Bravos, The Lance Master of Ionia

Ok so i took this idea from the idea of Xaldin from KH2. Bravos will be a lancer (duh) who could fit top lane and possibly mid or jungle. he will wield 6 floating lances (although he will only basic attack with one) He has no resources, but instead has a bar for "mastery, which fills up to ten"

Passive: Lance mastery: Every second he's in combat, he gains mastery. This increases his damage on all attacks and abilities, and grants bonus penetration. (special interaction with w)

Q: Rushing Wind: Bravos points all 6 lances forward and rushes into the target direction, knocking back / to the side all minions and knocking up all champions/large-monsters he goes through. low base damage, (100%AD), moderate cooldown

W: Lance guard: His lances circle around him, shielding him for (insert amounts, i really dont know what a good shield for him would be) for 2 seconds. at the same time, nearby enemies take light base damage (20%Bonus AD) each second. If the mastery bar is full, the duration and damage is doubled.

E: Lunge Fan: sweeps his lunges out like a fan, damaging and slowing all enemies hit, dealing medium damage (60%AD)

R: Dance of Lances: upon beginning, Xaldin lashes out with the full fury of his 6 lances. You have five swings, which must be used in brief succesion. they are aoe and the first five hit targets in front for medium damage (40% AD) and the last hits all targets around him for true damage (90% AD). combo fails if used when no targets are available and immediately goes on cooldown.

What you guys think? (LOL SORRY NO SPACES BEFORE OOPS)