Champion Concept : Kynyssael, the Matters Master

Alaurina·1/30/2015, 3:49:33 PM·3 votes·969 views

Introduction

Hi guys, this is my first post on the new forum. I hope you will like this champion as much as i liked to write it ^^. Don't forget to comment, and if you do, I'll comment your creation in return ^^.


Description

Les't start with a small description of this champion. Kynyssael is a range ap champion which control matter itself. Matter are divided in 4 category (for does who didn't knew it : Solid, Liquid, Gas, and Plasma Stage. She does NOT control the element ^^. Her appearance is somewhat like a warrior style, wearing light armor and use a sword, however, she is quite frail and pale. She is missing an eye (explained in the lore ;)) and is terribly scared


Lore

Kynyssael was born Orphant, she never knew her parent neither the warm of a happy household. Not much document report how she was manage to live... but she did.

At the age of 12, she was "chosen", along side 200 others, to be a human test subject in Zaun project M. Every day, few would die in the terrible experiment they were force to endure. After 2 month of torture, which would easily drive anyone mad, only Kynyssael was left with her only compagnion. Each passing day, they could feel a strange power growing in them. Together, they survived till the final part of the project. They final part... the stabilization of those power, came at the cost of the blood of an other human being. therefor they forced Kynyssael and her friend into a deadly battle. For they final night, they were allowed to see each other one more time, but Kynyssael refuse under the pretext that anyone who threaten her life is enemy, and must be killed.

The resulting battle lasted for few hour. Both of them whiling to survive, but Kynyssael young and cunning prove to be better then her partner. She however lost an eye and was terribly wounded from the battle, but the price was worth it. She could feel the power rising. The experiment was a success.

She was send into Noxus to be trained as a warrior. It is rumored that she kill many new recruit, who were attempting to beat a "frail young girl". Before she could go into a real battle, the League made its way, branding her as "useless". She therefore went to the only place she could be of use... the Institute of War, in hope to be of use again.

"The will and fury that burn in this child eye are terrible... at some point frighting." Darius, The Hand of Noxus


Ability

Passive: Versatile Blade When using her power, Kynyssael empower her blade with the last used State of matter used for a short time.

Solid : The next 3 basic attack will deal bonus magic damage (15 % of AP) Liquid : Her basic attack gain 200 bonus range (total of 350) for 5 second Gas : Her next basic attack grant a Ignition debuff on the target (Ignition deal 20/50/80/120 true damage over 3 second) Plasma : For the next 5 second, her basic attack burn the target for (10/30/50) (+40% ap) magic damage over 3 second, this dot count as Ignition

(Q) Solid Stage : Earth Shatter (on side note, level one only this skill can be taken) Kynyssael create a small tremor at chosen location creating a Earth Gap in the earth and dealing magic to nearby enemy. If an other is within the range of the Tremor, it will cause itself an other Tremor and consume a charge of it. (each time the same enemy is hit, the damage receive is reduce by 25 % (minimum 25%))

Maximum Earth Gap on map : 3/3/4/4/5 Earth Gap charge : 2/2/2/3/3 Cooldown : 10/9/8/7/6 Mana usage : 50/55/60/65/70 Tremor damage : 60/75/90/105/120 +50% Ability Power Range : 1000 Radius : 400

(W) Liquid Stage : Geyser Kynyssael use the small gap in the earth to make erupt water out of them, dealing magic damage and knocking back the enemy. This ability use a charge of the Earth Gap and affect all nearby Earth Gap

Knock back range : 200 Range : 1500 Radius of Geyser : 500 Cooldown : 16 every level Mana usage : 70/80/90/100/110 Geyser Damage : 80/95/110/125/140 + 50% Ability Power

(E) Gas Stage : Exploding Gas Kynyssael use the small gap in earth to erupt a dangerous gas from the earth, dealing damage over time and slowing all enemy within the game. This ability use a Charge of the Earth Gap

If an enemy with Ignition debuff walk in the gas, the gas explode, dealing massive damage to enemy hit, and renewing Ignition debuff

Range : 1000 Gas Radius : 550 Slow reduction : 10% all level + 2% of AP Cooldown : 8 Second all level Mana usage : 60/70/80/90/100 Damage : 20/25/30/35/40 + 30% Ability Power each second Duration : 5 second "Burst" Damage : 80/100/120/140/160 +40% ability Power

(R) Plasma Stage : Flame Burst Kynyssael use the small gap in the earth to erupt flame from down the earth. Dealing Magic damage, Igniting all target. This ability use a charge of the Earth Gap, and affect all gap in the map.

If there are Gas over an gap, the gas will explode.

Radius : 550 Cooldown : 80/70/60 Damage : 120/240/360 + 50% AP Mana usage : 100/150/200


Stats

Health : 510 + 68 per Level

Mana : 350 + 36 per level

Attack Damage : 55 + 2.6 per Level

Attack Speed : 0.7 + 3% per level

Movement Speed : 340

Health Regen : 5.3 + 0.35 per level

Mana Regen : 7 + 0.7 per level

Armor : 21 + 2.3 per level

Magic Resist : 30 + 0 per level

Attack Range : 150


Play Style

Kynyssael is a ap with a great ability to zone enemy.

As they is no limit to how long a gap can last, you can place them to create a tremor chain with her Q ability.

Start up by maxing her Solid stage ability to increase the number you can control. you can use them to protect your lane from gank, or make sure your target cannot escape with the combination of the W and E

Her burst damage start up level 6 when she get her ultimate. An well place E and R will burn your enemy pretty fast.

You should build her a little tanky then normal mid champion to compensate the fact she is a melee champion.


Quote

Selection Quote : There is only 2 option... either you are with me, or you are my enemy!

Attack quote : Orders will be carried out! Let the matter crush them! I will fight, so i can survive!

Move Quote : On my way. As swiftly as possible! Moving to encounter the enemy!

Taunt : Only two option are available... either you die, or die painfully.

Joke : Please summoner... is there any matter that require my attention

Special Taunt vs Enemy Champion

Darius : Fight me teacher! I'll show you the progress I made! Darius, I challenge you to a duel!

Singed : You may have create what i am right now Singed, but you will never be my commander! You will now fight the monster that I have became by your fault, Singed!

Garen : In the name of Noxus, I'll fight you, General Garen! Prepare yourself Garen, I'll crush you in the name of General Darius!

Special interaction with nearby champion

Using Plasma Stage : Flame Burst near an Ally Darius : General, did you see the power I have awoken?! Having a Kill/assist with an Ally Katarina Only : I knew I could count on you Katarina! Score a killing blow on a Enemy Garen : Victory to Noxus!

Buying Item Interaction

Trinity Force : As versatile as my blade.

Rabadon Deathcap : I can feel the power overflowing!

Zhonya's Hourglass : Even I know that this hourglass won't bring back my past...


Log -- Creation of the Champion (Lore ,ability)

-- Fine Tuning on Explosion par of Exploding gas, Flame Burst AP racio

-- Quote Creation Play Style Section Developed

11 Comments

Janna Windgale2/2/2015, 9:48:20 AM2 votes

First of all welcome to the forums.

I FUCKING LOVE THE LORE. I absolutely love, the amount of lore included in this to make me wanna try to visualise how all of this happened, is amazing.

However her kit seems to be a bit unbalanced. let's take a look at it shall we?

Passive: Versatile Blade When using her power, Kynyssael empower her blade with the last used State of matter used for a short time.

Solid : The next 3 basic attack will deal bonus magic damage (15 % of AP) Liquid : Her basic attack gain 200 bonus range (total of 350) for 5 second Gas : Her next basic attack grant a Ignition debuff on the target (Ignition deal 20/50/80/120 true damage over 3 second) Plasma : For the next 5 second, her basic attack burn the target for (10/30/50) (+40% ap) magic damage over 3 second, this dot count as Ignition

(R) Plasma Stage : Flame Burst Kynyssael use the small gap in the earth to erupt flame from down the earth. Dealing Magic damage, Igniting all target. This ability use a charge of the Earth Gap, and affect all gap in the map.

If there are Gas over an gap, the gas will explode.

Radius : 550 Cooldown : 80/70/60 Damage : 120/240/360 + 70% AP Mana usage : 100/150/200

I want to talk about the ratios here because you say for Plasma that for the next 5 seconds her basic attack counts as a burn for 10/30/50 damage increasing by 40% AP magic damage over 3 seconds. Together with that combination with the actual ultimate. that will deal another 120/240/360 + 70% AP damage, is basically a one shot ultimate. Let's take a look at the perspective of having 300 AP.

So we have your ultimate passive coming towards 40% AP at max level this would be 50 + 120 over 3 seconds together in combination with her ultimate damage that would be 360 + 210 = 570 damage already + an dot of 170 damage over 3 seconds. I call that rather unbalanced assuming that you are going to use your other abilities aswell.

Let me know what you have to say about this because I'll happily discuss this further.

Embertine2/2/2015, 12:49:18 PM2 votes

Besides your grammar, I really love this champion concept! A champion that uses the four stages of matter is pretty cool. And I like how she's frail looking and seems scared. The lore is very good despite the grammar issues, and her kit is pretty good as well! Though it does need a few tweaks.

I would love to know what you think of my champions since you offered.

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/n1MV9vzK-champion-concept-lorana-the-war-maiden

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/H3Advxr1-champion-concept-sharosh-the-blade-dragon

Also, how do you pronounce her name?

Alaurina2/9/2015, 1:10:40 AM1 votes

First Thx for the Feed Back ^^ its really apreciated

1: sorry for my grammar ^^' i am not a native English.

I'll start with Aurora comment

It may seem much when you see it was the raw magic damage number. however every champion have at least 20% magic resistance., i do see what you mean here though. you even forgot to take the in the equation the Gaseous Stage secound effect ^^'. Ill will reduce the Racio on the Gas stage at least =3. and maybe a little bit the ult itself. As for the Dot, 170 damage over 3 secound isn't that much.

Thank a lot if you loved the lore ^^

as for Embertine question, Kynyssael is pronounced Ki - ni - sa -- el

Alaurina3/5/2015, 5:25:56 AM1 votes

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