[champion concept] Odi, the face of ire

So just posting for fun an idea for a champ i thought of , this champ is a juggernaut whom gets stronger when focused and does things that cause your team and you to have to make choices that could ultimately kill you your team or completely turn the fight in your favor .

Passive: Animosity- taking dmg builds your animosity (resource) the more animosity that is built the higher the scaling on all ability's goes (up to 1.0) only .1 for each hit from a champion and .05 from minions at full animosity gain adrenaline increasing movement speed by 30% for 3 seconds towards enemy champions. (animosity stacks up to 10) (stacks start falling off when out of combat)

Q--Enraged Blows--- passive - your auto attacks provoke the enemy champions causing stacks of anger to build on them up to 5 at 5 stacks the enemy champion is taunted for 1.5 seconds and their damage is increased by 4/8/12/16/20% while taunted enemy auto attacks double animosity stacks Active: enraged blows now causes your auto attacks to gain the ratio of animosity

W: Face your fears- Enemy champions in a large cone in front of you have the choice to face you head on for the next 2.5 seconds,, champions who do so will gain the buff courage and take 30% reduced dmg for the duration, enemy s who choose to keep running gain the debuff coward and take dmg for the duration 50/80/120/160/200 .1ad ratio (facing odi gives courage facing away gives coward)

E-** Detestable**- Odi creates a circle around himself slowly draining life from ALL champions within the circle 10/20/30/40/50 .5ap (kinda like hecarim W but a bigger circle) gaining animosity by .03 for each champion inside the circle

R- FEAR THE IRE- Odi unleashes his animosity onto all of the rift Fearing all champions for 1-5 seconds depending on how much animosity was used, the seconds start to count down above champions heads, during this time champions may make the choice to give into their anger and take damage based on the amount of time that is left on the fear

My only fear with a champion like this is the amount of trolling he could do but the amount of outplay and thinking on this kit would be an amazing amount of fun . Detestable should probably not be able to kill your own team and should probably stop draining around 10% life

As for looks (cant really draw anymore) i want him to be kinda faceless like Bughuul from the sinister movies but like with armor and such since he gave into his anger/rage he lost his identity

Short lore: Odi was once a decorated solider on the Noxian front line, during the taking of a Demacian village the Demacian Military showed up and after a bloody battle between the 2 many hostages were taken on both sides each threatening to kill the hostages if the other didnt surrender, the noxians struck first killing a hostage to show that they didnt show mercy, the demacians did the same back and forth this continued, odi stepped into the middle to try and resolve this in a diffrent manner seeing this was taking its toll on him as he tried to negotiate and end this senseless slaughter the soliders from his own army started to accuse him of turning soft and that if he didnt step down it was a traitorous act and would be declared an enemy, while trying to convince his own army that this was not the case and that this was pointless loss of life, both sides started killing again and now they were ganging up on him, as he sat there anger washed over him why couldnt these people see how ignorant they were being, how pointless this all was.....in his rage he begins to curse both sides for their ignorance, not one to deal with such disobedience Darius strikes him down with his axe, not killing him wounding him severely , he shouldn't have gotten up but there he rose, the anger fueling him, not even realizing how bad he was hurt , as he stood there bleeding and shouting Garen strikes him down, he falls and stays down, all he can think about is that he died a pointless death that these ignorant people should pay and how much he hated himself for not being able to stop it. Then as the last breath escapes his lips time all but seems to stop and he hears a voice, it asks him " was worth it"......he says "no"......it asks him "what would make it worth it", he replies with a clinched fist and tears "make them see the way i do", make them pay the way i did" one last question the voice asks "will you be angry forever", odi replies "yes, yes i will" He rose again the wounds were gone the battle had ended, odi couldnt think straight all he could think about clearly was all the things that had happened in the battle and in his life that had angered him and far off in the distance he could hear the drums of war and this angered him more he was no longer the same ,he was no longer a man,he was a monster created by the ignorance of man and he was going to show them all how he felt.

The story isnt very good (im no J.R. Tolkin)the kit needs more ratios, i really just wanted to get this out there since i work 3rds and am falling asleep hopfully ill wake up and the brain will be working again, Goodnight for now

P.S. if your going to leave feedback please make it helpful and insightful :/