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[Champion Concept] Ag'leia the Void Queen

ZhaoYhun··24 votes·10,270 views

|Ƥ| For the Queen!

2 controllable commanders pop up to help Ag'leia whenever her HP is reduced to 20%. Resets upon champion kill.

|Ǫ| Paralysis

Ag'leia shoots a venomous bullet from her mouth that will stun the target in the next 3 seconds for 1 / 1.3 / 1.6 / 1.9 / 2.2

|Ꮚ| Disperse

Passive: Every 6th hit, a lifestealing bug heals Ag'leia

Active: Ag'leia transforms her body into a swarm of flies which damages nearby enemies overtime with the ability to dash once.

|ℰ| Void Portal

First cocoon: Is untargetable, wards the area for 60 seconds and spawns 3 void soldiers once the time runs out. You have 5 seconds to press E again which will destroy the cocoon, damage nearby enemies and spawn the 3 soldiers immediately.

Second cocoon: After placing the first one, you have to wait 5 seconds before you can add and benefit from this cocoon. It serves as a portal for allied champions to the first cocoon. Can be destroyed by the enemy.

|ℛ| Power of Doom

Ag'leia summons a greatsword which doubles the damage of all her abilities.

How she would/should look like http://i.imgur.com/1OUhF0E.png It's a Scarlet blade concept art.

I know R is a bit lame, couldn't think of a particular unique skill. Suggestions welcome, always nice to read creative skill ideas ;o

37 Comments

HeresyUntoFedex6 votes

Horrible appearance wise, haven't looked at this kit yet, I just can't get over the fact that she looks like an alien stripper. Void's all giant bugs unless you're a human give void powers, and if that's the case you're not queen of anything and you still look relativly human.

EDIT: Downvoted? Well, I suppose everyone likes their own things. Just saying that it doesn't even fit in lore wise, and it's way over-sexualized.

Oraenos4 votes

It's alright mate, we also have a version in stock which fits your taste. http://i59.tinypic.com/2vi0aqe.png

HeresyUntoFedex3 votes

It's alright mate, we also have a version in stock which fits your taste. http://i59.tinypic.com/2vi0aqe.png

Amazing, 10/10!

turkeyBACON4 votes

I agree it doesn't make sense for a female void creature to have a humanoid figure. And frankly it feels a bit forced. I don't get why all the female monster champs have to be women in sexy Halloween costumes: sexy spider, sexy plant, sexy fox, sexy snake, sexy unicorn/goat, sexy savage that turns into a cat, sexy half-dragon and now sexy alien bug. Yay for diversity! Anivia will just be crying in the corner here since she's lonely as the only female monster champ that's not a sexy costume.

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ZhaoYhun1 votes

Maybe I should rename her to Ag'leia the halfling. Half Void half Human

EC30455 votes

It looks light Zyra got a makeover from Kha'Zix then went to Maplestory and took Demon Avenger's desperado and has abilities that correspond with Azir, Zyra, Twisted Fate or something, some weird skill that is like a combo of an op Ashe E a full team TF Ultimate Azir's minion person and the old Scion shield, then her Aatrox ultimate. Seriously this champion's e would be over powered and besides that she would suck because she is non-unique.

ZhaoYhun2 votes

I did want her to look like Kha'zix in a way, maybe even related to him. I thought E was pretty unique and complicated. It wouldn't be global and only works for 2 to 1 not vice versa. 2 disappears when 1 does, lifespan 55 seconds, can be destroyed by the enemy. insert reasonable cooldowns here.

I wonder if you would have made a comparision with Azir if I switched the commanders and soldiers with void monsters. I dont see the link between Aatrox and this champion except for the sword.

Yoza1454 votes

This is a very cool idea and the art/design of it is very lovely.

What could be done for her "R" is Long Live the Queen. Ag'leia summons a copy of herself( not sure if it should be at a target location or not) to fight with her. The copy will use the same skills that Ag'leia uses as well as auto-attacking targets but at reduced damage. If the copy is killed Ag'leia gets healed for some percentage of health and if Ag'leia is killed while the copy is still alive she is resurrected with a percentage of health.

Anyway you did a great job with the artwork and the overall design. I hope more people see it.

DeathByWaffle4 votes

I'd fap to it

CuckDuck1 votes

I feel u bro

Maxilimus4 votes

Q - Targeted stuns are bad game design. It also does no damage which means the rest of her skills need to compensate which complicates things.

R - Double damage is obsurdly powerful. It would need to be balanced with the rest of her abilities being weak. Also a random greatsword? Thats compleatly out of character for the void.

Her damage rotation seems very odd. PBAOE and soldiers. Would need to be built tank to make use of the PBAOE, which would make her ult only increase their base damages which makes it kinda meh. She can summon 5 soldiers which is problematic. Assuming they are controllable like her passive, it makes for a lot of pathing issues and just general messyness. The LoL UI does not allow for easy control of summons, especially more than one.

ZhaoYhun1 votes

I haven't done a detailed explanation on the skills, I understand the numerous assumptions :) Both Q and W's dash are skillshots. Q does dmg, I just dont know how much.

Agreed, R is lame, as I mentioned before xD

The 3 soldiers (I should change this to monsters to avoid Azir comparissions) cannot be controlled, they attack the closest enemy and prioritize champions. They'll just follow the queen if no enemy is to be found, existing for a short period. The 2 controllable commanders cannot be randomly summoned, they're triggered when Ag'leia hits 20% HP.

xXx Gems xXx3 votes

Cool idea, too bad the void is going away. T^T

GreenLore1 votes

WTF? Stop telling lies,there was never anything said about the void going away,they even released Velkoz this year.

athame3 votes

Amazing concept, and I do in fact have a suggeston for the R that could be used for the void blade.

R-Dark Vortex

Ag'leia draws a giant void blade, slamming it into the ground and creating a gargantuan well of void energy in a radius of 12, sending herself and anyone who is in or comes into the vortex into a stasis, preventing them from performing any action or taking any damage. over 4 seconds this vortex draws back to Ag'leia, and she pulls the sword out of the ground, swinging it in a giant circle, knocking enemies back based 8 range, and based on distance pulled from, dealing 150/225/300 (+40% ad) damage (deals 50% more for every 2 range they were from her) Ag'leia can cast this again to pull enemies thrown to her.

ZhaoYhun1 votes

This sounds really cool!

AFK Push3 votes

If she is the void queen she should resemble all of the released void champs in one way or another. You have the kha thing going and even a little vel'koz with the eye on the sword, but what about cho and kog? I think that giving her some extra limbs like cho could show the relation, and maybe when she uses paralyzsis have a gaping mouth shoot from her stomach like kog.

Btw, yes she is sexy but I think the heels and lack of imagination (being able to see all of her) kind of ruins it. Perhaps those wing on her could be more like a skirt. That is just my opinion though.

Gaulrik2 votes

Maybe have the Ultimate have her other abilities spread growths into the enemy, and auto attacks cause them to explode and release flies that follow the target and give vision/damage over time? Looks cool though!

Son Olivia Hye2 votes

W seems a bit weak to me. Every 6 hits? Aatrox's w has only 3 hits on it for healing.

ZhaoYhun1 votes

She's kind of...a mage, just a little sustain to survive laning phase

Trading Aces2 votes

For those of you who like the artwork: http://blog.daum.net/osuk1009/5

reallifejedi2 votes

Ok good concept we do need more void champions I created one called rasalam

GreenLore2 votes

Ok here is my review: First of all the basic concept: Some kind of void queen is a neat idea,but people have been asking for a female monster(as in non-humanoid) for quite some time(when vel'koz was released many were sad to find out that he is male),making the only female void monster a sexy humanoid is a bit risky.

The passive seems a bit useless.I mean if you are down to 20% percent,then those soldiers are most likely not going to safe you(she also seems to be rather squishy,so I doubt she can tank to begin with)

The Q is quite simple,quite similar to elises human E though.Also what do you mean with she stuns in the next 3 seconds for 1 / 1.3 / 1.6 / 1.9 / 2.2?Those numbers usually say how long you stun the enemy(2.2 seconds in this case),but you say she stuns for 3 seconds...

W sounds a bit op,I mean she'd be untargetable like Vladimirs W wouldn't she?But vlads W comes at a huge cost(20% of his current life),but this one comes with a nice passive effect and a dash.

E so you can place 2 cocoons and travel between them? That sounds kinda neat,but you should probably add some limit to that,like only one champ can enter them or that there is some sort of range limitation(imagine placing a ward into the enemy base and later you place the first cocoon in your base,teleport to the ward and place the 2nd cocoon allowing all your team to travel over the whole map)

R sounds really a bit lame,I mean at least aatrox turns giant and starts to hack everything away.It doesn't even make that much sense to me,that she gains a sword that increases the strenght of her abilities,but not her auto-attacks...

ZhaoYhun1 votes

I just went with the League of Legends flow, making her sexy like the others (e.g Zyra, Shyv etc)

I think you are right, perhaps I should increase it to 50% or give the commanders massive dmg and/or movement speed. Of course they dont remain forever. They have a timelimit like the 3 soldiers or simply get killed.

Q is a paralysis venom, it needs to spread in the enemy's body before kicking in ;). So, get hit by a Q, take some dmg and get stunned after 3 seconds.

W has no invul. Perhaps give her extra MR, Def or a dodge when active.

E is indeed a traveling skill but only from 2 to 1. 1st cocoon is utility or offense (ward or AoE dmg+soldiers), when you choose ward(i.e after 5 seconds of placing it) you cannot pop it anymore, the only option left is placing the 2nd cocoon. It DEFINITELY has a range limit, I just don't know how much.

Achtelnote2 votes

Velkoz : Breathing heavily(Tentacles stiffens)

HeresyUntoFedex1 votes

Velkoz : Breathing heavily(Tentacles stiffens)

Damnit, WHO showed Vel'Koz this?!?

ZhaoYhun1 votes

This is the exact reason why she needs a greatsword!

Business trooper2 votes

Ker'rigan The Queen of Blades anyone?

Janna Windgale1 votes

I can see a potential rival for Irelia.

ZhaoYhun1 votes

I like the name, better than mine.

CuckDuck1 votes

I have an idea for R:A swarm of flies flies around the target enemy champion for 1 second, then they take form of that enemy making a targetable clone, and will attack them dealing a certain amount of damage with each auto attack. When this clone dies, it burst into flies dealing damage to enemies around it.

AbyssionKnight1 votes

The portal coccoon thing is silly. Reminds me of the cheese from s2 where you'd have tf or pantheon who would ult into enemy base, drop a ward, and the rest of the team would tp to it from random back doors.

In this case though, you only need tp on this champ, place a ward in their base, and then at some point, drop cocoon, tp to the ward, drop the other cocoon and your entire team is instantly in the enemy base.

Since none of her abilities interact with these soldiers, i'm also curious how they're supposed to be controlled, as well as what their damage, ms (if they can even move) etc are like.

8bj2yMEanN1 votes

lol, good old Scarlet Blade. Can you make base damages and scalings for the abilities?

ZhaoYhun1 votes

I charge you, Sir SaintGermain with this task, rise as a knight and be reasonable in numbers.

I think I'd mess up

Minaris1 votes

Wai can i see her butt >.<. Thats a little nasty. but other than that...its pretty kewl!

ZhaoYhun1 votes

Only perverts would notice O:

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