Character Design Feedback

Melodee·7/23/2018, 3:46:35 AM·1 votes·1,204 views

Hello, I really want to apply for an internship for Riot Games but I want to perfect my character design before I send it over. Any feedback will be welcome. I will create concept art for the character's movements, but first I need to perfect the idea. For the character's appearance, I hoped anyone would have some suggestions on how to make him look more magical.

Edit: this is just one design, I can scrap it any time and create a new one.

4 Comments

Daedeye7/23/2018, 8:35:36 AM1 votes

I will just comment on the ability kit!

I think the Q is very interesting. The W is ok. The E is too strong and feels strange, I think. Maybe you should change the whole ability. It would be good for example, if the champ could summon some units, so he can use Q on them, when there are no minions. You should also change the ultimate. The only abilities, that have an effect after death, are currently passives. You normally want to use your active abilities before you die, because it's in fact better to survive.

Yours, sincerely.