Slumber Party Taliyah (concept doodles)

I saw a skin concept for Slumber Party Zac awhile ago and thought it was fitting for Tali, too. My friendo Dash retweeted it and it got really positive feedback. I was told by friends that I should submit this somewhere other than Twitter. These are my doodles so far:

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/C6MykNaU4AAhnDN.jpg https://pbs.twimg.com/media/C6S2GVtUwAAWuvV.jpg:large

I'm pretty new with concepts for skins, so pls shoot your ideas this way if you think something would look better.

If you wanna follow along with updates about the skin you can follow my Twitter! I'll post pretty often. https://twitter.com/kelphox

PS: I had no idea what to do with her Seismic Shove (w) and the most creative thing I could come up with is a popcorn bag popping ¯_(ツ)_/¯