Natheir the Avenger of the Abyss (Champion Design) (Edit, not finished yet)

Dr3m4Laynn·9/14/2018, 12:30:14 AM·1 votes·1,294 views

History

Natheir was once a soldier known by any Ionia whether by his exploits at the fronts or his talents as a swordsman but especially he was known for his great knowledge in black magic, those who fought him recognized his strength that made all the lands of 'Ionia. Some hated him for his pride and arrogance.

He lived in a remote corner of Ionia an island more commonly known as Sudaro Island. He does not like crowds, gatherings, overcrowded places, he prefers the life of the countryside, the silence, the fishing, the sea.

During a battle that was the last for him he suffered a blow, a dagger in the back betrayed by his people, his comrades, his battalion. They brought him to his island, Sudaro, tied him up and put him in the water. Without anyone being aware of his disappearance they staged a blow in the utmost discretion.

**"Your arrogance and your pride have brought you here, this is your punishment for the number of times you have disrespected us, wretched that you are! Die!"that's all you deserve **

After this plot, posters, research, an investigation made by the whole kingdom, but without success, no news. A grave his name has been engraved in the legend.

everyone thought he was dead but in reality .....

After awakening from this nightmare. his heart, filled with love for his country and his country, was filled with hatred and resentment.

Seeking revenge, Natheir did not realize he was in a place even more chaotic than the battles he led. A place even darker than a black room, as dark as the night.

he discovered that he was in the abyss of Black Mist. Not being able to escape there he deepens his knowledge in black magic ....

> **BASIC STATISTIC > ** > HP: 558.1 (+90 per level) Attack Speed: 0.64 (+ 2.7% per level) > > Attack Damage: 63 (+3.2 per level) Movement Speed: 345 > > Regeneration HP: 7 (+1.1 per level) Armor: 26 (+3.1 per level) > > Magic Resistance: 28 (+1 per level) > > SKILL > Q SPELL / A > black notch / dark notch: unleashes a wave of black energy coming out of his sword inflicting 60/80/110/150/190 + 45% additional attack damage) Physical damage > > mana: 50/60/70/80/90 > 800 range > > Z / W desperate thread / despair thread: targets an enemy leaving him in a black haze without vision for 0.5 / 0.8 / 1.3 / 1.6 / 2 sec > > MANA: 80pts > Range: 650 > > E: black / black forfend: spawning a path for the ground that inflicts enemies 80/110/150/190/230 (+ 30% power) + (70% damage) > > mana: 60/75/80/90/100 > range 860 > > R - Isolation / Levitation: targets an enemy in a black sphere immobilizing it for 0.8 / 1.5 / 2.5 seconds inflicting 80/170/350 (+70 of the power) that can be attacked by allies > > mana: 100 > range: 650

3 Comments

David 7779/14/2018, 1:53:51 AM1 votes
  • THE LORE:

Your sentences are very messy, making them hard to read. You are mixing different tenses. You didn't proofread it. Check your grammar.

  • THE KIT:

It's "Stats", not "Statistic". There's no passive. The format is awful. It's better if you refer "Attack Damage" as AD, "additional attack damage" as bonus AD, and "ability power" as AP. Is there absolutely any reason to make his scalings hybrid?