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[CHAMPION CONCEPT] Nollok, The spectral shadow

Not Sungben·11/22/2015, 3:22:09 AM·42 votes·4,521 views
Nollok

Nollok, The Spirit of Art (Or Call him Nollok, the Spectral Shadow. Spectral meaning ghostly, and also referring to part of a spectrum)

If you're wondering why the art is bad, it's because I'm actually very new to digital art. (Just saying because of some feedback I got. Sorry for calling you out. If you want, I could always remove it if you want.


My vision of Nollok is an AP based mobile utility champ, who was utility and CC based off of reducing and boosting vision. He's very squishy and has decent burst damage. I'm trying to make his main place at the middle lane, but also having capabilities of going into the jungle. My goal for this champion is to make Nollok have an extremely unique feel to his gameplay, and add mechanics that many other champions don't have. 

_Nollok's design was inspired off of Bower Jr, and Shyguy. I started actually working on the concept was created 2 years ago, and was changed more than 10 times! I can't remember when I started the original design, though.. Special thanks to my friends Ryuunosuke, and itsMAGICyouKNOW for helping me out with this concept!_

**Things to note:**

- I haven't decided Nollok's gender yet. But I think I want Nollok to be genderless for now.
- Nollok does not have a voice. But if he did, it would be kind of ghostly, but also calm.
- Nollok's body is made out of ink. Not some weird ghostly substance.
- Nollok's body color can fluctuate. The more he attacks or takes damage, the more his body color changes, but the color will always revert back to the tinted black color.
- Nollok's body color will always be the same color as the color of the ink on his brush. So if the color of his brush changes, Nollok's body color changes. And if Nollok's body color changes, the paint brushes color changes.
- Nollok can hop on his orb of ink below him and ride it.
- Nollok's body acts like a fluid.

Base Stats:

Attack Speed: 0.660 Attack Range (Melee): 190 Attack Damage: 60 Armor: 21 Magic Resist: 32 Health: 565 Mana: 350 Speed: 335 Health Regeneration: 8.2 Mana regeneration: 6.5


**ABILITIES**

Spectral Clarity - Passive

For very 10 units killed, Nollok and his allies gain vision (Kind of like Rek'Sai tremors. You can't actually see them, but you know where they are) of every enemy champion on the map for 15 seconds. (2 minute cooldown)


**Q, Pigment Infuse**

Nollok tethers an enemy champion for 5 seconds within a radius. If the tether lasts for the full duration, the tether deals magic damage, and makes a large mark in the middle of the enemy champions screen, making it hard for the enemy to see. The blind lasts for 5 seconds. After that, the champion will be marked. If killed with the mark on it, Nollok will gain 50 additional ability power for 3 seconds, stacking up to 2 times. If a jungle mob was killed with the mark, Nollok gains 200% health and mana regeneration for 3 seconds. (30 second cooldown)

_NOTE: THE MARK IS SUPPOSED TO BE LIKE TWO STROKES OF PAINT, JUST TO CLARIFY TO THE OTHERS  THAT DIDN'T KNOW. ALSO, THE MARK WOULD BE ANY RANDOM COLOR.
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[]http://imgur.com/QBsruFj

**W, Blinding Vision **

Nollok flashes a light in a cone from his eyes, dealing damage over time. Champions hit will not be able to receive vision granted by friendly units for 5 seconds. If the cone hits a ward, or anything that grants vision to the enemy team, the unit will not be able to grant vision to the rest of the enemy team for 45 seconds (DOES NOT APPLY TO CHAMPIONS).

Note: When Nollok flashes his light, his mask opens up like double doors, and THEN he flashes the light.


**E, Blink**

**Active:** Nollok blinks to a target location, dealing magic damage around the radius where Nollok started from and finished.

**Passive:** Blink and Pigment Infuses cooldown are reset if an enemy is killed by Nollok

R, Trace

Nollok can sketch or forge one of four things in this state.

Q, Claymore: Nollok spins around in a circle with his augmented paint brush. Dealing a large amount of damage in a circular radius around him. All champions hit are briefly knocked aside. Nollok then gains a large amount of attack speed and his basic attacks do additional magic damage.

W, Bomb: Nollok throws a large bubble of ink from his paintbrush to a location. All champions hit take small damage and are briefly slowed, and are blinded by the mark. The champions hit are also marked with the mark that they would usually be by Nollok's Q.

E, Path: Nollok has the ability to draw a line on the ground with limited range. After that, he goes into the trail and teleports to the end of the line, dealing damage in a large radius, and pulling enemy units in. If units are dragged in towards the center of gravity (where Nollok is) then Nollok will be invisible towards the champions hit, and them only. Nollok cannot move while drawing the line.

R, Sketch: Creates a clone of Nollok that looks like a little mini version of Nollok, just without legs. Nollok's clone attacks when Nollok attacks (Including abilities). The clones attacks don't do damage, but heals Nollok for a percentage of health that the attack would normally do. Every 10% of the clones HP that is taken, the clone heals for 1% more. Nollok's clones can last forever and Nollok can have up to 5 clones at a time.


I know he seems extremely broken, but that's why I'm going to need you guys for some feedback. 
If you guys have any suggestions or ideas for other concepts that you'd like me to draw, or create with you, tell me! Thanks! I'd love to have a small tag team of creators, you know? It's probably my favorite part about creating, too!
_(I'll give you credit if you're the one who helped me out if I'm the one who posted. Trust me, I'm a pretty honest guy)_

Upvote this post, please! I want it reaching as many people as possible!

Also, to the people that have been asking me to put up numbers, I didn't put them on the concept because I don't want people to be concerned about how much damage he does, but the general _idea_ of the concept. If you only have an opinion of that, you, the viewer, would be able to scale the abilities down to a point where _you_ think it's reasonably balanced.

_My next champion will be a girl. Her name is Valorie, keeper of the mist._

[](http://pre14.deviantart.net/0559/th/pre/f/2017/221/9/a/reformed_01_by_sungben-dbjg5bn.png)

42 Comments

Farmcow013911/22/2015, 5:07:16 AM3 votes

Passive should only grant for 15 seconds, as adc mains could easily keep it up forever.

Q should be targetable on jg mobs, and if the mob is killed with mark, you gain + 200% mana and hp regen. Mark should last 3 seconds on enemies screen, and could possible look like a lot of paint was splattered onto the camera.

W should turn wards off while looking at them, and give you vision. It should probably last as long as its turned on [similar to ammumu tears] and drain mana.

E arrival should fear for 0.75 seconds, and E leave should silence [to make it a great escape and initiate tool]

R, Q is pretty good already. R, W should deal low damage, but cover all nearby enemies screens with paint, making it very difficult for all of them to see. R, E would be cool if you could create a trail for 10 seconds, [you aren't slowed at all and can move freely and trail moves wherever you walk]at the end of the 10 seconds you would slide on the paint and go all the way back to the place, also grabbing nearby champions and pulling them back with you. It should also have a range limit so you can't build move speed and fly all the way to your command tower. R, R, is great, just would make the damage it would do base attack damage so people wont build ad and heal 100% of their health, and when he dies he explodes and covers nearby enemies in paint, fearing them.

Also change his title to something like, The Spirit of Art, or something to do with paint.

Edit: What i meant by vision was you could see into bushes, and i personally see this version as a great mid/jg, as his Initiation potential is extremely high, and ward disabling could trick supports, as you stare into the bush from over the wall, turn it off, flash over or e in and wait for them to try and ward, then initiate on them and kill them before the adc can help.

LOL Spammer11/22/2015, 9:36:22 PM2 votes

Nocturne

JesterSummoner11/23/2015, 5:20:21 AM2 votes

I don't have much of an opinion on it's abilities but I really do like the concept art! I think he will fit in nicely.

XxRonaldoxX711/22/2015, 7:29:34 AM1 votes

tweak numbers. passive cooldown.

The Ecdysiast11/22/2015, 7:49:59 AM1 votes

Doesn't seem too broken. At least, way more fair than Ekko. If he's a jungler, I'd say good.

Maybe instead of that sight passive (which would be way too good in higher level play), give him some sort of painted auto on the enemy. Like, every ability paints the enemy and the next attack against that enemy deals bonus damage. That'd also go well with his Sketch ultimate, as well as Runeglaive.

Silver Fluffenbu11/22/2015, 12:12:09 PM1 votes

looks like a digimon

FlameHalbrdOkido11/22/2015, 1:45:33 PM1 votes

whoa passive OP!

um yeah after looking at Kit it will need a lot of work

ill be back

FruitFiji11/22/2015, 7:38:44 PM1 votes

This is a matter of my opinion, please just take these into consideration and tell me what you think. His passive, could also make him leave a short trail of ink that slows anyone in it. But in turn along with his E should have a movespeed reduction(335-325) because of escape potential. For his Q is think it should make his brush spray paint the map(can't see map) and reduce vision of the champ depending on their attack range. For his W, I think the brush should light up in a radius above him(And follows him), turning off vision that sees him while active, and 5 seconds longer after the active it was a ward. Champions in the radius have that section of the map blocked. He could level his W in two ways.

  1. He makes the brush mark one target in the radius, and slows only them and auto attacks them as well.
  2. The brush targets all enemies in the radius and slows them shortly, leaving a trail, not harming the target unless they step on another's trail. *His E range would need to be shorter, because of his slows and vision reductions. For his R R+Q, is good.(Kind of reminds me of Xin ult) R+W, could empower his W active, making it longer and stronger(thats what she said).If he leveled it to the 1st option, the brush marks and paints all the enemies in the increased radius, and shines a light that harms them. If leveled to the 2nd option, he could gain speed and magic pen from their trails, while the enemies are harmed from their own trails. R+E, needs a smaller range for the champs to be pulled in, so more skill has to go into that option. R+R,great idea, but needs to have a weak spot in killing it, maybe cc to it instantly does a pretty large percent of it's health, and where it dies leaves a paintbrush where if picked up resets his W. Overall great champ idea, and I can see an Epic Mickey skin being made for him. I think his mana-regen might need to be buffed a little as well, maybe to at least 8.
FlameHalbrdOkido11/22/2015, 5:27:17 AM1 votes

ill be back

mkBai11/22/2015, 11:17:23 PM1 votes

BRO ITS A GOOD IDEA ITS PRETTY SAD THAT ITS NOT UR IDEA. this was made by a friend and the champs name is KIT http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/QF27Eqrp-champion-concept-kit-the-silent-stroke you even copied the abilities. your pictures dont even look like you care about it. IDK if this is how u actually draw but look at how this guy made the champ that u copied and tell me who drew it better. BTW i am not mad i am just disappointed someone would do something like tht. Braum YOU DONT DRAW LIKE BRAUM

ZGM Dazzling11/23/2015, 12:26:51 AM1 votes

The kit actually looks awesome except that the Q that might be game breaking. Not being able to see your screen seems a bit to RNG and not something you would expect form league of legends. Basicly it either will completely hinder someone, or it will have no affect on someone better. Otherwise why would u have someone be able to click randomly than just stun them or snare them right?

Other than that the kit hits the spot for the color spectrum theme!

On a side note, Have you thought about lore at all? ie. where this champion would fit in runneterra?

4NoxiousHours11/23/2015, 2:03:28 AM1 votes

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SexySoapTurtle11/23/2015, 2:13:04 AM1 votes

Says hasn't decided gender. Or Call him Nollok

hafhafx211/27/2015, 3:07:08 AM1 votes

sry about delet comment can you delet your comment and write any thing for my idea and Nollok is very beautiful he like Riven sword and like Fizz Teemo Gnar thx i know he is taller than Teemo but he is cute likeTeemo Gnar and his arm likeFizz

Zerobillion11/24/2015, 4:05:33 PM1 votes

What if I press R and decided I didn't want to use an ability? Well there be a way to cancel? Also that passive is like a twice as strong tf ult

Pokeherman11/25/2015, 9:00:14 AM1 votes

The whole concept is amazing and well thought out, but the mark on screen might be a bit too op in a team fight or in jus talking as the smaller the screen or the less of the screen the game takes up the harder it is to see anything. So maybe just a blind where the autos and the spells have a chance of missing if thats what your going for? Im not sure but that seems just as op jus less likely to be the wining move.

losing bot11/22/2015, 6:49:42 AM1 votes

THE MELEE MID THO