[champion concept] harris- the uncorruptable menace

this is my second attempt at champions concept design, I'd appreciate any and all comments on kit and lore as well as any other criticism you may have after reading this post.

the idea this time is an aoe fighter that excels in the thick of the fight but still requires help from his teammates to control the enemy team and survive.

harris- the un-corruptible menace melee fighter

passive

rhythm of challenge- gain 4/7/10% attack speed and 4% movement speed when near an enemy champion. he gains additional 3/4/5% attack speed and 4% movement speed for any additional visible enemy champion close by.

Q- bloody playground cooldown 9 seconds at all ranks

harris jumps to target location striking all enemies upon landing for 60/90/120/150/180(+0.4AD). this ability can go over walls or target a wall instead and bounce of it.

jump is 500 bounce is up to 250. damage radius is 175

w- expert parry cooldown 14/13/12/11/10

for 1 second harris enters a defensive stance that breaks his rhythm. it takes 1.5 seconds for him to gradually regain his passive. while in this defensive stance he will block the next physical single target ability or basic attack negating it completely, damaging all near by enemies for 15/20/25/30/35% of that attack's damage plus 15/20/25/30/35% of his own attack damage. if an attack is blocked successfully he gains a buff for 1.5 seconds reducing incoming damage by 5/10/15/20/25%.

damage radius is 150.

e- dazzling maneuvers cooldown 13/11.5/9/7.5/6

strikes target enemy for 20/50/80/110/140 (+0.3AD) and spins around him, striking all close enemy units for 40/70/100/130/160 (+0.6) and slightly knocking them back. target is suppressed for the duration.

cast range- 200 spin damage range- 175

R- limitless offence no cooldown on passive cooldown on active 90/80/70

passive every third basic attack hits all enemies next to the target for 40/50/60% of the attack's total damage

active he attacks all close enemies for 50/75/100(+1.10AD) physical damage. and applies the passive on all of them. this attack applies life steal but no other on hit effects.

splash damage range- 150 active attack range- 200

stats

health 590(+85) health regen 9(+0.8)

mana 0(+0) mana regen 0(+0)

attack range 125 attack damage 57(+4.5) attack speed 0.65(3.5%)

armor 26(+3.5) magic resistance 32.1(+1.25)

movement speed 340

lore

He stood over yet another beat up noxian royal guard platoon, bored. as per usual, he spent his morning harassing as many guards as possible so they might prove a challenge to his skill. he could not find a proper match to him in battle ever sense he decided to drop out of the war. he did not care that it was a crime of treason punishable by death. no one could actually catch him and he had lost all respect to his own nation. as he trained in the noxian military academy with his friends, they were all promised glory in great battles, their names remembered for even in tale and myth, unmatched pride of epic conquest. the then naïve harris and his friends dreamed of these as they trained and grew closer together. the friends now brothers found themselves disappointed. no demacian battalion, no rakhor warriors of myth, no ionian masters of the blade, no glory. only brutal slaughter of farmers, mindless destruction of cities, and enslavement of the poor. it very quickly became unbearable. harris challenged his commander for this cowardly behavior, this could never sit with the noxian code of strength. instead of answering the challenge, harris's commander had him and his friends sent to fight the rakor's deadliest fighters, hoping they would simply fall in battle.

it didn't take them long to realize what this really was. all the soldiers of this new unit were "rebellious soldiers" who dared speak against their commanders. nuisance to be swept under mount targon's rug.

they set out to battle the rakor warriors.

shortly after they engaged, harris's unit was left on its own. they were used as bait. talented, and very angry, the noxian put up a fight the rakor had never seen from their kind ever before.

the last standing was harris. his friends, brothers, all dead. they fought impressively and took many rakor with them, but alas, it was simply not enough. harris was fighting three rakor warriors and winning. right before his final fatal swing, he stopped, and sat down. the rakor looked astonished at first and suspicions of a trap. he had them yet surrendered? "why would you lay down your weapon and life before us? they asked. "all my brothers are dead, they will no longer share the glory of victory with me. the only thing i am defending now is the coward who betrayed them. i go knowing he will fall to your spears. a vengeance i will never get to have." the rakor leader approached harris. instead of cutting him down he asked "what if could have your revenge?" as he handed his unique spear to him. it was a spear with a flat long blade at both sides. the steel gleamed in the sun, a craftsmanship far superior to any thing the noxian armory as ever offered. "you and your fallen comrades have shown more of a rakor spirit than you'd ever be noxus snails. I accept my defeat at your hands". and with that the rakor left to join the other battles that ensued. nothing else need to be said. harris was the first and only descendant of noxus to ever be considered an equal in the eyes of the rakor, and he was intent on justifying their decision.

he found the commander of the targon frontier that had used his brothers as cannon fodder and slew him and all those that stood on that hill, a few dozen officers total. after that he traveled to his old battalion, where he challenged the cowardly commander again. this time he butchered him as it was not much of a fight. harris continued to deal with all the officers that were loyal to his old superior. now a angry and disillusioned, harris fights his homeland every chance he gets, as he will never forgive it for falling from it's grace.

quotes when picked on lockscreen- "lets show them how it's done"

joke - "i am harris, son of ford"

taunt - "i have faced down armies! your'e barely a warm up"

when taunting demacian enemy(garen xin jarvan lux galio poppy quinn) - "the enemy of my enemy is... nahh"

when taunting enemy darius or swain- " hmph, long ago i would have followed you to the end of the world"

when buying bloodthirster- "i had a pal called like that. nice guy" mercury scimitar or duskblade- " now this is my kind of weapon" boots- "finally! my feet where killing me"

when recalling with low health- " feew, i almost got worried for sec there"

when moving- "on it" - "getting in position" - "on my way"

when attacking- "take them down" - "get this!" - "bring it"