Miranda A Huntress in limbo [Champion Concept] (WIP)

ready for combat·11/6/2016, 9:18:48 PM·2 votes·1,379 views

Edit: clean splash added, number changes on passive, and a bit of clean up.

this is my concept for a new type of jungle marksman diver type. she combination of Piltover and the Shadow Isles to make a unique concept. with the ability to enter Limbo and go as ham as she wishes, but with a con of being limited of tools she has open to her. this is a Work In Progress concept and would appreciate any feed back on this champion.

her clean splash idea (background coming soon): http://i.imgur.com/XoQ34tj.jpg

Lore (for now hers the very short or medium version, currently doing the long version): Miranda is from a line of wealthy hunters and great scientists living in the forests near Piltover. one day her and her husband when on a hunting trip and her husband was hit by a mysterious purple substance (Void) that made him greatly sick. Miranda then saute to find a way to cure it, but the longer she searched the more corrupted he husband became. within her desperation she used lots of her money to hire men that would be willing to sail with her to The Shadow Isles to capture lost souls to see if they can give a way of separating his soul from his body to keep him alive. for the trip she created a suit that would make undetectable to creatures in the Isles. once she reached the Isles she entered alone full aware that none have returned from the Isles. she manages to capture 5 different souls bringing them back to the boat one by one, putting them in cages for transport. they then leave the Shadow Isles and return to Piltover becoming the first to enter and leave untouched. she then gets to work finding a way to separate the souls form their physical form. word spreads of their return from the isles with lost souls intact, this interests Jayce which then asks to help her in the research of the souls. with them both working together she quickly discovers a way to separate the soul from the body, but it requires Blood of a human in order to survive beyond its physical form. knowing this she secretly enters Piltover in her suit killing and extracting blood from the weak and the poor people of Piltover. weeks pass and Jayce soon finds out what she has been doing and gears up to stop her with the police. when she sees them all approaching her home she quickly runs to her lab with her suit and rifle. she then starts to extract her husbands soul from his body. once success full the lost souls quickly smell it and become angry, hungering for his soul. so much they break through their cages and try to attack Miranda. shes backed in a corner with no where to go. she shots as fast as she can but misses every shot hitting vile's and runes that completely explode the lab create a massive cloud of smoke. this knocks back Jayce and the police and Miranda's goes flying deep into the forest. Miranda is knocked out for a couple of days and once she awakens, her life is completely changed. once knowing what she is she discovers her husbands soul faiding. she now roams the streets of Piltover looking for blood to keep her husband alive.

if their are any typo's or misunderstanding, let me know

what she use to look like http://imgur.com/a/vwKxw

her weapon http://imgur.com/a/7Bc6U

what she is now http://imgur.com/a/b0kIW

designs aren't final as im mostly looking for cool silhouette's first and design ideas before true detail

Primary: Marksman Secondary: Assassin Main role: Jungle can also: Bot Range: Melee - 150 / Ranged - 600

**Ability's - Note: **

  • her W (Soul of The Huntress) has 1 already in it and can only be upgraded 3 times (moving the extra points to her Q and E) when she upgrades her ultimate.
  • Read W (Soul of The Huntress) before reading Limbo Abilitys

Passive - Blood Thirsty Syringe: On her first basic attack to enemy champions she stuns them for 0.75 seconds and deals 30 (+5 per level) plus 5% of the targets maximum health. She then adds 20% Blood Fuel to her resource bar. Her attacks against the same target then add 5% per strike to her resource bar for the next 3 seconds. she must wait 8 seconds before this passive resets on the same target.

Limbo: kills and assists refresh the duration of Soul of The Huntress and her soul gains 20% of it missing health back

Note:

  • she can have up to 100% of Blood in her Resource bar
  • Blood falls off after 5 seconds of not being in combat

Q: Active: she dashes a sort distance forward dealing 40/60/80/100/120/140(+30%AD) and adding 10% to her Blood Well. Subsequent strikes to the same target within 10 seconds deal 50% less damage.

Limbo: after a 1 second delay she fires a bloody bullet that deals 40/60/80/100/120/140(+60% of Bonus AD) plus 3% increased damage for every 20% of Blood she has and using a bullet. This action takes all stored Blood.

No Cost Cooldown: 6 seconds at all levels Physical Range: 250 Limbo Range: 800

Note: none yet

W: Soul of The Huntress - Active: she exits her physical form and enters Limbo for 7/8/9/10 seconds making her physical form become un- targetable. In this form she carries her ancestors Rotary Cannon.

Rotary Cannon has 3 shots that each deal (10/15/20/25 + 20% of Bonus AD) additional damage, +450 increased range, and she must reload for 2.5 seconds before she can fire again.

Limbo: Miranda becomes a soul of the physical world. Her soul only has (300/350/400/450 + 15 per level (+30% of her Total AD)) health, 0 armor and magic resist, and can go only a maximum of 800 units from her physical body.

Upon losing all health or reactivating this ability, her soul will return to her physical body and her physical form will be dealt 80% of her souls missing health as magic damage (Maximum 350 + 10 per level damage).

Cost: 7/8/9/10% of her maximum health Cooldown: 24/22/20/18 seconds

Note: none yet

E: Quick Load - Limbo Passive: when reloading her Rotary Cannon she gains duration bar under her health that tells her how long tell she’s done reloading and has a Golden Strip near the beginning. Activating Quick Load on the Golden Strip grants her a stack of Rotary Speed. Maximum 3 stacks

Active: when activating the Golden Strip she instantly reloads and gains Rotary Speed granting 5/7.5/10/12.5/15/17.5% attack speed per stack and her first shot adds 10% Blood to her resource bar.

No Cost No Cooldown

Note:

  • it works like Gears of War reload system
  • the more stacks you have the smaller the window of the Golden Strip gets

R - Entry to Limbo: Passive: Upgrading this ability upgrades Soul of The Huntress.

Active: after a 1.5 second channel and a global screech she rushes forward towards the curser gaining 50% increased movement speed towards enemy champions for the next 6 seconds. Upon making contact with an enemy champion she locks them in place for 1 second before entering them both into Limbo that lasts 6/7/8 seconds.

Both Miranda and her target become un-targetable to everyone outside of Limbo and lose 100% of their vision, but they can see each other. While in Limbo both you and your target can attack each other, gain 30% increased movement speed towards one another and ignore unit collision.

No Cost Cooldown: 180/165/150 seconds

thank you for taking the time to read this and please tell me what you think in the comments.[slayer-jinx-catface]

4 Comments

CrazyBear198711/7/2016, 4:58:49 AM1 votes

Love your sketches

Lore was TL,DR - I usually dont know much about story telling and feel the user has every power to right what they want. so no offence i skipped it XD

so far...WOW, that alot of detailed work going on here. Far beyond my knowledge to to comment and give feedback XD

Would love to see you update the artwork and maybe some build etcs gameplay notes

just going to say; Hope to see more from you and your concepts

[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

ready for combat11/12/2016, 4:11:19 AM1 votes

Update.

  • made it a bit more clear to read and added splash idea

right now i have a grey scale so you can see her silhouette

bad arcade kitty11/14/2016, 3:38:30 AM1 votes

imbo is inhabited by righteous non-christians, and god certainly doesn't need some huntress there to hunt those good souls

also your second pic is a clear copypaste of kindred