[Concept] New Fighter/Support Champion?! Omono , The Banished One w/Video

KaioKris·5/24/2019, 11:35:45 PM·2 votes·1,709 views

Bringing you guys another champion concept

Like always I make a video to support my channel where I create Champions and Reworks weekly, please watch and support if you would like to see other champions made, and you like new fresh league content!

https://youtu.be/0Be5BAWHlgg

Omono, The Banished One LORE: This lore is to describe the "origin" of Omono, giving some backstory as to where he came from, as well as what he was apart of. somethings to keep in mind, almost 99% of the Champions I have created come from a landmass inside of Valoran known as Kalavhak, This is an area located north of Runeterra, So areas, names and other events may seem different, just know all of which is included in this new universe I'm creating. Pieces of this universe will slowly be revealed through countless champion lore coming in the future. Please enjoy this "small" section I took from my story of the Ancient Empire of Shergon, which Omono had a hand in its "creation".

more to be revealed later! :)

A time before the great Sentinels reshaped Kalavhak, there was a great Empire known as Shergon; which has not fallen into the mists. This once stood as the most powerful empire in all of Valorian; rivaling even the forces of Runeterra. How did this great empire come to be? more importantly...how did they fall?

In the Beginning:

A group of wandering traders found a mystical cavern in the south coastline of Kalavhak, still an untapped uncivilized jungle of riches and wonder. one of the traders, a young boy by the name of Huljui, came across what seemed to be a rare sunstone plated vase. This item alone could bring the group of travelers riches, easily enough for them to traverse into a new, less dangerous business. But too Huljui, he felt a strong connection with this vase, almost religious-like. Huljui said nothing about his findings but instead, took the vase and stored it safely into his protected bag and set off for home up north.

On his journey home, Huljui could feel the weigh of the vase grow, almost as if something his bag was filling more and more with a heavy coin. Eventually, the weight became too much for the boy, and he fell to his knees, dropping the bag and scattered the contents within. The Vase bounced and rolled onto the ground, displaying its glory to everyone around Huljui. His group felt betrayed, for too them; it seemed the boy was hiding an item that could change everyone's life. They began to bruise the young boy, fighting and tearing his belongings away from him in spite. The boy dove onto the vase, trying to protect it with his life, only to be stabbed multiple times by his once so-called friends. As his blood-drenched the indents of the vases artistic design, the orange gems surrounding the nozzle began to glow brightly, humming even.

From inside the vase, an Orange smoke began to surface, cloaking the ground around the victim's area. followed by a large mass spouting from its top. The mass grew and grew, almost twice the size of a normal being. After a few seconds, the mist began to fade, leaving behind a giant massed human figure, covered in strange green markings covering its body. The group of men was terrified, some of which tried to run, others thought of this as a demon summoning, and wished to kill the being. Before any of them could react, each who stood before the being was cast down, their bodies became soft, vital organs stopped functioning, But the being did not move. These men were killed simply from a gaze from the powerful mysterious man, nothing more. As the being stood before a circle of dead mortals, he stared down at the lifeless body of the boy protecting his vase, kneeling down to grab the boys hand. Suddenly the boy sprung to life, gasping for breath. once he looked up, he was frightened by what the being had done, thinking the same thing would happen to him; but it did not.

The being introduced itself has Omono; He is what was known as a Guardian Djinn, created from magical powers enslaved inside of objects, They are too serve the finders of these magical artifacts until told not too. In the rare case one should make a sacrifice of life to the Djinn however, The Djinn becomes bound to that individual, for eternity.

Huljin died, his blood was the sacrifice for the Djinn to be bounded. The Djinn; Omono pledged his undying fidelity to the boy, granting him any power he wished.

Orange Sun Dynasty

Over the next decade, Huljin would rise to power with just a small band of warriors, growing more and more with each successful conquest. Huljin had the vase smelted down into an armlet, tightly secured around his left wrist, he did this to keep the power of the Djinn safely with him at all times, Fiercely wielding its power. Huljin and his man seemed to be unstoppable, controlling most of the southern jungle for themselves, all with the assistance of his unkillable deity who stands by his side. By the time Huljin was considered an adult, He has crowned the Emperor of the jungled Sanctuary region; renamed the Shergon Empire. This was the beginning of the Orange Sun Dynasty.

No army was big enough, no one sole hero wielded the strength and power to overcome what Huljin had built, He was unstoppable. However, even the most powerful of kingdoms have their weaknesses, Huljin's was very clear; love.

Once Huljin found a bride to make his throne Empress, talks of the Emperor having a child rang through the kingdom; to the disgust of his guardian Djinn. Omono spoke with Huljin frequently of his concern with his too be Empress, all of which Huljin discarded. It was not long before the Empress grew knowledge of the Djinns dislike for her, and ordered for him to be tried for treason against the Emperor; which Huljin denied. She was so furious with her husband, she plotted to assassinate him.

One night she snuck into the Emperor's chamber, with one of his ceremonial daggers, planning on ending his life. Before she could reach the chambers however, she was confronted by Omono, who knew what she was planning on doing. She charged at the Djinn, with obvious no chance of her winning. With one jolt of his hand, chopped her across her back, splitting her spine in two, instantly killing her. Nearby, two of the royal guardsman hurried too the chamber, and saw their Guardian standing over the Emperor's wife. The guards attempted to restrain the Djinn, which also did not end well.

Upon receiving information on how his wife was murdered, Huljin knew what he must do. Huljin knew the only way to rid himself of Omono was too remove and destroy the ring to which the Djinn was created. Unfortunately for him, the ring was unable to be removed from his wrist, bound to him with powerful magic directly from Omono. Without hesitation, Huljin seized one of his scimitars, and slashed his own hand off, watching both his limb and the armlet fall into below. Before Huljin could toss the armlet into his fireplace, a mysterious figured appeared from behind him, slitting his throat, and acquiring the armlet for itself.

The figure stared at the armlet, before snapping the jeweled piece in half, severing the Djinns tie too the item. The figure spoke too Omono, letting him know he is free now, however....he was stripped of almost all of his mystical powers, he would now live like a normal being, until his death, then vanished.

Once the guards reached the Emperor's chamber, they witnessed multiple bodies of their fallen comrades, their Empress to be, and their Prestigious Emperor, with only Omono standing. The crime was murder, treason, and slaughtering of the crown who build this kingdom, all of which fall on the shoulders of Omono. the punishment was to be sentenced to a life of banishment behind restraints, almost a full circle ending of this warrior.

Although he lost most of his powers, he was still immortal from aging, which the guards were not aware of. Slowly they would stop visiting his prison, figuring he was long turned to dust...So this was the end for Omono

Centuries later, Omono awoken from slumber too the ceiling above him collapsing, the chaos severed his chains from his body, freeing Omono from his punishment. The now freed soul could carry on, but for what? Omono climbed from the wreckage into the above-collapsed room, venturing to find purpose...and to a new world.

More to be revealed in a coming Champion Reveal!\

Role: Support/Fighter Specialist

Focuses on dueling opposing Junglers and melee supports to protect his ADC

Kit Concept

Passive: Symbols of false virtue

when Omono auto attacks enemy champions

Omono gains bonus 5% - 15% movement speed around target champion 350 range radius

decaying over 2 seconds

each auto attack resets movement speed similar to phage effect

if Omono is around at least one ally champion

Omono deals x% of missing hp damage to enemy champions

scales with Omono’s level

Ability I: Callistos disk

cooldown : 16 | 15 | 14 | 13 | 12

Range I : 650 w/ 60 curved radius

Omono claps his hands together creating celestial energies to flow into his hands

this ability will charge up to 2 seconds; staying active for a total of 6 seconds

can reactivate to send a disk of energy towards the target direction

skill-shot formatted similar to Diana q

dealing magic damage to all enemies hit

any targets hit with the tip end of the skill-shot

will pulsate double magic damage

Ability II: Transcending force

cooldown : 25 | 22 | 21 | 19 | 18

Range I: 500 Range II: 300 radius Range III: 800

Channels energy around him for 1 second

unleashing an unmovable force from his body

this ability can negate/alter every form of cc

if the ability is pointed in direction of targeted cc * think Fiora W

This ability will have a bonus effect

Slows - absorbs slow; reduces damage, channels for 1.5 seconds to AoE speed boost for x seconds

Roots/Stuns - absorbs cc; reduces damage; slows user for x seconds

if the target is inside the skill-shot zone - they mimic the cc dealt too Omono

Displacements - negates the ability of displacement

if the target is inside skill-shot zone - they are pulled directly into the front of Omono

Knock ups - reduces damage negates knock-up from effecting allies in the area

Ability III: Orb Meditation

cooldown : 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 5

Omono throws a celestial orb on target ally ( balls can last forever )

while an orb is attached to an ally

if Omono + ally damage the same target, the ally gains life steal

10-30% life steal against enemy champions

10-20% life steal against a large monster

once a ball starts to heal an ally, slowly drains x amount of mana

Omono can reactivate to blink to his ally

this, however, will remove the harmonic orb

at max level; Omono can access 2 separate celestial orbs to use

Ability IV: Seraphs Safeguard

cooldown : 200 | 155 | 110

within Range of ally: 250

Omono manifests a passable ring of energy surrounding himself and his targeted ally

while inside this ring, Omono gains bonus resistances for each enemy near him

also while inside the ring, Omono’s basic attacks have a knock-back effect

50-75 range of knock-back

if Omono knocks targets out of the arena

Omono gains health regeneration while his target ally gains a bonus shield

if Omono or his ally leaves the ring at any time the arena will start to fade away

3 seconds out of the ring the ability will be canceled

Let me know what you guys think!!

3 Comments

One Sec Im Afk5/25/2019, 9:16:50 AM1 votes

I would love to work with you on a character concept I have!

Mr Voidling5/25/2019, 4:11:58 PM1 votes

Small suggestion, change your format so that the ability descriptions are pulled together.


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This will help people read your concept. Right now it is... not very reader friendly.

You can also put three "*" in their own line to put spacers. So you can break the abilities away from the lore. And put Double asterisks on both sides of a word/sentence to make it bold, like the ability names can be made bold to stand out a little more. And if you WANT you can even add boxes for the descriptions, by putting a Greater Than sign before the text.


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This feels better for reading, and gets the point across better.