we are making a lot of progress guys! I love the feed back im getting and the response from you specifically! glad to hear this is helping you guys :) 4th post out! check It out and feel free to comment, share, like!
disregardable1 votesThere's a definite line between having casual writing and having immature writing, and I feel like you crossed it. Your writing is hurting your message, at least for me.
Coach Brownjo1 votes[{quoted}](name=The AFK Farmer,realm=NA,application-id=WEuoGbmp,discussion-id=ujFLszd5,comment-id=0000,timestamp=2015-04-06T00:38:35.595+0000)
There's a definite line between having casual writing and having immature writing, and I feel like you crossed it. Your writing is hurting your message, at least for me.
at least I don't cross the troll line.
disregardable1 votesYou asked for feedback. I gave it to you. Even if you didn't specifically ask for feedback, it's impossible for anyone to consume media without judging it on some basic level.
Think about that for a second. When I read your blog that you asked me to read (that's what advertising is), I thought that it had very little depth or value because of the poor writing. I didn't sit there for 5 minutes trying to come up with something insulting to say. That was just what I thought while reading your stuff.
Anyone that reads your content is going to think something about it. Criticizing people for telling you what they think doesn't make your content any different.
If you're getting negative feedback, you should think about why. Maybe it's because that person is just a troll, or maybe it's because you failed to select an audience properly. There are a lot of reasons you could get negative feedback, and you should probably think about why.
I know this is all sort of irrelevant to you right now, but it might be interesting to experiment with if that's up your alley.
Coach Brownjo1 votesif what you are getting out of it is the grammar then you're there for the wrong reasons. I'm not doing it to prove how sophisticated I am. I write what I need to say and post. the questions get answered and the content is there. thanks for your feedback though.