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Hallow: The Haunted Puppeteer

XierSR·4/19/2015, 1:56:28 AM·2 votes·829 views

This is my first time coming up with a champion idea, feedback would be appreciated.

Name: Hallow Title: The Haunted Puppeteer Role: Mage

(Cooldowns coming soon) Passive: Horror

Every 5th ability Hallow casts will reduce target damage by 5%.

Q: Puppet toss

Hallow throws a puppet at a target enemy. When the puppet lands on the target it latches on a stabs the target dealing 40/55/70/85/100 magic damage + (70% of his AP).

W: Puppet show

Hallow summons a circle of dancing puppets that slows all enemies inside the circle for 4 seconds, at the end of the show the puppets bow and knifes shoot out of their heads dealing 10/20/30/40/50 magic damage + (30% of his AP).

E: Chainsaw puppets

Hallow summons three puppets holding chainsaws that last for 5 seconds that last one second longer for every attack they land up to a max of 10 seconds. These puppets must be hit 5 times to be killed but they heal one hit point every time they land 2 attacks. These puppets have a set attack speed of 1.00 and deal 50 physical damage (+ 10% of his AP). Their movement speed is shared with Hallow.

R: Mr. Poppet Puppitson

Hallow channels for 2 seconds and is then replaced by his treasured puppet: Mr. Poppet Puppitson. Poppet has 500/800/1300 (+100 for every 100 AP) health and takes 15%/20%/30% + (1% per 50 AP) reduced damage. Poppet deals damage with his auto-attacks that is equal to 50% of Hallow’s AP. All of Poppet’s abilities are the same as Hallow’s but they do 150% more damage and the chainsaw puppets have double health, heal every attack, and have 1.50 attack speed. Poppet lasts for 30/35/40 seconds or until he is destroyed which acts like a kill on Hallow.

Quotes:

His voice is slightly high-pitched with a maniacal tone to it (a little like Shaco's I guess) Champion Select: “Time to put on a show!”

Beginning of Game: “Ooooo, I hope I get an encore!” “SHOWTIME!” Moving:

“I’m the one pulling the strings” “Come be a part of my show” “Don’t you just love theatre?” “My shows are the best around” “(Hallow snickers)…what? Just think up some jokes” Attacking:

“Do you like my show?” “And for my next performance…a gruesome death for you!” “Haunted? Me? Hmmmm…maybe” “I just love Showtime” “Come on! Laugh! It’s funny! No? Die then!”

Joke: “Knives at a puppet show? Yes, yes I have a license” “LOL? What is this LOL? Please laugh…realistically”

Taunt: “I’ll put on a show with your corpse!” “A little poke and you’re dead!” “I would put on a show with your corpse, but I don’t think I’ll get an encore…”

Lore Coming Soon

4 Comments

jmaishere4/19/2015, 3:00:00 AM2 votes

ok so the idea is good, but you definitely need to tweak all the skills. To start off, the passive is way too overpowered, that's literally a 1 sec silence each time he lands an ability. You should probably change the passive.

ok so on to the q. I like the idea, but is it a targeted spell? or an aoe?

for the w, it sounds fine, but is the circle part of the ground? or is it like thresh's box and has to be broken out of?

for the e, the time extension is much too long, if a skill was that long it should be an ultimate and not a regular skill. Also, with your current damage set, 3 puppets hitting one person when you have 500 ap is over 600 damage per second, which is much too high, either tweak numbers or change the skill so it's much weaker.

for the ult, first of all, channel should be able to be interrupted, if you have a channel that can't be interrupted, there is no counter. Second of all, either reduce hp or reduce damage reduction, it's too strong. 3rd of all, you should make it so that if the ult is destroyed he dies, but if not then he has a scaling amount of hp left, other wise the enemy team has to do around 5000 just to kill the ult in and of itself, not including another 2000 or so for a total of 7000 to kill the champ... that's usually enough damage to kill half an enemy team.

The concept is interesting, but this is more OP than yasuo and darius combined at release.