[Champ Concept] Bain Lord of Souls

Bain, Lord of Souls Beefy top lane/jungle Mage Passive- Soul Lord As the Lord of Souls, Bain collects the souls of enemy champions (only once per champion) each soul gives Bain 10 bonus armor and magic resist, and 2% bonus magic damage to champions per soul (up to 10%). Q- Soul Torment Bain overloads the soul of everything in an AOE area, slowing champions hit by 25% for 1.5 seconds and doing damage W- Strength of Soul Bain sends a soul seeker skill-shot onto an enemy champion. While Bain is bonded to an enemy champion, Bain has 10% reduced move speed. While an enemy is locked, Bain's Q and R have bonus effects. His Q now stuns for 1 second instead of the slow, and his R now applies a bonus stack of Weakened Soul. E- Soul Barrier Bain stores damage taken, and when activated this ability converts it into a shield by double the damage taken. Soul Barrier would have a cap depending on ability level. 25/50/100/150/200 R- Empowered Soul Bain slams his staff down in an area, weakening the souls of all enemies in the area, doing damage, and buffing him accordingly. Bad would take 15% of armor and magic resist from enemy champions and he would gain 5% per enemy hit. This ability also applies a stack of Weakened Soul which functions like a Leona passive, except Bain can proc it as well. When this de-buff is proced, enemies take bonus magic damage based on the level of the ability.

As you can see, it's not really detailed, just wanted to put it out there and ask if it would work? If anybody likes to draw or w/e and wanted to draw Bain, I picture him as a beefy tribal shaman with a staff. Definitely open to feedback/criticism (welcome it actually) and would love to here some of your opinions on him.