bullets which cause you to recoil further in needed direction [Does not deal damage] - Name: Cavalry

3: Needs a knock back :) - E: Throws down a grenade (Range 200) The grenade will knock back any enemies it hits after it has been on the ground for 1 second and deals damage. Name: Grenade toss

4: Ofc needs an OP ult, who doesn't... R: Grants 300 increased vision with and 40% attack speed for 30 seconds. Name: Soldiers calling

http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130827013455/the-rp-fear/images/5/54/Josh.jpg

What he would probably look like

http://static3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110207075129/fallout/images/5/57/FNV_Service_Rifle_All_Bayonet.png

His weapon, but probably would be bigger.

PS. Sorry for cross threading, but I seen this was a better place to put it instead of GD c:

5 Comments

Quindarian1/5/2015, 12:56:05 AM1 votes

Gangplank is good enough for me, but good idea.

Newb the Legend1/5/2015, 5:35:31 AM1 votes

Lore: Try to make it so he fits into Valeran's (Valoran's?) lore so that Riot could consider your champ. Other champs have been cancelled for this very reason.

Passive: Not a bad idea. Unique. Could be very useful but seems to be more for scouts or explorers more than soldiers. May need changing.

Q Ability: Kind-of similar to other abilities, but is interesting. Maybe make him much slower while using it with a cooldown like 5 seconds and maybe keep the damage reduction.

W Ability: Gap Closer: Good, maybe have it so you dash to a target location so it can be used getting away or chasing. I would have a slow on the gap closer if it hits a target champion. When Q is Activated: Maybe make it have some damage but make the two abilities have a shared cooldown.

E Ability: Sounds good, if that 200 range is how far he throws it you may want to make it farther, and maybe he could have a knockback where it knocks back the opponent to a certain point away from the middle of the grenade, damage weakens as well as the distance.

R Ability: 300 increased vision, would be nice but how could you use it more? It won't allow him to attack faster or farther if that is what you want to achieve with this ult. His attack speed is good, but make it so it marks his enemies with something and when he damages them with his w or e it deals bonus damage to them? Not sure with this one.

Not a bad concept, could use some changes, probably needs to be fitted into lore to be considered, maybe become a forgotten soldier whose squadron got wiped out by an enemy.

Newb the Legend1/5/2015, 5:48:44 AM1 votes

Yeah if there is anything else I could help with just reply and I can try to help!