The Dune Walker
Hey! I recently made a post about Charkotezik, or Charr until he remembers his name. Well, now he has all the things I think is required to have a good concept. He can always be changed/tweaked so don't feel bad to criticize! Leave thoughts down below!
General Information
Name: Charr, also known as Charkotezik Title: The Dune Walker Faction: Shurima Class: Harasser-Duelist/Teamfighter
General Stats
Health: 550 Durability (his mana): 10 Attack Damage: 66 Attack Range: 155 Attack Speed: 0.65 Armor: 36 Magic Resist: 33 Movement Speed: 343
Lore
_Many question if Charkotezik’s existence is real or not. Many believe he is just a Shuriman folktale, but he’s real. Your father fought alongside him once._
My mother always told me that after she told his tale. What’s so special about him? I have never found out, for my mother expired before she could expound on her reasoning. My mind often wanders to this rather miniscule topic, but to me it’s everything.
_Charkotezik was born a slave to the emperor, who was told his life would consist of carrying the supplies of war to Shuriman outpost to Shuriman outpost. He never expected his life expand beyond this, but that all changed on one fateful night. _
I always examined her face, she always had a starry eyes and a big grin, as if waiting for me to ask to continue. My mother always waited, because I would always ask.
_ Charkotezik was carrying a sack of gold and crystals over his shoulder, by which now the bag is familiar as a family he could’ve had. As he heaved the massive bag of gold, he heard a rather unfamiliar sound, the sound of metal on leather. Charkotezik heard the yell of his owner, or captain as he called him, and then he heard the wind whistle, then the calling stopped. He knew raiders have decided to raid his team, he tried to mentally prepare himself for such an occasion, but he never expected this much fear to corrupt and root in his soul. He had a sword, but he was afraid to be that close to a man that isn’t afraid to harvest the life of another for greed. So, legend has it he used cloth from his tunic and a gold rod from his luggage and used it to make a glaive._
That last sentence always raised my eyebrow. Why make a glaive? Why be afraid? If I was Charkotezik I’d kick their butts! I would always say something like that, and then my mother would chuckle in response. After the chuckling died down she would take a deep breath and continue the tale.
_Charkotezik, as a young man, screamed to get the bandits attention, who were looting his owner. The bandits shot their heads in his direction, but all they saw was a blur of a warrior. One slash and a bandit collapsed on now wet sand, one strike and another fell on top of his fallen friend, and one thrust slew the last bandit, who asked who he was. “Charkotezik,”. The only time his name felt heavy with respect. He returned home to be honored and placed in the forces of shurima, not as a foot soldier, but was put in the ranks of the ascended despite being a mere shuriman man. _
What happened to him? I would always ask, followed up with other questions. I always pictured him fighting alongside my favorite ascended, Renekton. My mother always seemed to hesitate before telling me the rest, but she did nonetheless.
_It isn’t known. Some say he found the love of another and put his past behind him, some say he left Shurima all together, but most say he perished with the rest of ancient shurima. But, Shurima has risen from the dunes, so maybe he rose with it. Your father thought he perished, until he got in trouble with the foul beasts known as the Xer’sai. Your father could only take down one, before being swarmed. He then saw a blur of gold, and the Xer’sai flew and collapsed onto the ground, not realizing their mortality is about to expire. When your father got up, he saw a man in a torn tunic. The one thing that caught his eye, however, was a magical shattered glaive._
That is when I could no longer keep my shock and awe to myself. I would get all excited and my mouth would regurgitate words faster than I could think of them. My mother would let a laugh escape from her lips and say that one line:
_ Many question if Charkotezik’s existence is real or not. Many believe he is just a Shuriman folktale, but he’s real. Your father fought alongside him once._
Today is my first day in the Shuriman army, I hope that I could live up to Charkotezik’s legacy.
Abilities
Passive:The Ascended Glaive/Shurima’s Fists Charr wields an ancient and shattered glaive, held together by magic. -Charr doesn’t have mana, he has durability (10 durability max) _The Ascended Glaive: _ -grants Charr longer attack range as well as having magic damage on basic attack based on 5% of his attack damage -If Charr runs out of durability, his glaive will shatter and he will switch to Shurima’s Fists -Charr can regain his glaive by killing/assisting an enemy champion, walking into fountain, or staying out of combat for 30 seconds. Shurima’s Fists: -Charr gets less attack range, and gets access to only 90% of his attack damage. But, 10% of bonus Attack Damage is turned into bonush health. -Charr now grants all allies in a 1000 radius a 30 movement speed boost if they move towards him, -Charr deals a bonus 50% of his bonus Attack Damage to minions and jungle camps (not epic monsters). -Charr cannot use his ult, Sandstorm, while using the Fist’s of Shurima
Q Ability: Legendary Strike/Ancient Jab Legendary Strike: 10/9/8/7/6 Second CD, 1 durability Charr thrusts his glaive forward, going through all enemies hit and deals 50/100/150/200/250 (+50% of bonus AD). Enemy champions hit by Legendary Strike are slowed by 20/30/40/50/60% for 0.5 seconds. Ancient Jab: 8 Second CD Charr’s next basic attack deals an extra 80/100/120/140/160 (+75% of bonus AD). Enemies hit by Ancient Jab lose 10% of all armor and magic resist for 3 seconds.
W Ability: Shuriman Slash/Shuriman War cry Shuriman Slash: 12 Second CD, 1 Durability Charr slashes in a cone, dealing 75/85/95/105/115 damage (40% of bonus AD). if Charr hits an enemy champion, his Q’s cooldown is reduced by 1 second. Shuriman War cry: 16/15/14/13/12 Second CD Charr screams an ancient battle cry, giving all allies in a 650 radius a 20/40/60/80/100(+5% of maximum health) attack damage boost for 4 seconds. Charr also gets a 40/50/60/70/80 movement speed boost for 2.5 seconds.
E Ability: Warrior’s Leap/Dash of Shurima Warrior’s Leap: 20/19/18/17/16 Second CD, 2 Durability Charr leaps into the air and slams into the ground at a 550 radius, dealing 40/45/50/55/60 (+25% of bonus AD) attack damage. Dash of Shurima: 20 Second CD Charr charges in a straight 500 unit long line. If Charr hits an enemy champion, he deals 20/25/30/35/40 (20% of bonus AD) attack damage. It also stuns enemies for 0.6/0.7/0.8/0.9/1.0 seconds. Dash of Shurima cannot go through walls.
Ultimate: Sandstorm/Strength of Charkotezik. Sandstorm:110/100/90 Second CD, 0 Durability Charr creates a 600 unit long, 80 degree cone of sand. Enemies in the sand are nearsighted and get marked with Shurima’s Fury for 2/3/4 seconds. Strength of Charkotezik: 110/100/90 Second CD. All of Charr’s Durability Charr slams his glaive into the ground, exploding all marks of Shurima’s Fury, dealing 150/200/250 (+95% of bonus AD) and grounding them for 0.5 seconds.
Animation Ideas
Recall: Slams glaive into the ground, and it shatters in the air. Joke: Charr spins his glaive around, only for it to shatter and he has visible frusturation Taunt: He drops his glaive (or not depending on stance) and punches the air, Dance: He sits down, in rest. Death: Charr collapses on the ground, and his glaive shatters.
Quotes/Interactions
Getting Picked: My name...Charr, I think Getting Banned: Hmmph
First Move 1: Shurima has risen once again, As have I. First Move 2: A warrior of legend is nothing if he doesn't remember his own name... hmmph First Move 3: Targon is a power that seems too eager to prove its worth. They must be stopped. First Move 4: Charr... Charrgo! No... that's not it.
Move 1: Fine. Move 2: Grass is more soothing than the dunes... though they are all I know. Move 3: Where does this path lead? Don't know, don't care. Move 4: grunt Move 5: Talking is a waste of breath. Move 6: Walk until you see purpose. As is my way of things. ** Move in River:** An actual river, huh? Neat.
Attack 1: growl Attack 2: Here goes nothing Attack 3: This blade will be damp, or their's will be. Attack 4: hrmmph Attack 5: Ancient doesn't mean weak. **Attack 6:**How quick will you die? ... They usually die pretty fast.
Recalling: I will be back. I will.
Switching to Shurima's Fists 1: ALLIES! RALLY TO ME! Switching to Shurima's Fists 2: Don't need a blade for the likes of you. Switching to Shurima's Fists 3: ...Fine. Fists. Switching to Ascended Glaive 1: Here we go. Switching to Ascended Glaive 2: Missed ya. Switching to Ascended Glaive 3: Welcome back, be stronger next time.
Joke 1: This weapon gets shattered more than my enemies, heh. Joke to Pyke: I'm a dead guy that kills things, you're a dead guy that kills things... wanna be friends? No? Joke to any shuriman: It's weird to be, ya know, not surrounded by sand. Joke to any Targonian: I have a joke, your chances of survival... heh.
Taunt 1: I've slain mountainous enemies in one strike, good luck. Taunt 2: hmmph. Taunt any ally: Allies are temporary, they always lose interest in 'ya. Taunt any shuriman: It was an honor, but Shurima does not need you. Taunt any allied Shuriman: Do you know me? What is my name? Taunt any Darkin So are you these Darkin? Looks like a demon to me. Taunt Nasus: I am sorry to betray, but you stand in my path. It was an honor, Nasus. Taunt Renekton: ARE YOU INCAPABLE OF SEEING THE CARNAGE YOU CAUSE? AND FOR WHAT? I beg for your forgiveness, old friend. Taunt Azir: First, Xerath. Now, me. Trust no soul, Azir. May your soul flow in every grain of sand in Shurima. Taunt Xerath: This is for Renekton. This is for Azir. This is for every soul lost in Shurima. Death comes, Xerath. Taunt Jax: I have heard of you, you ran away from Icathia when it needed you the most. Jax, you go by now? Taunt Pantheon: You... you are nothing but a shell of a man, as I am. But, at least I have control over my husk. Taunt Aurelion Sol: You aren't really Targonian? Well... Still gonna slay 'ya. Taunt Zoe: You! You were said to betray Shuriman's Ascended? Let's make this... slow. Taunt any other Targonian: Targon crumbles. As will you.
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