Starting to make youtube videos

So I decided to start recording some of my games that I play and uploading them on youtube. This was one of my better games where I started off kind of bad but came back. Please let me know what you all think and let me know how I could improve with these videos.

Before you say it, I know I suck at this game and I know what my main flaws are. I'm just looking for ideas on how to make the video/commentary more enjoyable. I'll be uploading more videos as well, I'll try to have at least 1 video every 2-3 days and will also start doing other games eventually.