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Basic Champion Design -=-Sugar Man-=-

man titty·5/19/2015, 12:19:40 PM·1 votes·482 views

This is very basic champion design. I am just looking for feedback to make it better. There is no splash art because I am not good at art. So without further talk here is Sugar Man- Sugar's Revenge (The name and title is kinda stupid but I like it)

Passive- Sugar Crash After using 3 abilities on a champion that champion gets stunned Q- Hard Candy Hurls a ball of hard candy that at the end of it’s flight or when hitting an enemy it explodes for damage and hitting for damage W- Sugar Spikes (insert champion name) throws down a blast of sugar in a “c” shape knocking back enemies caught within the shot E- Gum Lobs gum on the floor to apply a major slow to targets on stepping on the gum and doing damage in an area R- Sugar Rush Grants a bonus in ability power movement speed and cool down reduction for a period of time

5 Comments

antymattar5/19/2015, 4:50:05 PM1 votes

Please try to become more familiar with the game before making champions. It really helps. In your current situation, the champion is a bit redundant. So what's the champions thing? What's his angle? Is he a sugar man or a crazy candy maker? Is he Wonka? Currently, his Kit is somewhat less about candy as it is about dishing damage and evading things.

His Q is a bit redundant. A simple skillshot, similar to Brand's w.

The W is interesting. It's sort of like a Syndra's e, but I assume it to be very close ranged?

The E is redundant. An are of effect slow that is quite literally a combination of Morgana's tormented soil and Singed's mega adhesive. It is also thematically strange. How does candy slow you, or damage you? Is it a mutant killer cookie dough?

R is quite literally a worse version of Singed's ultimate. Singed's ultimate gives him like every stat possible. While I get the idea of a candy related champion having a sugar rush ability, this ability seems very weak, especially for an ultimate. How about replacing one of his basic abilities with this ability, and giving him a different ultimate?