Echoing's Champion Concept and Review Nexus

ModEchoing·1/6/2016, 8:25:20 AM·4 votes·712 views

Been awhile since one of these things popped up.

Post here with a link if you want me to take a look at your champion. I'm thorough and somewhat harsh, but I'm just trying my best to help you refine your concept.

Also, check out my own stuff - I try to practice what I preach.

My Champions: Ayrel, the Fae Regent Fenne, the Blades of Conflict Kenneth, the Drone Prodigy

My Favorite Concepts So Far: Telum, the Dark Immortal Nanarai, the Remaining Light Broken in Two

Quick Tips To Making Your Champion Look Cool

  • Clean up your post and make it look nice and easy to read. As few grammar errors as possible (should be zero), generous line breaks to differentiate between sections, and careful use of bold and italics.
  • Make sure your champion does something new. A champion that brings nothing new to the table either obsoletes everyone or is obsoleted by an existing champion.
  • Have a specific role in mind for your champion. Build everything around that role. Your abilities don't need to be faceroll-y, but they do need to flow together logically to serve that role.
  • If you don't know how to balance numbers, leave them out. The concept can stand alone without numbers. If you want to try, consult the LoL wiki and compare your numbers with numbers from similar champions and abilities to yours.
  • Watch out for the comments. Don't be fooled if you're getting several comments that just say "good job I like it" without explaining why. Look for the ones that give you the most feedback.

11 Comments

Secluded Death1/6/2016, 12:43:30 PM1 votes

If you wouldn't mind, could you do a review of my concept Nanarai, the Remaining Light Broken in Two?

I will try to look at one of your concepts as well, but be warned. I'm not good at understanding things~

Thanks in advance! ☻

ModEchoing1/7/2016, 6:03:10 AM1 votes

I've added some quick tips. Give those a check before you ask me to take a look; I'm noticing I'm repeating myself very often.

ModEchoing1/8/2016, 6:36:06 PM1 votes

I've added a new concept of mine.

Please do post if you want a review. I'm happy to help.

MrFluffyPuffy1/8/2016, 11:46:48 PM1 votes

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/WfykBtj2-champion-concept-dwaal-the-dark-light It´s just the kit and pictures for inspiration. I will edit the lore in if I thought of a good story.

Vanic9981/9/2016, 5:05:54 AM1 votes

http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/skin-champion-concepts/sp2MgAL7-zolt-the-anti-mana Just curious, how do you put the link to something and make it appear as the name of the champion or whatever you want it to be? Zolt, The Anti Mana

Vanic9981/9/2016, 8:26:56 PM1 votes

Have you tried reviewing the Sigil champion concept? It's popular and the creators even made a full website with 3D model and other cool thing. It's lacking somethings. Try it out. It's called sigil and it looks like a lizard.