Getting better in Jungling and top

Hello, im a beginner and I know im not that good. in bronze 3-4. I practice last hit custom games everyday 175 cs @ 20 mins no runes nor masteries. I tried adding bots and so on, but one thing I noticed is that I just can't seem to do well in a real games. I record all my games and my main roles Is jungle, then top. I want to improve my gameplay and I don't know how to read a game. I watched many streams Theoddone, Trick2g and irelia carries u. I tried so many different build. Maybe im not ready for ranked ? My main champ is udyr and volibear, then irelia and garen. I try to have map awareness, jukes, ward everytime I back and get a pink on objectives, plan my jg routes before I go out and decide what lanes I want to focus. I try to always determine where the enemy jungler would be and when to countergank. Maybe udyr is a hard champ to master. I always get my jg items first, then I always smite toad. I always save my gap closers until they burn theirs. I try to make sure I have a good synergy with the lane im ganking. I try to keep monkey agility up when fighting. I also gank from tribrush and smite wraith before a gank. I ward my buffs and time them to bet at their spam. I counter jungle when I see the enemy jungler holding a lane. I do wtv that counters an enemy's move. I know tower > dragon unless its the 3 or 5th. I know how to freeze a lane or push. and when not to trade. My items build might be bad, I just do what mobafire tells me to do(situational items) and synergy with my team. I try to ping MIA's.

I hope I can learn from anyone what im doing wrong.

Regards