Honestly, I think that your build is pretty good for one of the more damage-heavy Gnar builds. Phantom Dancer, Thornmail and Sunfire Cape all help mitigate damage done by most top laners, since the majority run off of AD scaling and some are pretty AA-heavy (hi Aatrox). Not only that, but Blade of the Ruined King and Bloodthirster help further increase survivability alongside Berserker's Greaves, since you have a fair amount of Lifesteal and attack speed - and on top of that, the Attack Speed plays in well to Gnar's mini-mechanic with Hyper - pelt enemies from a distance, score big damage, then use Mega Gnar for cleanup or the like.
If it feels effective, keep with it![slayer-pantheon-thumbs]