[Champion Concept] Khurdan, Profligate of the Desert

Madanach·7/28/2017, 3:34:04 PM·5 votes·1,083 views

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##Abilities I have done the ability explanations in the same style as on the League of Legends wikia so it's easier to understand and nicer to look at.

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##Appearance Khurdan is a renowned tomb raider who pillages ruins deep within the deserts of Shurima, making ends by selling oddities he finds to merchants in the nearby villages. He is a man of muscular build who has grown to endure the harsh environment of Shurima; an ideal trait for someone in his line of work. He wears a dark beige cloak with a hood that falls over his eyes. A short, skin-tight tunic lies under his cloak as well as a pair of tanned breaches which are fastened by a leather belt. He protects his feet with a pair of light brown plimsolls which allow him to trudge the desert more easily.

Khurdan’s infamy stems from his weapon, Perdition, which he found within a ruin. The weapon is made up of a metal staff with two blades on either end. Each blade can be ejected with considerable force; both able to take down a fully grown Ralsiji. The blades are tethered to retractable chains, allowing them to fit back into place on their own. The weapon is presumed to be the only one in existence as no other has been unearthed since. Khurdan’s finding of the weapon has made him a target for would-be treasure hunters. Many have tried to take the weapon by force but failed; their fates have all been the same.

I designed Khurdan to be a mix between fighter and assassin. He is primarily intended to be a solo laner but can also be played as a jungler. Khurdan is very vulnerable early game as he is a melee champion with no form of defence or sustain. He is also not particularly good at trading as Sunder requires the enemy champion to be below a certain health threshold to use and without it he can't get the bonus damage on Sever. With this in mind he takes some items and levels to really become impact, making him a formidable champion late game.


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##Notes

  • I previously uploaded this concept but I have made quite a lot of changes to the kit since then.
  • Sort of frustrating when someone's "feedback" gets more upvotes than the concept even though they don't understand basic concepts like bonus AD.

20 Comments

TheRossJanitor7/28/2017, 4:39:39 PM9 votes

Passive may seem small, but is actually really overpowered. This will deny enemy champion powerspikes, while also speeding yours up REALLY fast. He will almost never fall behind. Q = Katarina's Q, E, W all in one ability. W = Fizz dash. (did i mention this guy has way too much mobility) (will most likely have invincibility frames, no bueno.) E = Since this ability relies on W, it isn't too bad. R = Passive is insanely broken. Lethality is super meta right now, and combining this with Youmuus, Duskblade and Edge? Insane powerspike and guaranteed oneshot on any squishy. Too much damage. 400 + 150% bonus ad is literally a oneshot on any squishy with enough AD. I'm assuming this guy is played mid, where the average health at level 6 is 1000, give or take. With Youmuu's, this guy's AD will be 137. He will do 406 damage with his ult. Combined with his lethality passive, along with his insane slow and you have one easy lane. This is not even taking into account his mobility.

Has potential, but his kit is overloaded, especially in this lethality meta. Can stick to any squishy and ultimate guarantees a kill. Pretty much AD Veigar with crazy mobility.

Friendly Ram7/29/2017, 3:28:21 AM2 votes

Great formatting.

P: i really don't like this mechanic because it forces your opponent to back early or risk you dominating lane permanently. Q:So if i look at this like a single target gnar boomerang is that a good idea? is the blink automatic or a recast ability? W: i like what your aiming for as a pursuit mechanism but is it a point and click? what happens when they're outside of the dash?
E:i really like this as it encourages being in the heat of battle and is very unique. R: impale two champs? i like this.

Kloqdq7/28/2017, 7:55:45 PM1 votes

It's a neat idea for an assassin. I am not sure how I completely feel about it though. A lot of the abilities are neat and I can imagine them being pretty cool in practice. My issue is they just seem to mesh with other designs better (At least in my mind).

Mystic Falco7/29/2017, 9:06:21 AM1 votes

This is really cool. If you don't mind me asking I need help on a vampire concept? I also would like to know what people think? https://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/tlE6rvtg-kyren-the-mistwalker

Rektagon7/29/2017, 9:23:57 PM1 votes

I don't think this guy would get on with Sivir XD