Shen: A Journey.

TyrekGoldenspear··13 votes·1,404 views

This is a little something I put together for our resident flippin' ninja main. Enjoy.


Once, in the Fields of Justice, there was a flippin' ninja named Shen. Whose ninja skills were impressive, rivaled by few men. He could heal, he could shield, he could taunt and leap. Every so often, his strikes hit so hard they sent foes to the floor in a heap.

But one day, to the High Council chambers he was called, our flippin' ninja was simply enthralled. "Have they finally seen my talent?" The ninja asked with ninja excitement. "Only news of my glorious deeds would bring this invitement!"

However once he arrived, his hope died, unable to be revived. The High Councilors sat in their chairs, some faces severe, some were bright, and one face was a leer.

"Your performance is grand, but in the grand scheme boring, in fact in your last match your summoner started snoring." "We decided to alter your skills, your looks, give you a new breath of life, in time you shall see that we are guided not by strife."

The flippin' ninja protested, he begged and he pleaded, "A Visual Update," the ninja protested, "is simply not needed!" "My summoners may not be a large group, but they are loyal and proud, a fine troop."

But his pleas fell on deaf ears; their mind was set. They set upon a course that he would never forget.

They used their magic, a whole squad of summoners. They pulled some of his ki and weapons apart, and set it apart from the others.

His powerful strikes became his shield, a weak one at that. Shen stopped paying attention halfway though; he felt like he swallowed a rat. His blade was transformed, lodged into the Spirit World. But the job was only done part-way; in the visible air it lazily twirled. The ki for his shield was thrown to the Spirit Sword; a zone that blocked all strikes emerged, The leftover ki was simply purged. They felt not to alter his dash and his ult. "After all", they said, "we want this to be Shen, not an insult."

When they were done, Shen felt very dizzy, but what he was turned into, oh his summoners were busy. "Turn Shen back!" Their hollers sounded, "This kind of change was unfounded!"

Meanwhile Shen felt more dead than alive, As he saw he was tethered to a giant sword; each time he fought he had to wait for it to arrive. His shields felt weak and his vision felt muted. But he had to admit that the use of his zone was undisputed.

As time passed he started to adapt. Soon in his presence bones snapped. His summoners still fumed, they felt betrayed. But new ones were drawn to him; they liked how he was portrayed.

Eventually the chambers called him back, to give him news that threw him out of whack. "Times are changing, and we have discovered, that you are too strong, your last opponents still haven't recovered!"

With that they took a magical bat to every base stat. With Shen thinking, What have I done to deserve that? They left him in a state most crippled, said he was fair, not aware of what had rippled.

He lost every game, his summoners stopped coming. "He is useless now!" His summoners proclaimed, their veins thrumming. "He's so weak, his damage is naut!" "This was an improvement, or so you thought!" "What's the use of teleporting to another lane," "If he can't even win his own, especially against someone with a brain!"

The plain ninja, no longer flippin' Felt he might as well disappear, none heard his summoners' yippin'. He stopped going to League banquets and missed every game. His heart only broke when none remembered his name.

One day alone in his room, a special guest came to dispel his gloom. An old friend of his, at least one can assume. Her name was Akali, a flippin' ninja like him. "Like I was." Shen remembered, his voice grim.

"Don't speak like that," Akali insisted. "Don't get the High Councilors' intentions twisted." "They have seen their error, they know they made a mistake," "Their intentions were pure, but they now know your heartbreak."

Akali pulled Shen to the window, and to his surprise, his summoners were there; he couldn't believe his eyes. "We all still care for you Shen, there was no need to run." Akali insisted, her eyes shining like the sun.

Shen's eyes stung, with tears afresh. His summoners did care, they were all here in the flesh. He saw now that after their anger and sadness was done, They would come back to him, their friendship he had long ago won.

"You are still the same ninja we have all come to love," "Now get out there and have fun!" She said with a shove. "Your journey to balance isn't over Shen," "But until you get there I will come, again and again."

Shen walked outside, his head held high. For no matter what happened, he was still the Twilight's Eye.

41 Comments

midnight oil244 votes

Damn, Tyrek, this was a moving piece. Now I gotta try me some shen top, join his loyal troop.

TyrekGoldenspear4 votes

Thanks! I really appreciate the kind words.

Glad I could get you to join the Shen troop.

midnight oil244 votes

How about gifting me shen ;)

Jk, jk. But yeah, he seems interesting. I loved at the end when he had a "you are not alone" moment. That's one of the best ways to end a story, and it was genuinely heartwarming.

TyrekGoldenspear4 votes

Yeah, I personally have a weakness for happy endings. I love 'em to death and can't have enough of them.

I just hope the Shen main I made it for likes it as much as you do. :D

midnight oil245 votes

I like happy endings but I especially love happy endings you have to earn. Nothing like having to fight a world-ending god of destruction to get your happy ending. I really hate it when a story ends with "and the villain won."

and I'm sure they will. Who wouldn't love this?

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

You should avoid my tale then XDDDDDDDDD

BladeSingularity1 votes

Ah ... the end of it was happy.

Started to type said happy ending and then realized that would be a spoiler. Good thing I noticed.

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

Katarina is a villain for all, so there's no happy endings if she's involved xD

midnight oil241 votes

She used to be more villainous. Now she's just a jerk I think.

A jerk who wants to get it on with Garen ;)

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

She doesn't, except in your weird broken imagination.

And the way you say it, it seems like you mean I'm the jerk, not her -.-"

midnight oil241 votes

Whoops, sorry bout that. YOu're not a jerk. You're pretty nice.

Also, there's a lot of hinting at her and Garen, like Tahm Kench's taunts towards them and Jhin's taunts towards them.

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

A murderer and a demon taunt... Not sure if you realize how wrong is that to accept it as a truth. A guy who wanted to ruin my life taunted me for years that I'm in love with someone. At the end I had to break the persons arm so they can finally learn that I don't love or ever will love the person... So don't accept the taunts literally. Plus Garen is a playboy and he would be after Kat because she denies him. While Kat could be in love with herself and she is scared to admit it. Plus she has too huge loyalty towards her family so her secret love could be the love for her own family... She isn't one to love an ape. ^^ P.s I am a jerk, I am arrogant and I am cruel, but I am also loyal and just. Tyvm

TyrekGoldenspear1 votes

Garen is a playboy

Ahem. I think you're thinking of Jayce or Taric. Garen is many things. A playboy he isn't lol. Also he is no ape. He's actually quite dexterous to Spin2Win like that. :P

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

Ape and a playboy... Don't advertise him, I'd still pref to... I mean she would still pref to kill herself than to let him touch her.

P.s jayce is a sexy nerd and taric is the 3rd wheel in lux x ezla

TyrekGoldenspear1 votes

I'll concede that you know Kat better than I do, but I can guarantee I know Garen better than you do. :P

I am well versed in all the Demacian champs.

Also, EzXLux for life

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

And I don't get any more notifications on this one, plus garen is still an ape. Gg >.>

BladeSingularity1 votes

realizes someone agrees with her preference for happy endings

YESSSSSS!!!!!

FINALLY someone who doesn't like the horribly tragic endings I have to keep reading...

TyrekGoldenspear1 votes

Oh hey! Good to see ya again!

Yeah, I like happy endings, which is why I really got to push myself to finish my fic, so I can make one of the biggest I've written yet.

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

I prefer realistic endings than fake happy endings. >_>

TyrekGoldenspear1 votes

Not to worry, the ending of my fic will be plenty realistic. (As realistic as it can get considering this is the LoL world we're talking about lol.)

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

Nununu u don't get it. I don't like this "And the prince farted and the princess woke up and they lived happily ever after!" I'm more like "It's not perfect, could be way better... but hey at least they are still happy. Here's a backdoor for more work on this"

TyrekGoldenspear1 votes

But it was a magic fart...

Jk, I see your point. You need conflict and real problems, ya know?

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

Yeah! That's why I didn't like my tale pre rework. But then Kata gave me few lessons, so I managed to make a rework that made me proud of what I've done at the end! ._.

TyrekGoldenspear1 votes

Eh, I can dig it. Now if you'll excuse me I'll pump out the final part for Act I so I can sleep feeling accomplished in this regard lol. I have put it off for far too long.

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

Stop stealing all my readers and upvotes! Q_Q Support members keep saying that they cant upvote or comment cuz then it will look like they are faving me! Feels so small and unloved Q_Q

TyrekGoldenspear1 votes

No worries, we both write completely different subjects.

[slayer-pantheon-thumbs]

Now if I start writing about Kat, then you can start worrying lol, but that isn't likely to happen. I know literally nothing about her except for a rudimentary understanding of her kit so I can stomp her (or keep from feeding) when I face her in lane.

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

You should add me on steam and talk with me. You'll get to know her perfectly then. By just getting to know me. And different subjects or not, you still take all the readers and likes ;-;

BladeSingularity1 votes

Stomp Kat???

Uh oh ... you and I are going to have a conversation about that ...

You don't "stomp" Kat. You survive the lane with either a better KDA and cs than her, or with a really bad score (and your team's probably yelling at you for feeding).

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

{quoted}

Stomp Kat???

Uh oh ... you and I are going to have a conversation about that ...

You don't "stomp" Kat. You survive the lane with either a better KDA and cs than her, or with a really bad score (and your team's probably yelling at you for feeding).

why I got a notife for Tyrek's message Q_Q

TyrekGoldenspear1 votes

{quoted}

Stomp Kat???

Uh oh ... you and I are going to have a conversation about that ...

You don't "stomp" Kat. You survive the lane with either a better KDA and cs than her, or with a really bad score (and your team's probably yelling at you for feeding).

I only saw this becuase I happened to browse the page lol.

I am only speaking to the experience I had to where I thoroughly wrecked a Kat as Viktor.

I bet you would make me stay even at the least, I am not sure about her skill level but I know you'd probs give me a run for my money if I'm not careful lol.

midnight oil241 votes

Yeah, nothing more obnoxious than a tragic ending or- worst of all- a forced happy ending. They shouldn't just get their happy ending, they gotta work for it. Otherwise it isn't genuine.

Permission to add you?

BladeSingularity1 votes

Oh, sure.

midnight oil241 votes

Thank you

Melledoneus4 votes

http://i.imgur.com/IsZF8pX.gif?noredirect

This was so beautiful. I could only dream of being half the poet you are.

https://images.gr-assets.com/hostedimages/1416696759ra/12044696.gif

TyrekGoldenspear4 votes

You're very welcome. Glad you liked it. :)

zrWQMdGHtY2 votes

Tyrek the Steven King of the NA boards ;-; (with better endings)

TyrekGoldenspear2 votes

Aww, well you're the Steven King of the EUW boards. :)

It all comes with practice my friend.

zrWQMdGHtY2 votes

If EUW is Turkey and I'm writing 50 shades of gray. maybe you'll be right. Noxian Tale has only 130 views on EUW for 6 months xD plus I'm banned there :D

BladeSingularity2 votes

I don't think my story even got 100 views ... lucky.

zrWQMdGHtY1 votes

Ppl probly missclick that's why I got 100-200 in NA xD But I post it on reddit too, so I gain views from there ;-;

Vizulix1 votes

This is a work of art.

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