Pesanteur - The improved Force

MrFluffyPuffy··5 votes·399 views

Category: Control mage


Lore: Pesanteur is a teenager from Zaun. He is very insecure about himself. Despite this he works in an university and is enthusiastic about technology. Time passed and Viktor hold his first speech. Pesanteur heard his speech and decided to improve himself with Viktor´s technology. He replaced his left arm with it in order to test it for few months. Pesanteur regretted his decision soon. He felt that he misses something.


Abilities:

Passive (Gravitational deformation): Enemies in the sphere are grounded.


Q (Gravitational sphere): Creates a sphere. He can push the sphere in any direction within a range of 1000 units. Enemies, who where hit by the sphere, take magic damage. A sphere stays for 1 minute until it disappears. Nearby enemies take magic damage, when the sphere disappears. There is a maximum of 3 spheres, which can exist at the same time.


W (Force of attraction): The sphere pulls nearby enemies to the center and deals magic damage to them.

Passive: Nearby enemies are permanently slowed, while they are in range of the sphere.


E (Gravitational connection): Enemies who stand in the sphere are teleported to another sphere. The nearest sphere is choosed as the target. The targeted sphere must be in a range of 500 units to the other sphere. Enemies also take magic damage from the teleportation.

Passive: Spheres deal magic damage to enemies, who are standing in them.


R (Collapse): The spheres explode. Nearby enemies are knocked back and take damage. The direction of the knock back depends on the position of the enemy in relation to the center of the sphere.

5 Comments

Janna mìd1 votes

That sounds really cool but I wonder if it will really be useful for something else that create no-go zone, and that is pretty much an orionna-like champ i think. Btw, i didn't understand the passive (it must be my lack of knowledge in english).-.

redfeenix1 votes

Grounded is the new cc they added to Cassio's w, which prevents enemies from using movement abilities including flash in a certain zone.

MrFluffyPuffy1 votes

Well, it was first added on Poppy`s W with her rework.

redfeenix1 votes

How does he push the spheres? with Q similar to oriana?

W is like victors w? Except it slows people and doesnt stun them?

I like this concept thanks for sharing. His passive is somewhat lackluster, but i like the idea of a battlefield control mage. Placing traps etc. However this just sounds like a super OP version of ORIANA. You have her ult as your w, 3 spheres instead of 1 etc.

MrFluffyPuffy1 votes

Q: His Q is like a skillshot. You click at an area, which is in range, and he will create a sphere which moves to the area. Already created spheres can´t be pushed anymore. It´s not similar to Orianna`s Q.

W: Every sphere has an additional range of 250 units. Enemies in this area are slowed by the passive constantly. The slow shouldn´t be that huge. When you activate the W, nearby enemies are pulled to the center. So yes it could be compared to Viktor´s W but it could also be compared to Orianna´s ult.

Passive: I wanted to give him this passive -> 1. Slow on his autoattacks 2. Damage over time on enemies, who were hit by an ability (both together as one passive). But then I thought his current passive would fit more to his gravity based theme and to a control mage + his old passive would be harder to balance.

Concept:I wanted to make originally an assassine/ mage with a theme around darkness. But then I thought the concept of this control mage would fit better and the spheres made out of darkness would be perfect as gravitational spheres. I also had in mind that some creatures could come out of the spheres of darkness, but I didn´t like it (because it wouldn´t have fit to an assassine).

Also: I need to admit that he has much similarities to Viktor, Syndra and Orianna. But I think he would have his own playstyle and would feel different enough from the others.

  • Orianna is more based about her only sphere, which she can move with her Q and is with this mechanic more flexible. While Pesanteur can set 3 spheres which can´t be moved after he set them.

  • (Jokingly) Should he ever be implemented in the game (despite a non existent chance for this to happen), then he should get a star destroyer skin (like tresh and varus), because of the originally dark theme he had.

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