@Narrative, there's a small mistake in some lore!

Swainey Todd··6 votes·4,397 views

Coming from Swain's bio:

"As he lay on the verge of death, a raven approached to feed, and Swain felt an old, familiar darkness press upon him again. But he would not let it take him. He could not. Staring into the the bird’s eye, he saw reflections of the evil strangling the heart of Noxus. A black rose. The pale woman... and her puppet emperor. Swain realized that he had not defeated the hidden cabal, and they had betrayed him to what should have been his death, after seducing Darkwill, the man they failed to overthrow."

Not the biggest thing in the world, but it's been around 7 months since this came out!

6 Comments

RiotSkiptoMyLuo3 votes

Good catch! We'll address it.

Swainey Todd2 votes

Glad I could help!

[slayer-jinx-catface]

ImaginesTigers1 votes

Hi!

Since you're on this: would you be able to have a look at Illaoi's colour story? It's kinda rife with typos (I think an earlier version may have been pushed out)? Honestly, it reads like a first draft so that would really really make sense to me. Here is the link for ease of access, but basically it doesn't have any grammar in punctuation if there's a dialogue tag (needing one of these bad boys — ,).

So, for example:

“Truth Bearer, this is why we must retreat to Buhru. We cannot save the paylangi” the Hierophant said.

OR

“You’ve mentioned that before” Illaoi said, walking around the stone table in the center of the room. She rolled her shoulders, loosening the muscles to fight off a yawn.

Seems so minor, but it feels a little like Illaoi was neglected here :'(

Also: Syndra's recent story -- renamed The Dreaming Pool from The Dreaming Cave, still has The Dreaming Cave as the title on a bunch of non-US versions. Like the UK version which you see find here and the Australian English version which you can see here. The link titles are fine but the in-article title is wrong.

Hope this helps!

[poppy-wink]

Camille Ferrøs2 votes

Also this brought back a question I had in my mind how did Swain get back to noxus after he lost the battle and was literally laying on the ground waiting to die...

Swainey Todd4 votes

I think after he saw the visions through the raven that he did, he was able to... carrion with his plans.

I'm so sorry for that.

I'm not sorry.

mrmeddyman2 votes

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Also this brought back a question I had in my mind how did Swain get back to noxus after he lost the battle and was literally laying on the ground waiting to die...

The implication is that the vison gave him the will to live. He had no problem dying for the glory of Noxus. Allowing himself to die serving an Emperor that did not serve Noxus and was merely a puppet was unacceptable.

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