@riot please get a proofreader
I read varus' bio and this isn't about that whole kerfuffle at all. But there's a paragraph where the word deep is used to describe the well in pallas like 3x in a row. It's not the first time either. You gotta, you know, re read your stuff before you turn it in. Ideally this is a role an editor can play, at least that's how they do it in the comics biz- it also helps them keep all their lore straight which was an issue in the ziggs comic where suddenly yordles glamour was a potion instead of the natural ability it had been before.
Js. Feel free to hire me I have no credentials but I actually really like your lore!