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The Void Samurai - Cheng

UnknownTerritory·5/18/2018, 7:19:39 PM·1 votes·648 views

#Lore

Long time ago in the depths of the void was an eruption.This opened a big dark hole in the ground and it started to suck every living creature towards it.The suction was so hard that even the toughest creatures couldn't resist it.Dark Smoke quickly covered the entire place as the place began to shake violently.Nobody was able to stop it .... nobody had the power.Deep in the hole, there was a body forming from the destruction.His weapon - Katana

Type - AP/Melee Fighter - Mid,Top Mana

They mess with the wrong person - ......

Passive: Rising Rower Every time Cheng gets struck by a heavy ap damage he will heal himself [7% of his missing health] depending on what level he is. **The cooldown is 45 seconds **

~ They forget that im born from there

Q - Quick Discharge - _Cheng cannot active this ability untill his damaged. Every stun,damage or **slow **will give an opportunity to activate this ability. This ability gives Cheng bonus Extra Damage. If the damage is very high Cheng will get bonus 15% more damage _

W - The Scream of the Samurai - Cheng summons two spirit Samurai warriors from the void in flames dealing 12/14/15/18/19 of the target maximum health [AP]

~ Rise my warriors

E - Empower - Cheng surrounds himself with a shield quckly fallowed by a speed boost. **The first enemy attacked will be slowed **

R - Final Stage - Cheng empowers his sword and then quickly dashes trough all enemies damaging and blinding them for 1 sec. A hole opens in the ground - then they get blinded for 1 sec

Upon Ultimate - Now they die! Upon Ultimate - Pathetic! Upon Ultimate - Death Is for the WEAK! Upon Ultimate - AAAAAAGHHH

Taunt Enemy champions

Katarina - Your death will be a masterpiece

Zed - Challenging enemy

Ashe - I will watch you scream...

Yasuo - Your name will not be remembered

Janna - You are a joke

1 Comments

You Disgust Me5/18/2018, 7:39:22 PM2 votes

Hello, Unknown Territory. I'll critique your concept.

###Passive: The passive is interesting, but it seems very situational and a little under-powered. Define "heavy ap damage." Additionally, 45 seconds is a long time especially for late game. I would suggest looking at Maokai's passive for reference. You may need a way to gradually lower the cooldown of the passive. Perhaps add a slight cooldown reduction every time Cheng takes damage similar to Amumu's Tantrum?

###Q: This skill is very gimmicky and seems to be missing something. Try and experiment more with this skill. Either that or move the damage steroid to his passive upon taking significant ap damage, and make this a different skill.

###W: I'm a little confused on how this skill works. Is it a skillshot or a targeted AoE? Do the soldiers attack a point and click target? If this skill deals as much maximum health as stated, it may be more beneficial to build this champion as a tank, which may contradict the AP/fighter aspect of the design.

###E: I have no quarrels with this skill.

###R: I'm not sure why you added a blind to this skill. Mages for the most part don't rely on auto attacks as their primary source of damage, so a blind would be pretty useless here.