Diamond Support Coach! [Karma]

t4JxNr2gszz··1 votes·444 views

Some insight on my knowledge of the game. enjoy!

5 Comments

SilverSquid2 votes

A lot of stuttering, half finished sentences, repeated information and your own yawning make this unnecessarily hard to follow.

t4JxNr2gszz1 votes

thanks for the feedback

SilverSquid1 votes

Wish I could've told you more. Maybe about how to play Karma (most played champ). Maybe I just want to advise you to write a script or to edit the video afterwards. If you want to make a game commentary you need a lot of charisma to be successfull or outstanding. If you actually wanna "coach" someone, you need to maybe talk over someone else's gameplay and highlight mistakes or decisions. But then it should be targeted at them, so you can specifically guide every step to bettering themselves.

If you want to teach everyone, maybe a guide would be better. Or calling it "useful tips for support" but even then it should be more condensed. I really don't know what you were going for here, otherwise my feedback would be better.

But I've written another block of text anyways. sigh I hope it helped a little.

t4JxNr2gszz1 votes

I do the videos in one take after I watch the replay and think about some points. I really should do some formal organized videos about tips and tricks. thanks for the feedback!!

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