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[CHAMPION CONCEPT] Terraprae, Defender of the World

Hrd2H1t·11/24/2016, 4:10:02 AM·2 votes·330 views

LORE:

Terraprae is a giant stone golem, constructed with a World Rune as his center. Created before known history, Terraprae was sealed away in true ice, only to ever emerge if the world itself was in danger. While the only known times that he was seen were during the rune wars, he has recently been seen roaming across Valoran. Physically, Terraprae is a stone colossus taller than Sion. He has a stone sword sheathed in his back, melding into his granite flesh. Despite the sword, Terraprae usually only fights with brutal punches. His true strength is unknown, but he is strong enough to break true ice. Terraprae can talk, however he only says things that are informative and it is unknown if he even possesses cognitive thought.

ABILITIES:

[PASSIVE: BODY OF STONE] Terraprae gains bonus armor and tenacity per level. Additionally, Terraprae's basic attacks deal an additional 10% of his bonus armor as physical damage.

Terraprae also has a hidden passive known as "Threat Spotted", which gives him 1 bonus gold whenever killing an enemy Void champion.

[Q: NECESSARY BRUTALITY] Terraprae sends out a powerful strike, dealing physical damage to and knocking back all enemies hit. If an enemy that is knocked back collides with a wall, they ricochet off the wall slightly and are slowed.

[W: READY FOR ANYTHING] Terraprae readies to be hit for a short amount of time. When first hit by an autoattack or non-ultimate ability during the duration, it will deal no damage and Terraprae will be granted a shield as large as a portion of the damage he would have received. The shield slowly decays.

[E: ENGAGE HOSTILES] Leaps to a target unit. Deals physical damage to the unit if they are an enemy, and deals physical damage and knock up enemies in a crater around Terraprae. The crater radius, damage, and knock up strength increase the farther Terraprae leaps.

[R: DAMN THE VILE] Terraprae unsheathes his sword, empowering his next autoattack. His next autoattack suppresses the target, and Terraprae is taunted by the target. While suppressed, the target takes 10% increased damage. While taunted, Terraprae takes 10% reduced damage.

4 Comments

Godhri11/24/2016, 4:27:55 AM1 votes

You have 3 ults in your kit.... the passive is essentially a copy of Malphite's W.

First ult (Q): It is basically Aurelion Sol's ult.

Second Ult (E): It is basically a malphite ult.

Third ult (R): It is like a WW ult + a single target Vlad ult. Not to mention, it really doesn't make sense that a sword suppresses someone.

Without specific numbers/stats though, it is hard to tell if these abilities will essentially be functional ults.

CrazyBear198711/24/2016, 5:21:29 AM1 votes

"Terraprae was sealed away in true, only" what this True thing?

Passive: okay

Q - I assume this a close range ability, that does Alistar's headbutt knock back. Could use more number's, W- this could be a double activate: 1st activation absorbs non-ultimate damage for maybe a short period. 2nd activation is turn absorb damage into shield. the way it now, it like Janna can auto you, and you get auto attack damage as a shield, that's really minor no? like i said, needs numbers E - I asuume this is like Zacs leap, where you have to hold it for distance, the knock up is excessive in my opinion, since you are already making a crater. Got to have some counterplay even if they didn;t dodge the inistal impact. R - This is visually confusing. if they surpressed, they shouldn't be able to do anything. Taunting you is also weird. and it comes from an empowered auto attack. Doesn;t act or sound like a ultimate, your E or W would a better in an ult form, cause it changes the battle field. Rammus does this better with just a normal ability. Galio can taunt all enemies around him.

Rethink a few things i would say.