Sorry to say, but this montage might be one of the worst I have ever seen.
- Clips. You need to find better ones. Flashing in panic or by accident isn't a good clip (it might be if something funny follows it, but the flash by itself isn't funny). Neither is just going in and smiting baron (also dying afterwards). Or dodging one of the easiest skillshots to dodge in the game, while enemy didn't have clear vision on you (the one titled "Jukes"). Or killing someone with ultimate (seriously, what made you include it in video? What's so strange/funny/skillful/failing in killing an enemy with targeted ultimate that deals 28% of enemy health as magic damage?). Few clips that could be worthy of including in some video (but with a little bit of editing): Lee Sin stealing blue (only that part, the flash fail is completely unnecessary), the last clip (soraka running), possibly the Nami ultimate. That's it.
In short, most of your clips were terrible. You need to find better ones.
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Music - either use it or don't use it. Don't switch between the two on random clips.
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Comments - the same as above (though, the preferable one would be don't add them - they take attention away from video).
So you need to:
- Get better clips
- Have some cohesion (not sure if it's correct to use this word here) in your clip - so - the music, the comments and the clips should all feel like they belong into the video.