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[Champion Concept] Bree the Frantic Mechanic

Magikae·8/12/2016, 2:30:24 AM·2 votes·687 views

This is an unfinished concept as I am open to many suggestions and ideas. I wont add any ability scales at the moment as it can get very complicated. Feel free to comment cool-downs for each ability as well! I will also add her lore at a later date! :D The main idea behind this concept is to create a champion who has the ability to upgrade herself and her weapon through the means of collecting a resource on the map.

Bree the Skilled Mechanic

Roles: Fighter/Tank (Juggernaut) http://www.deviantart.com/art/Wasteland-Mechanic-581977143)] This is some art I found on Deviantart but she would be covered up more with a little bit of armor.

Statistics:

Health: 540-1875 Health Regen: 6.3-20.5 Resource: Mana/Battery Packs Attack Range: 145 Attack Damage: 55-115 Armor: 35-85 Magic Resist: 29-54 Movement Speed: 335

Passive: Enhanced Weaponry

Bree is a very skilled mechanic and can pick up battery packs around the map (4 battery packs spawn every 2 minutes, however they wont spawn extremely far away from her current position her total collected battery packs are shown with an indicator near her health bar at the bottom of the HUD) to upgrade her weapon, a long wrench, and there is a total of 3 possible upgrades. After she has fully upgraded her wrench any batteries she picks up will give her 50 gold instead. The battery packs she pick up also grant her 10 health per pack with no cap. Upgrade One: This upgrade requires 6 battery packs. This upgrade increases her auto attack range by 40 which is a total of 185 range Upgrade Two: This upgrade requires 6 more battery packs. This upgrade gives her wrench the ability to slow a target by 15% every 4 attacks. Upgrade Three: This upgrade requires 6 more battery packs. This upgrade gives her wrench the ability to grant bonus movement speed when attacking units with stuns, snares, or slows. While targets are slowed, snared, or stunned Bree gains 30% life steal against those targets.

Q: Super Hit

Bree empowers her wrench causing her next auto attack to swing around her in a circle gaining bonus damage. This attack applies a slow of 10% and 25% more bonus damage to the first unit struck. Cool Down: 13/11/9/5/5

W: Battery Resolve

Bree sacrifices one of her batteries to be used as a form of defense. She lobs the battery to a location which lasts at the location for 8 seconds. The battery has the ability to heal Bree every second while in the radius of the battery. The heal radius is 500. If the battery she lobs hits an enemy it slows them and applies grievous wounds for 3 seconds. Due to this ability granting her a good amount of sustain her overall bonus health per level is smaller than most champions. Cool Down: 20/18/16/14/12

E: Electric Tether

Bree pulls out her electric tether/whip she created and flings it in a skill-shot line dealing damage to all units in the radius. It stops at the first enemy champion and latches onto them causing them to be slowed by 30% briefly if she stays in range of the target the tether shocks them and stuns them for 1 second and deals the same amount of damage at all ranks (only the second time it damages, the first time scales per level and with bonus AD. Cool Down: 11/10/9/8/7

R: Shock Burst

Bree charges her wrench with an electric charge and throws it at a target location. The wrench lodges into the ground and lasts there for 5 seconds. While the wrench is in the ground it pulses electric shockwaves each second (a total of 5 shocks) dealing damage in an area of effect. If a champion is damaged by 3 shockwaves they are stunned for 2 seconds. Cool Down: 85/65/45

Lore:

Bree was born in Piltover to a family of inventors. She grew up seeing her mother and father craft many things. One day she was curious and went down into her basement. She snooped in her father's closet and fount a huge wrench. This wasn't just any wrench it had a capsule on it that could store electricity. She found out that the capsule is powered by battery packs. Finding this wrench inspired her to explore and expand the power of the wrench she found that day. She created many inventions in her childhood including an electric whip. When the city was attacked by Jinx she wanted to protect her home and decided to craft a defense mechanism for the city. To this day Bree is inventing and she decided to join the League of Legends to further her wealth of knowledge. By joining the League she has made friends as well as enemies. That is the price she had to take to become a better inventor.

Friends: Ezreal Enemies: Jinx

11 Comments

Raxistaicho8/13/2016, 12:40:44 AM2 votes

Passive: It reminds me of a mix between Bard and Viktor's passives. It lacks "oomph" as is, because the upgrades are individually pretty weak. The extra gold and max hp are nice, though, and you might consider uncapping the hp bonus. This can be compensated for by giving her slightly below average hp growth per level.

Q: Nothing too fancy here. It works depending on how the rest of her kit is designed. be sure to specify that she only applies on-hits to her primary target, though, as applying on-hit effects in an aoe is very powerful. Might also want to have her empowered attack deal bonus damage, if only to the primary target.

W: Interesting application with her passive, and since she's a brawler it's actually a neat idea. I might suggest also granting Bee a movespeed bonus when approaching a thrown battery, as she's going to want to fight within that range if possible. 200 range is a bit small, though. For comparison, that's somewhere between Shyvana and Sejuani's W's. This kinda feels like a skill she'll use often, especially later, so you might want to actually remove the cost. Yes, I know it brings up the issue of "Where's she getting all her batteries from?" but we've got a long history of champions having a hyperspace arsenal :p

E: That slow is pitifully weak, better bump it up. When you're trying to decide on numbers, I suggest going through existing similar champions on the League wiki and get a feel for what numbers are appropriate. My only issue is this is VERY similar to Kled's own Q, which I understand is probably just an unfortunate coincidence of him recently coming out.

R: Neat idea. Probably have it slow too.

Overall: The general theme of her kit as far as I'm seeing is that she's something of a zone dominance champion. Her W and R give her areas where she can dominate a fight, while her kit is chock-full of slows to keep enemies there. It's pretty simple (I'm guessing you're relatively new at concept design?) but it flows together pretty well, it's got a reasonably unique concept, and it's got fair counterplay (she's got a lot of skillshots, dodge them and she has no way to push for fights in her favored zones), so good job there. I'm guessing she's a Juggernaut, right? Her lack of mobility kinda indicates it.

Her lore's super simple though, definitely look into expanding it.

Magikae8/15/2016, 1:51:23 PM1 votes

Bump!

Ralanr8/15/2016, 3:40:43 PM1 votes

Why is her AA range better than other Juggernauts?

Friendly Ram8/16/2016, 4:27:56 PM1 votes

I really like this one. might be a little on the weaker side but idk.

Magikae1/24/2018, 8:16:24 PM1 votes

Bump! Might as well bring this back into view ahah