Paper on Toxic League Players
dbpaperfinal.pdf
I posted a survey for toxic players here a while ago. It was for a class paper so I figured I'd post it: https://www.docdroid.net/EJWlwWB/dbpaperfinal.pdf
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is this the real tank man janna player?
Some quick notes (from an academic standpoint) as I glance through this;
Avoid the use of internet slang, especially when you don't explain what that slang means. I see "flamer" peppered throughout the paper, and while an avid gamer will immediately know what that means, others will not. You use the terms "nexus" and "champions" in your introductory paragraph to explain what league of legends is, but someone who needs such an explanation might not know what those two things represents. It would be better to explain it as "base" and "characters" instead of the terms that are used in the game.
When you use block quotes, place the citation immediately after (while still in the quote).
In general, I think you use quotes far too much, often to just finish your sentence you were in the middle of saying anyway. It's unnecessary.