@Riot Nasus' and Renekton's story was freaking awesome buuuut...

rtbf225618241··5 votes·2,365 views

You mispelled Renekton's name twice.

Rito plz.

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RiotRubinio2 votes

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Brutusness1 votes

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Hey Rubinio! I know this might just be the English Major in me, but in Renekton's lore, there's a sentence that goes "word arrived that a magical being of fire had escaped the magical sarcophagus that bound it in its underground prison." I know this sounds tedious, but the double use of "magical" sounds kind of repetitive. Just a nitpick though.

Hyperiön2 votes

Change Magical Sarcophagus, to Enchanted Sarcophagus. That takes away the repetitiveness and gives a more vibrant tone than plain old 'Magical'

rtbf2256182415 votes

Too bad this isn't Kha'Zix's lore, or i would make a bad bugfix pun right now.

A Superb Villain1 votes

Also, in Nasus' story the author used "dispositions," which are an emotional state, instead of "positions," occupying a particular space.

Spitemaster2 votes

No, this is correct. 'Dispose' can refer to arrangement, especially of military forces or legal matters, and 'disposition' is the way in which something is disposed.

A Superb Villain1 votes

I appreciate the correction; I've never heard it used in such a manner before.

CrazFight 4 votes

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