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[Champion Concept] Sha'Raz, The balance warden.

Schrapnël·6/30/2016, 10:20:19 PM·4 votes·900 views

Hi everyone,

First of all i would like to thank ll of you guys for clicking on this post and taking the time to read it. This is my first one and as such please be gentle if something alike has been posted before or if you find it too difficult to be a viable champion. ANd i'm really bad at writing lore so this might be a bit so-so ^^'

I love playing mechanically hard champions: Cassio (cassio used to be harder), Azir , Zed. and As you have certainly noticed I am a midlaner. This will be a midlane champion too.

So the feel of this champion would give a natury/ balance between life and death, good and evil kind of feel. Sha'raz was previously an Egyptian-ish warrior goddess and chose a human existence to fight for what she thinks is right and restore balance in our world, between the weak and the oppressed on one hand and the powerful on the other. She is a woman in armor with two one-handed swords that she wields simultaneously. One light green the other pinkish (?), (or if you want you can follow yin and yang theme and have that black and white but it's horriby generic).

It would be an AP melee Assassin using mana and a secondary ressource called Equilibrium.

------PASSIVE AND ABILITIES------

°Passive: Benediction of the gods: Sha'raz auto attacks and abilities generates Equilibrium marks when an enemy champion is hit. (They are represented by marks either above the head of Sha'raz (max 4 as said above) or at its feet and then like arrows pointing in cardinal directions or in diagonals). Sha'raz autoattacks deal a percentage of her AP,_ she is meant to be an AP melee Assassin relying on both spells and AA's._

*Q Demise [Targeted] Sha'raz steps forward a bit and swings her first sword around her dealing magic damage to minions, monsters and champions, upon reactivation in the next three seconds she will swing her other sword and deal magic damage like the first strike. If the enemy had been hit with the first strike she instead swings on herself wth both swords for increased damage. If no enemy is hit by the spell a percentage the damage is then applied to Sha'raz instead. shoulw have a fairly short CD, her bread and butter ability. [Applies Passive] [At four stacks of Passive: consume them to deal increased damage on both strikes]

°W Alter Ego [Passive] Every now and then Sha'raz will lose control of her mind balance and an alter ego of her will appear on the next spells she casts, mimicking it on the same target than the spell cast by SHa'raz herself. This cannot occur more than once every 25 seconds. This passive evolves as the game progresses and increase in the effectiveness of the spell duplicated as well as reduce the passive's cooldown. 10%/25sec CD then 14%/22s, then 18%/20, 22%/18 sec, and finally 25%/14sec (effectiveness compared to normal spell in %/ CD in seconds one rank at level 1 then scaling with ult. [Applies Passive]

°E Leap of faith[Location targeted] Sha'raz jumps into the air and lands on the targeted location dealing magic damage on impact as well as briefly slowing all enemies in the radius. [Applies Passive][At 4 stacks of Passive the jump is longer and roots enemy champions in place for a short amount of time instead of slowing]

°R Last Ressource Sha'raz uses her powers to mark an enemy champion as well as herself for 6 seconds. It is represented by spirity scales showing up above the target's head and Sha'raz's (green and pinkish?) While marked Sha'raz deals increased damage to the target (like 15%?) and the target deals increased damage to her ( 10% more damage ? has to be lower)

Typical build should look like: item 3027 item 3115 item 3157 item 3001 item 3089 item 3020

Unless you guys want to make her mana cost verylow and then you could switch to a rylai's scepter for exemple. Usual AP page for masteries and runes, AS reds if you like it ,CDR/lvl blues if you don't go for the above build.

Thanks for reading i know it's long and complicated, i'm looking forward your constructive criticism!

Schrap'

6 Comments

Duko6/30/2016, 10:34:03 PM1 votes

Interesting design though her q sees extremely strong. There is no timer between the two casts so the caster would double tap q and guarantee both the first and empowered second to proc.

pixelclerk7/1/2016, 9:05:39 AM1 votes

First i would like u to check out my champion consept pls ty. Pravum dex a.k.a corruption leader. I feel like she shoulndt be from shurima maybe from ionia since its a place of spirits and balance

Superpizza Eater7/1/2016, 11:07:10 AM1 votes

I personally find this concept amazing, except for the ult. Fizz's ult has the same effect but stronger and deals damage and a knock-up (I mean, Fizz is not a reference since he's bullshit but you get my point). She could have some sort of blessed-corrupted ground that'd last 7 seconds (Luck's number), in which her spells would hit a second time for 75% additional damage for the first 4 seconds of the duration and she would then take 50% increased damage for the 3 last seconds.

Anyways, awesome concept, Riot should read this !

[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

Schrapnël7/1/2016, 2:22:11 PM1 votes

Thanks for all the feedback, You're right, she should be of Ionia, and wear her sword at waist level perpendicularly to her body like this pic http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/bleach/images/e/e0/Soifon_Yoruichi_battle_2.jpg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/190?cb=20110721175337&path-prefix=en but not a katana double edged sword like those :http://static.icy-veins.com/images/thumbnails/7f1cdebfdb2ca9a15750a8887046f3b9d35335c977abcda14f6286f8f692c83c.jpg

I had other ideas for her ult that was available from level 1 and she would switch back and forth from light to darkness and receive different kinds of bonuses but it ended up complexifying her way too much si scrapped it. I'll make other champions with that kind of idea once i other cool abilities to match with it :)

Thanks for the Fback once more !